I gotta say though, this game got me really interested. I like the art, especially that it isn't censored, as that is a huge turn off for me. Animations are simple, but they work quite well, making the h-scenes pretty hot, I'd only like to see more of the vaginas, but I haven't seen all of the scenes so I don't know how much of an issue that would be.
The plot is interesting. It's not really about a prude girl being raped into becoming a huge slut, as you already said the main character is a strong independant woman who can decide who she'll have sex with, so that makes it something different from the usual, but with space for all the fetishes people around here wish to see. I look forward to the future content this game will contain.
Since this is not really supposed to be a demo of a complete game, I guess the map isn't representative of what the game is going to be, necessarily, but it doesn't hurt to say that the map felt a bit too big with lots of empty spaces and random blocked paths. Maybe you plan on adding stuff to most of them, and that's okay, the only problem is that it made me feel lost a lot, so a map and quest hints would be really helpful to avoid that, it's something to keep in mind.
Gameplay is just what you would expect of an rpg maker, so no remarks about it.
About the "engrish", I actually appreciate that someone would take the time to try and translate a game into a language they're not fluent in. It does make it hard to understand what the characters mean sometimes, but I think that's better than playing something in japanese or some other language I won't understand anything at all, which for me is a deal breaker.
All that said, I'm really bummed out about the loading image errors, if someone could help out about that I'd be very thankful. It's weird because it says the image can't be found, but it was there when I looked in the folder. It's a huge problem because I can't finish some battles.
EDIT: I noticed the download to fix the image problem and it did solve that, but now I have a loading error for audio/se/Thunder2.ogg which keeps showing up constantly after I battled the blue goblin.