VN Ren'Py Having a HARD Time [v0.3.0] [Quadruple-Q]

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I do have a few problems with the characters (SPOILERS!) I understand that Anna's friend is a cougar and Jane's problem posed an unique opportunity for her. I don't see the 'dominant path' as a natural reaction to this - since she is still feeling guilty of raping her best friend. I guess her reaction to blackmail is ok, since her morality might be skewed that way , but I don't see a character guilty in a certain way acting dominant which has already caused a deep fissure in her mentality.
As for the second part, the teacher gave a titjob waayyy too easy imo. Her curiosity might let her give a handjob but going straight to a titjob? What's the point stopping there?
 
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MaK1N

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revtrigger said:
I do have a few problems with the characters (SPOILERS!) I understand that Anna's friend is a cougar and Jane's problem posed an unique opportunity for her. I don't see the 'dominant path' as a natural reaction to this - since she is still feeling guilty of raping her best friend. I guess her reaction to blackmail is ok, since her morality might be skewed that way , but I don't see a character guilty in a certain way acting dominant which has already caused a deep fissure in her mentality.
As for the second part, the teacher gave a titjob waayyy too easy imo. Her curiosity might let her give a handjob but going straight to a titjob? What's the point stopping there?
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about the teacher i think she and her sister know exactly what is happening to Jane .
if you finish the game in the last scene they talked about it as they know something !!
just saying :rolleyes:
 
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vrdude18

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MaK1N said:
hey , i finished the game but i missed this scene , what is it ?
how do i unlock it

by the way the MC look like Jill from being a DIK xD
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Yeah, me too. I haven't been able to unlock that same scene whatever it is.
I love Jill from BAD so playing a MC that looks like her but with a huge cock is awesome!
Totally brilliant!
 
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vrdude18 said:
Yeah, me too. I haven't been able to unlock that same scene whatever it is.
I love Jill from BAD so playing a MC that looks like her but with a huge cock is awesome!
Totally brilliant!
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i thought that too about the cock LUL
 
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Some of the writing seems inconsistent. For example
- Jane and Anna should know each other for all of Jane's life. They live together. Still Jane asks Anna in one scene to tell more about her current life.
- According to Jane, she and Lucas do a lot of DnD roleplaying together, but there are no roleplaying scenes and it is also not an option on weekends.

While the player meets the 30+ characters in the game the first time, Jane is supposed to know most of them for years. Still some dialogs feel like they meet for the first time, too.


About the No-Rape scene :
This scene is controversial.
While it starts as non-consensual sex, it is soon overwritten to show that Marianne actually enjoys the fuck :

Marianne :
Wa- wait...
Fuck
Ooooohh god!!!
Faster...
Aaaaahh
Oh yes!!!
Just like that!
Fuck me!
I'm cu- cumming!!
...

Marianne is overwhelmed by the pleasure of probably the best fuck in her life so far. It is both visible in Marianne's comments as well as her facial expressions during and after the sex. Still the story continues with the artificial drama that Jane feels guilty for "raping" her BFF and is overwhelmed by her guilt, completely ignoring Marianne ... For BFFs I would have expected Marianne to give Jane at least a hug to show her that she is ok and to comfort her, mayybe even take her home. (They were quite close in previous events around the pub.) Instead the story continues with more drama when Jane goes home, spending the weekend with other activities instead of meeting with Marianne and setting things right.

Jane's guilt drama would be consistent if it were a real rape scene (against Marianne's will), but this would probably be uncomfortable for most players to see. So overall it's kind of good for the game that Marianne was introduced as a more slutty and open character and that the rape scene is immediately turned into kind of aggressive consensual sex, but the consequence is that Jane's rape reaction now is completely inconsistent (artificial drama) and hard to watch. I am not a fan of rape nor artificial drama.
Jane's reaction would be more plausible if she would consider the whole extent of what happened :
- the experiment failed, the lab equipment was destroyed
- she and Marianne could have get killed or injured, some of her clothing including heels is destroyed
- her body was modified with cock and balls (-> monster)
- she is possessed by some "yellow" eyed entity and witnesses that this entity uses her body to have brute sex with Marianne.
All these points should be enough for Jane to be shocked even after discussing the "rape" with Marianne ... so after Marianne's reassurance the single focus on rape seems strange and she should be more worried eg about the possession and her new monster tool. Furthermore it feels really strange to have a break of many days over the weekend before seeing Marianne again. I guess that Marianne would be very curious and would like to go over the failed experiment and check the body changes in detail asap.
 
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revtrigger said:
I do have a few problems with the characters (SPOILERS!) I understand that Anna's friend is a cougar and Jane's problem posed an unique opportunity for her. I don't see the 'dominant path' as a natural reaction to this - since she is still feeling guilty of raping her best friend. I guess her reaction to blackmail is ok, since her morality might be skewed that way , but I don't see a character guilty in a certain way acting dominant which has already caused a deep fissure in her mentality.
As for the second part, the teacher gave a titjob waayyy too easy imo. Her curiosity might let her give a handjob but going straight to a titjob? What's the point stopping there?
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The writing is not very serious/realistic/grounded (except the attempt at rape drama). There's a lot of porn logic.
 
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Ren'Py Version: Ren'Py 8.1.1.23052601+nightly
Wed Jun 14 12:51:28 2023
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TLBRF

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f96zonetrooper said:
The missing location :
After 2nd weekend and after messaging Rachel, Jane and Eve wait for the bus. Back view.
*located left from Eve's butt when she says "Hahaha, no I'm just excited to meet new people!"

This is shortly before the Ninja scene.
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Thanks for the clarification. It's definitely a puzzle for sure. I do find it helpful to use hide the text key to sometimes catch those pieces out there...because it also hides them, and redoing the whole process repeatedly makes them visible...it's like a blinking eye. But then you gotta scan the whole scene for that to realize if something's changed. Anyway, this episode was not too bad at hiding those fellas, not like the first episode at least. Predictable is the word.
 
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f96zonetrooper said:
You have to actually send the photo to Lucas, not just attempt to :
> "OMG stop sending me cat vids!"
> "No they aren't! These are titties."
> SEND the photo

Some of the achievements do not trigger immediately but with a small delay, eg after closing the phone or after opening the phone and entering the achievement menu.
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Yeah I also left the scene with Hannah getting fucked in the change room so I went back watched and then did the photo to Lucas and got it to trigger the achievement. Thanks for your assistance.
 
MaK1N

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f96zonetrooper said:
You have to actually send the photo to Lucas, not just attempt to :
> "OMG stop sending me cat vids!"
> "No they aren't! These are titties."
> SEND the photo

Some of the achievements do not trigger immediately but with a small delay, eg after closing the phone or after opening the phone and entering the achievement menu.
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nice what about jesus , what's wrong with you achievement
 
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