A little too early to give too much worthwhile input but what I will say is the current presentation suffers from what I like to call "Roundscape Syndrome", where the art on display and what is being described as occurring is disconnected. Such as, the main character is described as being flipped on all fours on the grass, but the art shows her against a tree. Assuming more in between art will be added, the Roundscape Syndrome is especially on display in that the art shown remains static for the duration of the described event and remains unchanged until the end. I felt what was being described in the scene was vague, is it in her ass or not or is it vague on purpose so anyone with a distaste for anal can believe it's vaginal?
That said, excellent choice of artist. I just don't think gameplay wise I can comment on anything.
