VN Ren'Py Abandoned Heart Gears [v0.58 Public] [Exalor]

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Mormont

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Seriously, if you played until that scene, just play a little more and accept to go to her room that she explains.
Yeah, I got there in the end (y) Very nice game I hadn't played it before but so far pretty enjoyable and a nice choice in girls.
 
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exalorll

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yeah that would be good i think !

Thanks Exalorll !!
Rename options will already be available in the walkthrough version, when it is released. Thanks for the feedback.

I don't think incest is needed, I mean the story makes perfect sense without it. My two cents
I agree, I can't even think of a way for the girls to be MC's biological sisters without making the old man look like an asshole. But it's a porn game, I understand when people ask for harem or incest.

Yeah, I got there in the end (y) Very nice game I hadn't played it before but so far pretty enjoyable and a nice choice in girls.
Thanks ^^
 
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tigerdiamond

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This is probably a lazy way to deal with it but I am considering the romantic routes as uniques. The player will be able to play them simultaneously, but will see the end of them separated. Perhaps with a harem ending, but it is still not certain.
Anyway, you could only get romantically involved with just one of the girls, I try to make it pretty obvious what choice leads to it. Don't worry, there are no bad endings.
Thanks for the feedback, I hope my answer is satisfactory..
I acknowledge that in a normal romantic situation you'd only be able to pick one, but the lazy part of me is always angry when a game makes me play multiple times to see the content with all of the girls.
 

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when watching TV with Alice & Anna, Anna calls us MC instead of our name

Later, when Alice comes to our room to ask if we ill take Anna away from her, we call Anna by Alice's name.

unrelated: Can dev's please for the love of god stop making the game open web pages! I'm so sick of having random porn games showing up in the history of my main browser because of it. Also it'd have been nice to know the ver was about to end, I hadn't saved in a while and now I'll have to skip through everything to make a save for next ver.
 
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Spfjolietjake

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Rename options will already be available in the walkthrough version, when it is released. Thanks for the feedback.


I agree, I can't even think of a way for the girls to be MC's biological sisters without making the old man look like an asshole. But it's a porn game, I understand when people ask for harem or incest.


Thanks ^^
Besides tugging at my... um heart this vn really impressed me cause it had a great set up without landlady and tenant headaches. I'm not against fictional incest, if it makes you more money by all means. But no matter what keep your vision as much as you can. Personally I would change nothing! any "flaws" adds to the charm.

Seriously hope this goes the distance and allows you to make more.
 

exalorll

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I acknowledge that in a normal romantic situation you'd only be able to pick one, but the lazy part of me is always angry when a game makes me play multiple times to see the content with all of the girls.
Exactly what I think. That is why players can play the routes of all the girls at the same time until the time when the routes will become unique. That way he doesn't have to repeat the game again, just save on the final selection.

when watching TV with Alice & Anna, Anna calls us MC instead of our name

Later, when Alice comes to our room to ask if we ill take Anna away from her, we call Anna by Alice's name.

unrelated: Can dev's please for the love of god stop making the game open web pages! I'm so sick of having random porn games showing up in the history of my main browser because of it. Also it'd have been nice to know the ver was about to end, I hadn't saved in a while and now I'll have to skip through everything to make a save for next ver.
Thanks for the bug report, this helps a lot.
The updates only have one game day, they usually end after the dream with the brother. A safe place to save is when selecting extra scenes.

Besides tugging at my... um heart this vn really impressed me cause it had a great set up without landlady and tenant headaches. I'm not against fictional incest, if it makes you more money by all means. But no matter what keep your vision as much as you can. Personally I would change nothing! any "flaws" adds to the charm.

Seriously hope this goes the distance and allows you to make more.
I'm not really going to add incest to the game, I'm going to give players a chance to do it themselves.
And don't worry, I won't change anything in the game unless I think it will improve it.
By the way, thanks for always commenting on the game, positive comments like yours make my day (do you have the expression "make my day" in your language?).
 

Spfjolietjake

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Exactly what I think. That is why players can play the routes of all the girls at the same time until the time when the routes will become unique. That way he doesn't have to repeat the game again, just save on the final selection.


Thanks for the bug report, this helps a lot.
The updates only have one game day, they usually end after the dream with the brother. A safe place to save is when selecting extra scenes.


I'm not really going to add incest to the game, I'm going to give players a chance to do it themselves.
And don't worry, I won't change anything in the game unless I think it will improve it.
By the way, thanks for always commenting on the game, positive comments like yours make my day (do you have the expression "make my day" in your language?).
Yes we do, and honestly your vn has made my day a couple of times already so I'm glad in lieu of financial support I can try to give moral support. You do have a great vn. Already in my top 10 favorites. Thank you. Looking forward to more :)
 
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faradhii

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Enjoyable game so far. I've never been a huge boobs fan, but Eliza's "pervy/shy" vibe is nice. Luna is currently my favorite.

