I think the vn is promising, but I wish that it wasn't so similar to Queen Bee. It's fine as an inspiration (hipocrital childhood friend, transformation MC to alpha, etc) but not almost identical characters.
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1. Don't touch the preferences, they shot the game down.
2. I am fine with playing a weak MC that just get's pushed over by most, but those three "bullies" are a joke. And it doesn't help that the dialogues feel like they got recorded on the special bus... half the time I am like "wtf are these retards even talking about." I mean, I get the gist of it but... oh boy.
3. Renders are ok, though.
4. Sound is the typical porn sound, sadly it is loud until you work on that outside the VN - which you must because: see 1.
In this state a 2/5 at best.
2. I am fine with playing a weak MC that just get's pushed over by most, but those three "bullies" are a joke. And it doesn't help that the dialogues feel like they got recorded on the special bus... half the time I am like "wtf are these retards even talking about." I mean, I get the gist of it but... oh boy.
3. Renders are ok, though.
4. Sound is the typical porn sound, sadly it is loud until you work on that outside the VN - which you must because: see 1.
In this state a 2/5 at best.
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If it was, it'd explain the grammar of the overview. Or lack of it. Which is always a red flag in a written medium.
Kudos! My thoughts exactly after reading. That is very popular manga. If the dev is plan to imitate that, it will be interesting to see the amount of whining this thread gonna have after those 'mother' scenes. I guess mods gonna have a lot on their hands with how the amount of hate people are giving already lol.
It's not a manga, it's a manhwa, and calling it really popular is a biig overstatement. It is infamous yes, becuase it took a 100 chapters to get out of the NTR fuckfest and a 100 later it went back to it again. I wouldn't worry about the whiners though, the majority will silently drop this way before it gets to that part, just like Landlords Little Daughter.
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I came for the NTR but even I want the option to tell her to fuck off.
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Just make it full on NTR honestly, pretending to be "optional" when it's clearly designed for NTR is just asking for thread wars, whining, and ultimately failing.
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SORRY IN ADVANCE BUT MY CAPS LOCK IS STUCK ON ALL CAPS SO I AM NOT MEANING TO YELL AT ANYBODY LOL!! SO NOW....
HERE WE GO YET AGAIN WITH THE SAME DUMB AS DETAILS OF THE MC AND THEN THE OTHERS WHO HE FOR SOME REASON IS AND HAS BECOME SO NORMALLY THE GOTO PLOT AND WHY THE FUCK FOR WHEN IT HAS BEEN OVERDONE FAR TOO MANY TIMES ALREADY AND THEY GO FROM BAD TO FML!!!
NO SURPRISES HERE, HERE WE HAVE YET ANOTHER ONE OF THOSE GOOD OL GAME BASED ON MY EVERYDAY LIFE OF A LOSER THAT SHARES LIFE EXPERIENCES DURING THE DAYS AND AT NIGHTS THE DREAM OF HOW IT WILL NEVER BE WHEN I NEVER WILL BECOME THE GUY IN MY DREAMS AND WILL FINALLY SCORE SOME PUSSY! NO WONDERS NEEDED JUST GIVE IT 5 MINS AND YOU TOO WILL WANT TO SHIT ON MC SO IT IS EASY TO GET WHY THIS GIRL TREATS MC LIKE THE LOSER HE IS AND KNOWS SHE CAN HAVE OR DO ANYTHING FROM THE PATHETIC TURD CAUSE CLEARLY TO HER YOU ARE A WORTHLESS PLAY TOY & EVEN IF YOU BEAT THE PUNK BITCH'S ASS, WHY WOULD YOU SETTLE FOR THIS SHITTY WHORE WHO SAT BY OR EVEN JOINS IN ON TALKING SHIT WITH THE SCUM! SHE IS NOT WORTH A 2ND LOOK AND THEN THE CUNT WHORE COFFEE SLUT IS STRAIGHT INTO CALLING MC A PERVERT SO IT IS A KNOWN STORY TO ALL AROUND YOU THAT YOU ARE A USELESS PERV WITH NO SPINE AND NOBODY WILL EVER LOOK AT YOU BUT A PUNK OR TREAT YOU DIFFERENTLY AND WHY SHOULD THEY?
