RPGM Completed Henteria Chronicles Ch. 2 : The Law of the Tribe [Update 16] [N_taii]

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sfoMMA85

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Yea just running around doing quests that dont even say what to do. No pay off either. Literally no hentai at all lol. Just seems like an endless stream of quests. I might have to give it a go again though.
N_taii will implement a skip intro button soon.
 

The_fallen_dragon

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check this summary I made out. There are a lot of recommendations also for netori. You saying "games only without cuck mc" sounds like you want to play some netori if I understand you correct.
When you download the game it comes with ave files for each scene, just start with the first one and go from there.
 

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Wow, I come here every day several times a day (not always to answer because I don't always have the time, but at least to check on new comments), but I haven't been notified about any of the new comments on this thread in over a week, and I just realized the new ending has been leaked on Tuesday. That's a bit overwhelming and saddening at the same time.
Anyway, I'm sorry for not answering your comments, I didn't even know they had been posted. I'll keep your feedback in mind. I keep mis-evaluating the amount of hatred people hold for the antagonists, so I guess their demise doesn't come off as "brutal" enough. Then again, since I was the one who created them from scratch, gave them a personality, a purpose and motivations, I can never hate them, so it's always a bit complicated to really make them suffer as much as you guys want^^
I'll most definitely go over each one of the endings and add more stuff/change some according to feedback. I'll have a post dedicated for people to post their opinions and feedback on my Patreon so I can now what to work on, and I'll come check the comments here often.
 
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The_fallen_dragon

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I keep mis-evaluating the amount of hatred people hold for the antagonists, so I guess their demise doesn't come off as "brutal" enough. Then again, since I was the one who created them from scratch, gave them a personality, a purpose and motivations, I can never hate them, so it's always a bit complicated to really make them suffer as much as you guys want^^
I'll most definitely go over each one of the endings and add more stuff/change some according to feedback. I'll have a post dedicated for people to post their opinions and feedback on my Patreon so I can now what to work on, and I'll come check the comments here often.
My friend's brutality was not the issue, the issue is simply the lack of actual personal connection to literally every action of revenge with the exception of cel.

Zeno's death should've been poetic, the nephew killing the uncle the same way the uncle killed the brother. Letting Zeno survive and be killed by More instead strips any and all meaning away from kicking him off the cliff and even his death as well.

Edwyn's was even worse because there's just no interaction between the two like at all, there not even in the same space at the same time at all throughout the epilogue. This is bad seeing how Noah was there the majority of the time when Edwyn did something to Cel. So the revenge on the cousin being separated from no was just empty.

The mother, who's basically a main character with the daughter didn't even get a real revenge scene. Hell, even in the scene at the end there wasn't even a reveal that the guards were actually fucking the king's mother which I thought would be brought up as a fear and privilege tactic. "You do what I say and you get many privileges, but go against me, and well... this woman was the one who gave birth to me so guess what I'll do to you and everyone you cherish." The betrayal hits the hardest with the mom because well she's the mom. BLah blah blah throwing away the undying love a mother should have for their child blah blah blah.

The rest, well my personal opinion there is the revenge should spread to the entire village and they all with the exception of Meredith and the little boy, played a role in using him, abusing him, and hurting him. But I'm sure others don't agree with that so that's just me.

Also, props for listening too and taking the feedback with stride. Too many creators just ignore criticism or even take them as attack.
 

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My friend's brutality was not the issue, the issue is simply the lack of actual personal connection to literally every action of revenge with the exception of cel.

Zeno's death should've been poetic, the nephew killing the uncle the same way the uncle killed the brother. Letting Zeno survive and be killed by More instead strips any and all meaning away from kicking him off the cliff and even his death as well.

Edwyn's was even worse because there's just no interaction between the two like at all, there not even in the same space at the same time at all throughout the epilogue. This is bad seeing how Noah was there the majority of the time when Edwyn did something to Cel. So the revenge on the cousin being separated from no was just empty.

The mother, who's basically a main character with the daughter didn't even get a real revenge scene. Hell, even in the scene at the end there wasn't even a reveal that the guards were actually fucking the king's mother which I thought would be brought up as a fear and privilege tactic. "You do what I say and you get many privileges, but go against me, and well... this woman was the one who gave birth to me so guess what I'll do to you and everyone you cherish." The betrayal hits the hardest with the mom because well she's the mom. BLah blah blah throwing away the undying love a mother should have for their child blah blah blah.

The rest, well my personal opinion there is the revenge should spread to the entire village and they all with the exception of Meredith and the little boy, played a role in using him, abusing him, and hurting him. But I'm sure others don't agree with that so that's just me.

Also, props for listening too and taking the feedback with stride. Too many creators just ignore criticism or even take them as attack.

