- May 25, 2017
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I think you're gonna like where things go. I hadn't considered scenarios where Hikari was getting it from another person while the psychic link was strong... Truthfully, being the title character her plot armor was strongest... but... now I'm actually considering it. O.O Thank you.Well this was surprisingly not bad. I do like the mission statement of a harem with a strong emphasis on NTR mechanics. And with virgins too, spicy.
A lot of spelling and grammar errors though. Like commonly mistaking loose and lose.
I hope in future updates to watch Hikari lose her virginity to someone. Interesting to think how that would be when you're psychically linked like that.
Also want Lala-sue. Way preferable over Ayre.
Most importantly, I want the girls that are mine to fool around with others because they want to, not be forced into it. Rojin seems like a likely way that'd happen, manipulating and charming his way into their pants.
Hikari seems like, I suppose, someone that has to be willingly shared or forced, can't do it without the player's permission because they have that link. Though, if she and the player are getting very horny, a sense of "no, don't do that" could fall on deaf ears, a kind of ambiguous sharing/cheating thing.
It's just not hot in the slightest when the girl doesn't enjoy it, so as long as they aren't forced, I'm not too picky.
Best of luck with it.
Tsuki is mostly into girls, or the main character but will do what's got to be done. Sasa uses her body to manipulate... and will do so again. =P