WHY CAN'T WE EVER HAVE THIS SAME SHIT STORY START OFF WAY BETTER RIGHT AWAY OR NOT EVEN START LIKE THIS AT ALL!!! I WISH FOR ONCE IF WE WOULD GET A GAME STARTING LIKE THIS BUT WHEN SHE COMES TO ASK IF YOU ARE UPSET YOU BEFORE SHE CAN EVEN FINISH THE QUESTION YOU SNATCH HER UP BY HER HAIR AND PULLED INTO YOUR ROOM AND EITHER CHAIR OR BED SHE BE PUT. BITCH IS HOW YOU WILL RESPOND TO HER YOU TELL HER AND NO MORE NAME FOR YOU BITCH IT IS AND HOW THE FUCK YOU THINK NI AM AFTER YOU AND THOSE FUCKIN LOSERS DID TODAY? SHUT UP! AS FOR YOUR GIFT YOU CALL IT, WELL FUCK YOUR GIFT AND FROM HERE ON OUT i WILL LET YOU COME GET WHATEVER I GIVE YOU AND YOU WILL COME EVERYDAY TIL I TELL YOU NOT TO. SO TODAY I WILL FUCK YOU SINCE YOU USED ME FOR SO LONG NOW I WILL USE YOU AND YOUR SLUTTY BODY TO MAKE UP FOR IT OR ELSE YOU WILL GET A REALLY BIG SURPRIZE TOMOOROW IN FRONTB OF ALL WHEN THEY HEAR HOW YOU COME OVER EVERY NIGHT TO PLAY WITH MY COCK AND THINK I WONT BUT THESE VIDEOS FROM THE LAST 3 TIMES WILL EASILY SHOW MORE THAN ONCE IS NOT THE CASE IF YOU DENY WHAT I SAY...... YEP SO GET THE FUCK NAKED AND AFTER I FUCK YOU BETTER THAN YOUR SMALL DICK AND REALLY SHIT BF OF YOURS YOU WILL LEAVE HERE WELL FUCKED AND WILL LOOK FORWARD TO NEXT TIME BUT LITTLE DOES SHE KNOW......
THAT IS JUST A TEASER OF HOW OR WHERE YOU COULD TAKE THAT STORY BUT WHEN SHE COMES FOR A FEW DAYS AND SHE IS THINKING HOW GOOD IT ALL IS, AFTER A FEW GOOD FUCKS WHERE SHE IS LIKE THIS WAY AFTER 4 OR 5 DAYS OIPEN THE DOOR AND STOP HER FROM COMING IN AND WHEN SHE GASPS AND SAYS WHATS UP JUST SHRUG AND SAY I DONT WANT TO FUCK YOU TODAY I ACTUALLY HAVE A DATE. MAYBE IF I DONT FUCK HER MAYBE THEN I WILL FUCK U BUT IF NOT DONT THINK YOU NOT COME HERE TOMORROW BITCH. YOU ARE FAR FROM DONE BEING USED COMPARED TO ALL THE YEARS I WAS ONLY GOOD ENOUGH FOR ALL I COULD BE BEHIND CLOSED DOORS. OHH NOT WHAT YOU EXPECTED HUH??? WELL IT AINT SHIT FROM HOW I WAS USED UP TO THE 1ST TIME YOU ACTED LIKE I WAS A LOSER WITH ALL UR BUDDIES THAT TIME AND THEN LATER CAME TO MAKE YOURSELF FEEL BETTER NOT ME BY SAYING ITS JUST LIKE THAT NOW BUT LATER IT WILL BE DIFFERENT BUT WORSE WAS TOO COME NOT ANY BETTER UNLESS YOU JOINING THEM IS WHEN U MEANT LATER ON, YEP BITCH TAKE WHAT YOU JUST FELT AND ADD 3X NO 5X THE SHITTY FEELINGS YOU JUST FELT AND STILL YOU WONT FEEL NOTHING LIKE I HAVE BEEN DONE BY YOU,BUT AT LEAST YOU HAD A WARNING