Hey, Komisari.
I read your Patreon post about the journey so far, and I'm really excited to see where this game will go. You are very critical of yourself for it being your first game, but seriously don't. There are many first-games on this site that need far more work than yours did. Your first attempt showed some REAL talent.
I was hoping for a Christmas update, but I understand that would be unreasonable since you just did Halloween. Maybe next year we get to spend Christmas with the girls.
Oh and also...in terms of story, I really hope you aren't going to be mean to girls like Lucy and Fara who live a long time compared to humans. You introduced the idea in the prologue that humans change a lot but are short-lived. But if that means you are going to get Fara and Lucy to fall in love with the MC, find happiness for once in their lives, then force them to watch the MC wither and die in only a few short decades, then that is *very* cruel.
I had a silly idea for that. Since powerful potions exist in the world, what if there was one that made a person revert back into an infant? Years from now, when the MC is close to death, they can give him the potion, and he becomes a baby that they can take care of and raise as their own. Once he reaches puberty, he starts having dreams and remembering who he was. In fact, it's a great setup for a spinoff/sequel. Young boy raised in house of monster girls, starts to have sexy dreams of them, even though he didn't think of them that way before. Events unfold, confessions happen, yadda yadda yadda.
Don't be cruel to Fara and Lucy and the others please. They deserve long-term happiness.