holy fuck man you posted about pissing on his grave at almost the exact same time as me.
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Great minds think alike!holy fuck man you posted about pissing on his grave at almost the exact same time as me.
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IF it is a preview, not just a render.
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I was thinking on this some more a few hours ago. I still don't think it's Steve as I think Emma would want to be there at his funeral and she isn't in the render. Alot pointed out wouldn't make sense for it to be Emma #1 cause of the outfits. I got 3 idea's who it could be.
Agent Fox or that redhead bodyguard the showed up in the update forget her name. If I recall correctly DB said the redhead bodyguard won't even be a side girl. Maybe that's cause she gets killed? While agent fox we know Jason and Henry want to make her " disappear"
Then there is also my crazy theory from earlier which to be honest makes no sense but is possibly even if the chances are slim to none. The girl Agent fox questioned and got away from Jason. ( I don't think this one makes to much sense but I see it as a possibility just like a 1% chance)
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I like your old bodyguard partner theory. That makes a lot of sense to me.
I don't think it Agent Fox, because I believe she is ledwable.
And MC looks a bit sad for it to be Jason's girl.
yeah I mostly go by my bodyguard theory I wasn't to confident in the others tbh but might as well put them out there even if one makes no sense at all Jason's girl cause the MC doesn't even know her so makes no sense but hey it's a wildcard of a theory
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I've written down my five most likely variants here:
The top option is still that it's a loose picture, as it seems to have been posted without any comment from DB. And as long as that's the case, we can't ignore this option.
My worst suspicion would be that DB wants to express his general mood. Then -> ouch...
If this picture is actually a picture from a future update, then it's primarily a glimmer of hope! Anyway, the picture shows a very depressed MC, in which it also looks like he's crying. If that's the case, that means to me that it's a person who was very close to the MC. And here I can only think of four: (hierarchical)
1) Emma one
2) Steve
3) Elena (bodyguard)
4) a family member of the MC
The top option is still that it's a loose picture, as it seems to have been posted without any comment from DB. And as long as that's the case, we can't ignore this option.
My worst suspicion would be that DB wants to express his general mood. Then -> ouch...
If this picture is actually a picture from a future update, then it's primarily a glimmer of hope! Anyway, the picture shows a very depressed MC, in which it also looks like he's crying. If that's the case, that means to me that it's a person who was very close to the MC. And here I can only think of four: (hierarchical)
1) Emma one
2) Steve
3) Elena (bodyguard)
4) a family member of the MC
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It's been a while since I played, and I couldn't remember anyone close to MC other than Steve, but Elena (redhead bodyguard) is a great shout (and potentially a great shame). It could even tie in to who she was guarding/what she maybe saw at the party/event where we met her. Fox is another potential I guess, but as mentioned, the suggestion is she will be lewdable, though that could have been a red herring or a change of plan.
I wouldn't discount Steve just on the basis of Emma not being in the preview. She could easily be there but not in the shot - it's the end of the funeral, everyone's leaving, Suzi puts her arm around Emma and they walk back to the car, Charlotte turns back to see MC hasn't moved and she sidles up to him to share her strength.
I wouldn't discount Steve just on the basis of Emma not being in the preview. She could easily be there but not in the shot - it's the end of the funeral, everyone's leaving, Suzi puts her arm around Emma and they walk back to the car, Charlotte turns back to see MC hasn't moved and she sidles up to him to share her strength.
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If it is a preview, I think Elena is the most likely too or someone we haven't met yet.
I hope it's not Steve, and we shouldn't forget how fragile Emma is. She could be there out of frame, But I think she could just as easily be curled up in bed devastated. I think she would prefer to be there, because when she's upset it's MC she goes to, but Charlotte might not let her go either.
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Maybe an older more mature Emma? She's gotta grow up sometime.
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Those are awesome. Thank you for sharing them with us friend. Into the Emma folder they go.
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As if most Hollywood movies make more sense or have less plot holes.
Give the guy a break. It's his first story to write. Sure, it's full of plot holes and while I do agree with a few issues you pointed at, several of them aren't any better than the story you're critcizing.
What deeper meaning were you searching for?
