Ren'Py Hikari: First Interlude [v0.04.08p] [Hikari-Comics]

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Well this was surprisingly not bad. I do like the mission statement of a harem with a strong emphasis on NTR mechanics. And with virgins too, spicy.
A lot of spelling and grammar errors though. Like commonly mistaking loose and lose.
I hope in future updates to watch Hikari lose her virginity to someone. Interesting to think how that would be when you're psychically linked like that.
Also want Lala-sue. Way preferable over Ayre.

Most importantly, I want the girls that are mine to fool around with others because they want to, not be forced into it. Rojin seems like a likely way that'd happen, manipulating and charming his way into their pants.
Hikari seems like, I suppose, someone that has to be willingly shared or forced, can't do it without the player's permission because they have that link. Though, if she and the player are getting very horny, a sense of "no, don't do that" could fall on deaf ears, a kind of ambiguous sharing/cheating thing.
It's just not hot in the slightest when the girl doesn't enjoy it, so as long as they aren't forced, I'm not too picky.

Best of luck with it.
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I think you're gonna like where things go. I hadn't considered scenarios where Hikari was getting it from another person while the psychic link was strong... Truthfully, being the title character her plot armor was strongest... but... now I'm actually considering it. O.O Thank you.
Tsuki is mostly into girls, or the main character but will do what's got to be done. Sasa uses her body to manipulate... and will do so again. =P
 
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Sorry for the question, but I really didn't understand the game's premise, but I was confused by other information I've gathered.

The game is an NTR competition. Should you prevent your girls from being stolen by NPCs?
Initially, the MC doesn't have any girls and must choose which one they want from the options. Do the other girls end up with other guys?
I'll have to take care of this girl so I don't lose her, okay? But can I get back the ones I lost?

Will there always be a way to avoid sharing (loaning the girl without getting anything in return, if it's a partner swap, as long as it's not in a cuckold-like atmosphere, okay? Prostitution is still better than nothing. This doesn't apply to mother and sister. I'm a family man :cool:)?

I'm not (a virgin hand), if I wash it, it's fresh :ROFLMAO: . I think it's interesting for a girl to have a history before meeting the MC (except in cases of comparison with MC; I don't want to know how the previous partner was so much better in bed:sick:). I think it's cool for the MC to have friends with benefits or his slut, who doesn't treat him like a girlfriend or wife. (y).

The most important thing is LI's attitude after she becomes a girlfriend or wife. I don't care if she's a slut before dating the MC, but afterward she must be a saint on the street and a whore in my bed :love: .


My problem is with Humiliation, SPH, that's one of the elements of Netorare, Netorase, and Femdom. Nothing against fetishes, it's just not my thing.
 
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pantil said:
Sorry for the question, but I really didn't understand the game's premise, but I was confused by other information I've gathered.

The game is an NTR competition. Should you prevent your girls from being stolen by NPCs?
Initially, the MC doesn't have any girls and must choose which one they want from the options. Do the other girls end up with other guys?
I'll have to take care of this girl so I don't lose her, okay? But can I get back the ones I lost?

Will there always be a way to avoid sharing (loaning the girl without getting anything in return, if it's a partner swap, as long as it's not in a cuckold-like atmosphere, okay? Prostitution is still better than nothing. This doesn't apply to mother and sister. I'm a family man :cool:)?

I'm not (a virgin hand), if I wash it, it's fresh :ROFLMAO: . I think it's interesting for a girl to have a history before meeting the MC (except in cases of comparison with MC; I don't want to know how the previous partner was so much better in bed:sick:). I think it's cool for the MC to have friends with benefits or his slut, who doesn't treat him like a girlfriend or wife. (y).

My problem is with Humiliation, SPH, that's one of the elements of Netorare, Netorase, and Femdom. Nothing against fetishes, it's just not my thing.
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Then is not your game my friend, this game have element of sharing and netorare...I'm pretty sure on the future it will be unavoidable.
 
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Then is not your game my friend, this game have element of sharing and netorare...I'm pretty sure on the future it will be unavoidable.
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What a shame, I like the game where the MC fights for the girl, I'm glad I asked, I thought Netorase and Netorare were bad endings and they could be avoided with the right choices and if he goes down a path where that is impossible then the game is not for me.
 
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When I read Strong NTR Mechanics I would interpret that as mechanics that could punish the player for "Wrong" decisions.
Not... Strong NTR content regardless lol
 
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pantil said:
Sorry for the question, but I really didn't understand the game's premise, but I was confused by other information I've gathered.

The game is an NTR competition. Should you prevent your girls from being stolen by NPCs?
Initially, the MC doesn't have any girls and must choose which one they want from the options. Do the other girls end up with other guys?
I'll have to take care of this girl so I don't lose her, okay? But can I get back the ones I lost?

Will there always be a way to avoid sharing (loaning the girl without getting anything in return, if it's a partner swap, as long as it's not in a cuckold-like atmosphere, okay? Prostitution is still better than nothing. This doesn't apply to mother and sister. I'm a family man :cool:)?