Well.. that just've hit the bullseye.
 

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My friend's brutality was not the issue, the issue is simply the lack of actual personal connection to literally every action of revenge with the exception of cel.

Zeno's death should've been poetic, the nephew killing the uncle the same way the uncle killed the brother. Letting Zeno survive and be killed by More instead strips any and all meaning away from kicking him off the cliff and even his death as well.

Edwyn's was even worse because there's just no interaction between the two like at all, there not even in the same space at the same time at all throughout the epilogue. This is bad seeing how Noah was there the majority of the time when Edwyn did something to Cel. So the revenge on the cousin being separated from no was just empty.

The mother, who's basically a main character with the daughter didn't even get a real revenge scene. Hell, even in the scene at the end there wasn't even a reveal that the guards were actually fucking the king's mother which I thought would be brought up as a fear and privilege tactic. "You do what I say and you get many privileges, but go against me, and well... this woman was the one who gave birth to me so guess what I'll do to you and everyone you cherish." The betrayal hits the hardest with the mom because well she's the mom. BLah blah blah throwing away the undying love a mother should have for their child blah blah blah.

The rest, well my personal opinion there is the revenge should spread to the entire village and they all with the exception of Meredith and the little boy, played a role in using him, abusing him, and hurting him. But I'm sure others don't agree with that so that's just me.

Also, props for listening too and taking the feedback with stride. Too many creators just ignore criticism or even take them as attack.
Perfectly summarised.
 

Py Ape

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My friend's brutality was not the issue, the issue is simply the lack of actual personal connection to literally every action of revenge with the exception of cel.

Zeno's death should've been poetic, the nephew killing the uncle the same way the uncle killed the brother. Letting Zeno survive and be killed by More instead strips any and all meaning away from kicking him off the cliff and even his death as well.

Edwyn's was even worse because there's just no interaction between the two like at all, there not even in the same space at the same time at all throughout the epilogue. This is bad seeing how Noah was there the majority of the time when Edwyn did something to Cel. So the revenge on the cousin being separated from no was just empty.

The mother, who's basically a main character with the daughter didn't even get a real revenge scene. Hell, even in the scene at the end there wasn't even a reveal that the guards were actually fucking the king's mother which I thought would be brought up as a fear and privilege tactic. "You do what I say and you get many privileges, but go against me, and well... this woman was the one who gave birth to me so guess what I'll do to you and everyone you cherish." The betrayal hits the hardest with the mom because well she's the mom. BLah blah blah throwing away the undying love a mother should have for their child blah blah blah.

The rest, well my personal opinion there is the revenge should spread to the entire village and they all with the exception of Meredith and the little boy, played a role in using him, abusing him, and hurting him. But I'm sure others don't agree with that so that's just me.

Also, props for listening too and taking the feedback with stride. Too many creators just ignore criticism or even take them as attack.
I gotta ask tho. What throwing away the undying love of a mother are you talking about? What exactly did she do? I didn't wanna go through the whole game so I stopped playing after the childhood phase and went straight to the end. Game is really well made but my poor heart is not very well made.
 

Angel1984

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I gotta ask tho. What throwing away the undying love of a mother are you talking about? What exactly did she do? I didn't wanna go through the whole game so I stopped playing after the childhood phase and went straight to the end. Game is really well made but my poor heart is not very well made.
Well... there was a point where MC could have stopped zeno.. it did not go well cuz of her and celis.
 

The_fallen_dragon

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Well... there was a point where MC could have stopped zeno.. it did not go well cuz of her and celis.

Well... there was a point where MC could have stopped zeno.. it did not go well cuz of her and celis.
I'm actually not even referring to that part as that is a betrayal of both cel and the mother together but that part is a good example of it. But later during the second half of the game the mother does basically choose Zeno over he own son. I'm trying to remember if the whole claiming she'll give Zeno a stronger more useful son than what Noah is happens only in the ntr epilogue but I swore I remember something like that happening before it.

On either occasions she does choose Zeno's dick over Noah which is how a lot of ntr play out when dealing with milfs and the child is the target of emotional pain. Those are typically the ones I want to see everyone die in the end the most lol.
 
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I would have liked to see the MC use something other than pure brawn to defeat Zeno and Edwyr. I.e. to somehow completely outwit them, foil their plans, have them trapped in a very unpleasant situation (like what happened to Edwry) and then go back to the village rather than becoming a total asshole dictator.

I really wanted to see Zeno’s anguish at being outsmarted by someone as weak as the MC. The antags deserve to be humiliated and ostracised. Having Zeno killed was going too easy on him.
 
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Also, is it too late to see Aywin and Celis in the really short outfits without pregnancies first btw? We only got to see them in those clothes once their bellies started to swell.
 
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