It is a melodrama because this is clearly what it's meant to be. Cheap? Compared to what and how? Is it because you got it without paying a cent?
Yes, you're not the first one to notice some inconsistencies and plot holes.
Security cameras are there to see if there's anyone moving or doing something on the guarded territory. They're rather useless at providing an identity of an intruder, whichever angle or distance they're positioned at, if the intrusion is planned and the intruder is not drugged out of his mind or a complete moron. Wearing a simple ski mask makes identification impossible at any angle and distance.
Sure, there could have been some hidden pinhole cameras around the entrance(s) and maybe in some other places around the face level, but considering the little coverage that they are able to get a recognizable facial image from, you simply can't cover a larger area with them and getting an intruder to show up on one and be recognizable is pure luck.
What makes you think that there weren't any of such cameras? The intruder just didn't happen to stumble on one. It's not like the story describes how many cameras and where there were. Bad luck.
Well, it's what we have. Maybe he's not the most connected guy you could find, but considering the predatory environment quite well described in the story, maybe excusable? Even one of his trusted aquantances turned out to be a bad guy.
Orly?!
I'm sure you could find much-much worse, would you put any effort in it. IMHO, most of them on F95 are.I'm quite surprised you could finally find something positive
And now we're getting to the two points where all your "criticism" got inspired from and what makes it "the worst story ever" in your opinion.
You couldn't find enough to fap to!
A.K.A. the usual complaining of the horny fappers hoping to find the amount of porn they were looking for: "No sex scenes! Worst story ever!"
First and foremost: the story is unfinished! Don't tell me you didn't notice?
The second most important point is that this isn't a porn game! It's a romantic story with some erotic content, this is why the thread got tagged with the current list of tags by the moderators. It contains these themes to be tagged, mostly as a warning, but the story isn't revolving or concentrating around them.
And there are more sex scenes planned for the future, if DB is ever able to continue with it again (whining about how bad everything is, likely won't encourage him to continue), but it clearly will never-ever be a porn game or a fap fest. This much should be clear after getting through less than a half of the existing story already.
Complaining that this is not a game full of porn at this point would be like complaining in a restaurant that there's no fast food available. After recognizing that it's not a fast food "restaurant".
And there actually are two sex scenes in the game: one on Lucy's path and one on the no-one's path with Kaylah, so you can't even claim that there are only teases without being factually incorrect.
Yeah, THAT is the most important for you. You feel like there's NTR in it. This is why you tried so hard to find as many other flaws to call it the "worst story ever"
It's not like Emma is MC's girlfriend or even a LI from the start, so this isn't NTR even remotely. If you already have a feeling from just that, then your whole "criticism" is already tainted by your personal phobia. An arachnophobe is clearly not qualified to write a review about a collection of Arachnides of a Zoo, not that this even is one in any way.
MC is there to protect Emma from the stalker, not to fuck her himself. Whatever might happen in the far future is another story, although I still don't find it appropriate or right for the MC to date Emma much less than 5 years in the future of the story. And I still don't see it happening without a time skip. I'm not surprised that DB is struggling so much with the story, trying not to use one.
In my opinion, while there are some plot holes in the story, they're not too bad compared to many very popular movies and especially considering the inexperience of the writer.
This is still one of the best and most captivating stories on F95 with a decent flow and great characters who are also looking great visually.
One of the best VN's (or KN's?) you could find on F95 and it's also way better than a huge pile of successful movies.
It also has a good potential to be made into a movie, a pretty good one. A normal non-porn, obviously.
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wow how did I miss this amazing render for my folder
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I doubt he'd cry at any other grave than Emma's (either ones), Lucy's or Charlie's. Unless he's a very emotional guy (a stereotype of an Italian? Just considering what I've seen in the movies). But he hasn't been this far, so I doubt it'll change.
So it has to be a visit to the first Emma grave, IMHO. Nothing to worry about.
Emma wearing a big wig? Hair extensions? Lots of hairspray?
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Well these certainly have me reconsidering my 'I only see Emma as a daughter' statement.
She looks fucking amazing in these.
I'm gonna have to start an Emma folder. If looks could kill. This whole scene never fails to crack me up, Charlotte really does have the best expressions.