I'm not (a virgin hand), if I wash it, it's fresh :ROFLMAO: . I think it's interesting for a girl to have a history before meeting the MC (except in cases of comparison with MC; I don't want to know how the previous partner was so much better in bed:sick:). I think it's cool for the MC to have friends with benefits or his slut, who doesn't treat him like a girlfriend or wife. (y).

The most important thing is LI's attitude after she becomes a girlfriend or wife. I don't care if she's a slut before dating the MC, but afterward she must be a saint on the street and a whore in my bed :love: .


My problem is with Humiliation, SPH, that's one of the elements of Netorare, Netorase, and Femdom. Nothing against fetishes, it's just not my thing.
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Thank you for your question. ^^
First, this is meant to be a visual novel, not a game. There are no giant mechanics you gotta worry about. Choosing one girl over the other mostly doesn't lock them off. If you ever played "Love is all around", I was going for that kind of structure.
The NTR is actually somewhat light, the "Heavy NTR" was to get the damn F95 trolls, yes you know who you are start squeeling some more" to piss off. =P I actively try to avoid Humiliation, SPH, and especially cuckholding. Actually everyone has a giant dick so... sorry ladies!

The goal is to get all three of the starting girls to max affinity before the end, but they have pretty thick plot armor so that will be hard to fuck up. Later on there will be a choice to save Ayre or Lala-fon.

And yes, there are Mother/Daughter team-ups. I too am a family man. Shit wait... no! Oh good lord. Fuck Patreon.
 
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What is the incest in this game? Why does it even exist like that in the patch if there is no real blood relation with the MC? Unless I missed something in the lore's exposition? The only real part is if you are gonna have a threesome with Kojia and her elder daughter which I haven't gotten to yet.

Boy I sure would like to ask the maker of that patch directly if only I knew who they were
 
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What is the incest in this game? Why does it even exist like that in the patch if there is no real blood relation with the MC? Unless I missed something in the lore's exposition? The only real part is if you are gonna have a threesome with Kojia and her elder daughter which I haven't gotten to yet.

Boy I sure would like to ask the maker of that patch directly if only I knew who they were
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So... I did finally track the son of a bitch down and threatened to sprinkle him with another woman's glitter when his wife was just in the next room. As predicted, he folded like a roll of wet manila folders... -.-

Things have been and are getting darker for adult content creators out there. We do everything we can not to draw the eye of Sauron so to speak. So there are several implied familial bonds that aren't "blood" relations but the argument could be easily made for it, Midori (Mother) and Genji (MC), Hikari (Daughter) and Genji, Tsuki (Sister) and MC, etc.
Actual shit, yes two Mother x Daughter things, which really no one litigates so w/e, but Tsuki and Ko are actual brother/sister for which I.... er that son of a bitch that makes the mod, may plan on doing some fun stuff with in the future. But more directly, if your paying attention to the start of Chapter 04, Lala-fon and Victor. Half of Chapter 05 WILL BE Lala-fon and her... er... "Step-Brother"...

The Kojia x Lala-fon section isn't in yet, and I'm actually working on the other pair up right now.
 
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The game is good, the story is interesting, it has some holes that you can only understand more at the end when the girls tell their stories, it was a good way to solve the introductory flaws that do not help to create empathy at the beginning of the game, but the second playthrough becomes very enjoyable after prior knowledge.

Touching on the controversy :devilish:, I didn't get the feeling of an NTR or NTS game, and I didn't find it difficult to get the captain's round punch right away and then the visit to Comia's room :whistle: just pay attention to the story and then Netori.
Yes, the game has a guy trying to steal your girls; it's a game of competition, and thank goodness the girls aren't empty-headed, talkative. Hikari is a bit naive.

The game is a dispute for the girls with a bad ending NTR and an NTS route for those who like it more so far it was optional and I stayed with the captain's women, I hope there can be a Lala-fon / Ayre path continues to have an alternative, speaking of which there is a conversation that I believe should not happen with Sasayaki which is about Krish who should be captain having touched her but in this round this did not happen there is the variable girltoFuck = "KojiaGold".

Like the women on the spaceship, most are from the captain, the only ones from the MC are Hikari, Tsuki and Sasayaki, it is natural to have sex between husband and wife that is used to demonstrate I don't see it as NTR or something similar, there is sharing that I haven't tested yet, but nothing of NTS or NTR in the path I chose there is at most Netori which is when you steal other people's women in Krish's case it will be a pleasure.:sneaky:

Atherin said:
Half of Chapter 05 WILL BE Lala-fon and her... er... "Step-Brother"...
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Depending on this variable -> ch4cockBlocked = "Jacob", as a family man I can make an exception after the meeting between Kojia x Lala-fon and MC, but since he's only a half-brother, just a trio, Mc Lala-fon Jacob;) If he's polite, otherwise I'll trade him for Tsuki :love: She deserves it too.

I'm translating the game into Portuguese_Br if you don't mind.
 
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