FOR IT UNLIKE MYSELF WHEN I WAS SHATTERED THE VERY 1ST TIME IT WAS DONE TO ME AND WHEN YOU CAME I THOUGHT YOU WAS GONNA SAY HOW SORRY YOU WERE AND WE WOULD BE COOL NOT NEED THEM OTHERS BUT THAT WAS JUST ME THINKING LIKE A FUCKING DUMB MORON CAUSE YOU ARE WORSE THAN THE OTHERS! NO THEY DIDN'T HIDE BEHIND MASKS, THEY JUST DID IT BUT YOU ARE A FUCKIN LOW LIFE CUNT WHO GOT BOTH SIDES SO NOW THINK ON THAT AND HOW IT WILL BE TIL I DECIDE WHEN TO THROW MY TOY AWAY! I HAVE MUCH TO DO WITH THAT WHORE TIL I THROW HER AWAY OR JUST MAYBE I DONT WANT SHIT FROM YOU CAUSE IF I WAS TO DOP THIS I WOULD BE LIKE YOU AND NOBODY EVER WOULD WANT.......YES WANT TO BE THAT CRUEL SHIT FREAK YOU HAVE BEEN WOULD THEY NOW FUCK OFF CUM DUMPSTER BEFORE A REAL WOMAN SEES ME WITH THE TRASHY SLUT WHO JUMPS ON WHOEVER COCK SHE CAN GAIN FROM CAUSE I DONT WANT TO BE SEEN WITH YOU AND BE THAT GUY WITH HER! BUT HERE TOMORROW OR YOU CAN SEE WHAT HAPPENS BITCH!
MAYBE SOMEDAY THIS WHOLE CUCK MC IDEA WILL FADE OUT OR MAYBE NOT I JUST DONT GET IT AND WHY SO MANY DECIDE IT IS GOOD MATERIAL TO USE AT ALL BUT IT IS WHAT IT IS GOOD LUCK WITH THE PROJECTS BUT NOT ME WITH ANOTHER CUCK ME STORY! ONE IS FAR TOO MANY
HERE WE GO YET AGAIN WITH THE SAME DUMB AS DETAILS OF THE MC AND THEN THE OTHERS WHO HE FOR SOME REASON IS AND HAS BECOME SO NORMALLY THE GOTO PLOT AND WHY THE FUCK FOR WHEN IT HAS BEEN OVERDONE FAR TOO MANY TIMES ALREADY AND THEY GO FROM BAD TO FML!!!
NO SURPRISES HERE, HERE WE HAVE YET ANOTHER ONE OF THOSE GOOD OL GAME BASED ON MY EVERYDAY LIFE OF A LOSER THAT SHARES LIFE EXPERIENCES DURING THE DAYS AND AT NIGHTS THE DREAM OF HOW IT WILL NEVER BE WHEN I NEVER WILL BECOME THE GUY IN MY DREAMS AND WILL FINALLY SCORE SOME PUSSY! NO WONDERS NEEDED JUST GIVE IT 5 MINS AND YOU TOO WILL WANT TO SHIT ON MC SO IT IS EASY TO GET WHY THIS GIRL TREATS MC LIKE THE LOSER HE IS AND KNOWS SHE CAN HAVE OR DO ANYTHING FROM THE PATHETIC TURD CAUSE CLEARLY TO HER YOU ARE A WORTHLESS PLAY TOY & EVEN IF YOU BEAT THE PUNK BITCH'S ASS, WHY WOULD YOU SETTLE FOR THIS SHITTY WHORE WHO SAT BY OR EVEN JOINS IN ON TALKING SHIT WITH THE SCUM! SHE IS NOT WORTH A 2ND LOOK AND THEN THE CUNT WHORE COFFEE SLUT IS STRAIGHT INTO CALLING MC A PERVERT SO IT IS A KNOWN STORY TO ALL AROUND YOU THAT YOU ARE A USELESS PERV WITH NO SPINE AND NOBODY WILL EVER LOOK AT YOU BUT A PUNK OR TREAT YOU DIFFERENTLY AND WHY SHOULD THEY?
