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Wow ironic Cecilie's possessiveness actually would have made Erin live longer than his father in the beginning. Now other stories when the Gods made the hero they also took away their emotions and sex drive so they will focus on the mission seem kind in comparison. How evil are we if we still enjoy Erin's suffering even knowing this?Thanks for the feedback, appreciated.
Many of the improvements you mentioned I have them noted already, it's just 99% of my time goes to new content.
Regarding the thrusting stuff, I'm not sure I get the point.
What Elena used to do is let her Hero dry hump a bunch of random women, I don't think it affects whether she's innocent or not. What it portrays her as is someone who lets her Hero indulge which is very important. Because by letting him indulge so much, she made sure his lifespan would run out quickly and he died quickly after the trial was over. So her compassionate methods were killing him without her knowing.
On a related note, ever thought about a place maybe a channel on your discord to keep all these lore details? There are a lot and they are interesting.