1) Hoping for a harem option because that's my thing (and pregnancy).

2) Is the game getting a loli tag with the twins? I'm not for or against, to each their own, Ecchi Sensei is an awesome game for that.

Keep up the good work!
 

tigerdiamond

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Exactly what I think. That is why players can play the routes of all the girls at the same time until the time when the routes will become unique. That way he doesn't have to repeat the game again, just save on the final selection.


Thanks for the bug report, this helps a lot.
The updates only have one game day, they usually end after the dream with the brother. A safe place to save is when selecting extra scenes.


I'm not really going to add incest to the game, I'm going to give players a chance to do it themselves.
And don't worry, I won't change anything in the game unless I think it will improve it.
By the way, thanks for always commenting on the game, positive comments like yours make my day (do you have the expression "make my day" in your language?).
Good to know I won't be punished for being a slut, individual endings is a fine compromise.
I'll try to remember about the brother dream signaling the end of the update.

Also, I'm sorry, I was so miffed about the patreon getting opened in my "not porn" browser that I forgot to say how much I love your game. The story is actually interesting (a big thing for me to say atm as my brain has been completely uninterested in story of late), and the girls are all adorable. I too am not really a fan of the giant knockers, but Eliza I think has the cutest face out of all of them, so I love her.
 
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exalorll

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Enjoyable game so far. I've never been a huge boobs fan, but Eliza's "pervy/shy" vibe is nice. Luna is currently my favorite.

1) Hoping for a harem option because that's my thing (and pregnancy).

2) Is the game getting a loli tag with the twins? I'm not for or against, to each their own, Ecchi Sensei is an awesome game for that.

Keep up the good work!
Thanks for the comment, and about your points:
1)Harem maybe, it will depend on the patrons, in any case it will take a long time to decide. Pregnancy will probably only be a mention in the post-ending game.
2)Again it will depend on the patrons, at the end of each update there are non-canonical fap scenes that are decided by the patrons. The MC will not have sexual relations with the twins canonically, but perhaps the patrons will vote for there to be a non-canonical one.
 

Naxos

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exalorll thank you for the game. Really liking it so far.


ShaddyModda , I tagged you too as, I've picked up a few errors where the wrong person is tagged as speaking. As I'm using the mod not sure if it's the mod or base game. Like when the MC tells the lawyer he'll return the favour and go down on her, it's tagged as "your thoughts"


Back to the game, I don't have anything negative to say, the "engrish" is bearable and certainly not the worst out there.

Would be really nice to have a harem as others have said.
 
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Naxos

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Yes we do, and honestly your vn has made my day a couple of times already so I'm glad in lieu of financial support I can try to give moral support. You do have a great vn. Already in my top 10 favorites. Thank you. Looking forward to more :)
I was going to call you a selfish bastard for not sharing this with me, but I realised you did, back in ver 1 already.
 
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exalorll

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exalorll thank you for the game. Really liking it so far.


ShaddyModda , I tagged you too as, I've picked up a few errors where the wrong person is tagged as speaking. As I'm using the mod not sure if it's the mod or base game. Like when the MC tells the lawyer he'll return the favour and go down on her, it's tagged as "your thoughts"


Back to the game, I don't have anything negative to say, the "engrish" is bearable and certainly not the worst out there.

Would be really nice to have a harem as others have said.
Thanks for playing it.
About the error, my fault. You said it happens in more places, do you remember where?
 

Naxos

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Thanks for playing it.
About the error, my fault. You said it happens in more places, do you remember where?
The ones I remember...

When the MC gets and erection at the table the first night and Eliza asks who caused it, it's tagged as Anna, but she's alseep.

Also on the conversation with Clara about Alice sleeping over, I think there was one or two tagged incorrectly there.
 
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ShaddyGames

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exalorll thank you for the game. Really liking it so far.


ShaddyModda , I tagged you too as, I've picked up a few errors where the wrong person is tagged as speaking. As I'm using the mod not sure if it's the mod or base game. Like when the MC tells the lawyer he'll return the favour and go down on her, it's tagged as "your thoughts"


Back to the game, I don't have anything negative to say, the "engrish" is bearable and certainly not the worst out there.

Would be really nice to have a harem as others have said.
I never touch speakers tags unless i happen to notice a mistake and fix it, so it would be in the case script. I haven't actually gone through this update yet either other then skipping through to verify the mod, and i haven't replayed with the new base scripts so i didn't notice them myself.
 
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