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HansDampf788

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Start a new game, name MC and wtf? It starts in the middle of a convo that we have no clue about? I REALLY think you need to add the intro back. Because right now it's all "What the fucking Hell?"
What you play in this version happens befor the first release in the timeline, you see why the MC was in studying at a college in another city. The bigger question is what will happen now will it have the same story as the first release or will that change.
 

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What you play in this version happens befor the first release in the timeline, you see why the MC was in studying at a college in another city. The bigger question is what will happen now will it have the same story as the first release or will that change.
Well, if he's rewriting and removing, he needs to start it from the beginning. Anyway, I think I'll pass on this and wish the dev well.
 

F85King

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with the new rebuild the game is nothing special and I dont like it anymore.. so sad.. and he used free DAZ Standard Models.. all girls looking like the same girl in different ages..
 
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Cirdon

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This was a complete rewrite. It makes no sense with what came before, so I hope the Dev has some clue about a totally new direction. If I somehow have to go through 4 years of college with visits and video calls I'm going to stop playing.

Yet if we jump to his return from college and no feelings have changed and no one looks a single day older, that's also going to be horrible.

I don't see a single good way to move this game forward in any way.

DEV No matter what direction you take:
GET A PROOFREADER FOR YOUR SCRIPT.

American English never uses ?. to end a question, just ?

"It's very difficult for her to let us out"

NOT
"It's very difficult for she to let us out."

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BenIsland

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Start a new game, name MC and wtf? It starts in the middle of a convo that we have no clue about? I REALLY think you need to add the intro back. Because right now it's all "What the fucking Hell?"
This isn't exactly Sherlock Holmes story so you get into it pretty quickly. In 30 sec you know what's goin on, you and your sis are sneaking off to a party. Does it really need an intro?
 
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Leyequois

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Why is it that 90% of the games that come out, even the ones that look like they might be good, have cows instead of women? I get it that big boobs are enticing for most, I mean, if I had Dee Dee Lynn, for example, I would go crazy, but these characters are just too much, their udders are half the body and so unenticing, why can't games have regular B or C size, what does people see in them? Gross
 

Elasstommer

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This was a complete rewrite. It makes no sense with what came before, so I hope the Dev has some clue about a totally new direction. If I somehow have to go through 4 years of college with visits and video calls I'm going to stop playing.

Yet if we jump to his return from college and no feelings have changed and no one looks a single day older, that's also going to be horrible.

I don't see a single good way to move this game forward in any way.

DEV No matter what direction you take:
GET A PROOFREADER FOR YOUR SCRIPT.

American English never uses ?. to end a question, just ?

"It's very difficult for her to let us out"

NOT
"It's very difficult for she to let us out."

and

Compliment

not

Cumpliment
I do proofreading for this game, and I'm not sure where this version comes from -- in my edited version none of these problems exist. I did leave the question mark ahead of an ellipsis, which is a questionable choice, but removed all instances of ?. and !.
 
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eddie987

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This was a complete rewrite. It makes no sense with what came before, so I hope the Dev has some clue about a totally new direction. If I somehow have to go through 4 years of college with visits and video calls I'm going to stop playing.

Yet if we jump to his return from college and no feelings have changed and no one looks a single day older, that's also going to be horrible.

I don't see a single good way to move this game forward in any way.
There's always the most common/cliche way in porn games for the MC to return home. The uncle dies in a horrible accident and the MC has to go back to help his family out because he's now the man of the house or because they just have to sell the apartment.

It started well, I prefer the VN version, even if it had less content that the sandbox one, but after that ending I have to agree, I don't see a good way to move the story forward.
 

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This isn't exactly Sherlock Holmes story so you get into it pretty quickly. In 30 sec you know what's goin on, you and your sis are sneaking off to a party. Does it really need an intro?
Actually, it needs an entire story. Start, middle and end.(Eventually) Not just start in the middle of a convo. The dev is either lazy or as some have said doesn't know what he's doing. This is supposed to be a rewrite. Well, rewrite from the start.
 

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You know what would make this update to OP even BETTER?!!? :love::love::love::love:
GUESS WHAT I AM GOING TO SAY....(signature hint hint)
 

s4msepi0l

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The switch from sandbox was a mistake, why even play a game if you don't want to do anything? Just watch porn instead
 

Cirdon

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I do proofreading for this game, and I'm not sure where this version comes from -- in my edited version none of these problems exist. I did leave the question mark ahead of an ellipsis, which is a questionable choice, but removed all instances of ?. and !.
So you're saying you corrected all this, and the Dev chose not to use any of your corrections?
 
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