WHY CAN'T WE EVER HAVE THIS SAME SHIT STORY START OFF WAY BETTER RIGHT AWAY OR NOT EVEN START LIKE THIS AT ALL!!! I WISH FOR ONCE IF WE WOULD GET A GAME STARTING LIKE THIS BUT WHEN SHE COMES TO ASK IF YOU ARE UPSET YOU BEFORE SHE CAN EVEN FINISH THE QUESTION YOU SNATCH HER UP BY HER HAIR AND PULLED INTO YOUR ROOM AND EITHER CHAIR OR BED SHE BE PUT. BITCH IS HOW YOU WILL RESPOND TO HER YOU TELL HER AND NO MORE NAME FOR YOU BITCH IT IS AND HOW THE FUCK YOU THINK NI AM AFTER YOU AND THOSE FUCKIN LOSERS DID TODAY? SHUT UP! AS FOR YOUR GIFT YOU CALL IT, WELL FUCK YOUR GIFT AND FROM HERE ON OUT i WILL LET YOU COME GET WHATEVER I GIVE YOU AND YOU WILL COME EVERYDAY TIL I TELL YOU NOT TO. SO TODAY I WILL FUCK YOU SINCE YOU USED ME FOR SO LONG NOW I WILL USE YOU AND YOUR SLUTTY BODY TO MAKE UP FOR IT OR ELSE YOU WILL GET A REALLY BIG SURPRIZE TOMOOROW IN FRONTB OF ALL WHEN THEY HEAR HOW YOU COME OVER EVERY NIGHT TO PLAY WITH MY COCK AND THINK I WONT BUT THESE VIDEOS FROM THE LAST 3 TIMES WILL EASILY SHOW MORE THAN ONCE IS NOT THE CASE IF YOU DENY WHAT I SAY...... YEP SO GET THE FUCK NAKED AND AFTER I FUCK YOU BETTER THAN YOUR SMALL DICK AND REALLY SHIT BF OF YOURS YOU WILL LEAVE HERE WELL FUCKED AND WILL LOOK FORWARD TO NEXT TIME BUT LITTLE DOES SHE KNOW......
THAT IS JUST A TEASER OF HOW OR WHERE YOU COULD TAKE THAT STORY BUT WHEN SHE COMES FOR A FEW DAYS AND SHE IS THINKING HOW GOOD IT ALL IS, AFTER A FEW GOOD FUCKS WHERE SHE IS LIKE THIS WAY AFTER 4 OR 5 DAYS OIPEN THE DOOR AND STOP HER FROM COMING IN AND WHEN SHE GASPS AND SAYS WHATS UP JUST SHRUG AND SAY I DONT WANT TO FUCK YOU TODAY I ACTUALLY HAVE A DATE. MAYBE IF I DONT FUCK HER MAYBE THEN I WILL FUCK U BUT IF NOT DONT THINK YOU NOT COME HERE TOMORROW BITCH. YOU ARE FAR FROM DONE BEING USED COMPARED TO ALL THE YEARS I WAS ONLY GOOD ENOUGH FOR ALL I COULD BE BEHIND CLOSED DOORS. OHH NOT WHAT YOU EXPECTED HUH??? WELL IT AINT SHIT FROM HOW I WAS USED UP TO THE 1ST TIME YOU ACTED LIKE I WAS A LOSER WITH ALL UR BUDDIES THAT TIME AND THEN LATER CAME TO MAKE YOURSELF FEEL BETTER NOT ME BY SAYING ITS JUST LIKE THAT NOW BUT LATER IT WILL BE DIFFERENT BUT WORSE WAS TOO COME NOT ANY BETTER UNLESS YOU JOINING THEM IS WHEN U MEANT LATER ON, YEP BITCH TAKE WHAT YOU JUST FELT AND ADD 3X NO 5X THE SHITTY FEELINGS YOU JUST FELT AND STILL YOU WONT FEEL NOTHING LIKE I HAVE BEEN DONE BY YOU,BUT AT LEAST YOU HAD A WARNING FOR IT UNLIKE MYSELF WHEN I WAS SHATTERED THE VERY 1ST TIME IT WAS DONE TO ME AND WHEN YOU CAME I THOUGHT YOU WAS GONNA SAY HOW SORRY YOU WERE AND WE WOULD BE COOL NOT NEED THEM OTHERS BUT THAT WAS JUST ME THINKING LIKE A FUCKING DUMB MORON CAUSE YOU ARE WORSE THAN THE OTHERS! NO THEY DIDN'T HIDE BEHIND MASKS, THEY JUST DID IT BUT YOU ARE A FUCKIN LOW LIFE CUNT WHO GOT BOTH SIDES SO NOW THINK ON THAT AND HOW IT WILL BE TIL I DECIDE WHEN TO THROW MY TOY AWAY! I HAVE MUCH TO DO WITH THAT WHORE TIL I THROW HER AWAY OR JUST MAYBE I DONT WANT SHIT FROM YOU CAUSE IF I WAS TO DOP THIS I WOULD BE LIKE YOU AND NOBODY EVER WOULD WANT.......YES WANT TO BE THAT CRUEL SHIT FREAK YOU HAVE BEEN WOULD THEY NOW FUCK OFF CUM DUMPSTER BEFORE A REAL WOMAN SEES ME WITH THE TRASHY SLUT WHO JUMPS ON WHOEVER COCK SHE CAN GAIN FROM CAUSE I DONT WANT TO BE SEEN WITH YOU AND BE THAT GUY WITH HER! BUT HERE TOMORROW OR YOU CAN SEE WHAT HAPPENS BITCH!
MAYBE SOMEDAY THIS WHOLE CUCK MC IDEA WILL FADE OUT OR MAYBE NOT I JUST DONT GET IT AND WHY SO MANY DECIDE IT IS GOOD MATERIAL TO USE AT ALL BUT IT IS WHAT IT IS GOOD LUCK WITH THE PROJECTS BUT NOT ME WITH ANOTHER CUCK ME STORY! ONE IS FAR TOO MANY
