Fixed, thank you! There actually aren't any missing pictures, the repeat scene was breaking a switch.
I take it this is why full busts were showng during the scene?
Anyway, here are the rest of the typos:
11)
"You're" should be "Your"
12)
"friends house" should be "friend's house" (I assume both are staying with the same friend)
13)
Either "That's cool" or "That sounds cool"
14)
That should be "to remain"
15)
"Make" should be "Makes"
And that's all. I didn't notice any during the main quest.
By the way, what is the trigger for the threesome with Emi and Darren? For me it triggered right after the Ava scene.