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"Tom has to make a choice, either to continue being who he is or to be who he wants to be! How will this choice change his life?"
With this phrase it is implied that this is more than an "optional content" it is going to be a route, if so I do not recommend playing this unless you are a fan of NTR since otherwise with each update you will lose content.
At least I warned you from the beginning and that's why I wish you luck, but I'll pass.
With this phrase it is implied that this is more than an "optional content" it is going to be a route, if so I do not recommend playing this unless you are a fan of NTR since otherwise with each update you will lose content.
At least I warned you from the beginning and that's why I wish you luck, but I'll pass.
Renders look gorgeous, so much so I advise dev dial it down or it won't be sustainable. Too much elaborate lighting and camera changes will wear you out.
Dialogue needs work, is pretty 'engrishy' right now.
If not, then there's no reason to worry.
Dialogue needs work, is pretty 'engrishy' right now.
I'm not whining or warring, are you?
If not, then there's no reason to worry.
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Alright, I thought this looked familar cause I read something similar. And then I come on F95 to see everyone confirm my suspicion that it's a Daz version of Queen Bee lol.
The slutty landlord daughter, the villain old man, the bullies, the powerless MC. Even the the scenes are identical.
The slutty landlord daughter, the villain old man, the bullies, the powerless MC. Even the the scenes are identical.
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Seriously? I had my doubts too after reading the synopsis and the comments. But I was hoping this would be different and turn out good from just looking at the renders. But nah...ntr optional also doesn't sound right for something that follows Queen Bee's storyline lol
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You're right, making a game where the MC is going to have to block an idiot's cock for the entire game with the excuse that it's because of the "plot" is absurd, it better be 100% and ready targeting a specific audience Also for those who whine about it being "optional" that only means that with each update the worthwhile content will be reduced in an attempt to please everyone.
But that's not how the dev wants it.
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Honestly no idea why he would even make a game based on Queen Bee the story was trash.
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Queen bee ?, Hope that fat guy also joins the fun with Olivia in this game 
This. Stick to one game at a time, nobody feels like waiting 2 years for a game to progress as far as other games progress in one year. This looked interesting until I read that, I'll pass. Don't feel like getting invested in another Summer's Gone situation. Game takes so long to progress it feels abandoned.
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Well, once I got the menus working, not a bad start of this game.
Thank you so very much for this, and I will be looking forward for more!!!
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Thank you so very much for this, and I will be looking forward for more!!!
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