DeMoS666

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Game is not yet completed and witch isn't in game yet, but that won't be in Bleakburn, but in the woods north west on the main map. As for the crashes, I am attempting to track down what is causing it. So far I have only had 1 crash, and it was when listening to the story from Divina (Ghost). I have yet to figure out what is causing this, but I am assuming some script I am using is causing a serious memory leak and at some point randomly the game crashes.
One guess farming may cause this, 1 time game crushes when 1 planted plants, or maybe because of notifications. Or maybe it is one of the reasons. In some scenes before actual sex scene or some story scene game freezes and crushes, i think at some moment game start to use more memory and crush game(maybe of some scrypt mulfunction).
 

rodrigosarri

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Okay, let me see. The game has a good start, I like games tagged pregnancy :sneaky::sneaky:, it has some flaws. Sometimes the game closes by itself, it happened when I bought the Rusty Machette and used it for the first time, the second time was when I first walked through the window at the mayor's house.

In my opinion quests need to be better developed and things that need to be done need to be in quests, for example, I know I need to look for the mayor and his lover at 9am, but where?

Peasant's Quest and The Legends of the Goblins: The New Tribe have done an excellent job with quests. If you developer have the time (I know this is pretty hard) take a look at these games.

Anyway, congratulations on the game, I see a good future for the game.
 

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Well as all can see everyone is crashing at different points in the game and to me this means a very bad memory leak is going on.

Will wait to try this again in a few updates from now.
Keep up the good work, I like whats here already even though because of the memory leak I can not get very far into the game.
It still has great content.
 

iluminatro

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After having played more:

-game still crashes at totally random points, as people pointed out probably a very bad memory leak, very easy to lose progress

-combat is way too easy and there is too much of it, the goblins arent a threat, neither are the bats when you are allowed in the cave, or the slimes, or the orcs, the spider was a normal difficulty fight for rpgmaker. Paired with the absolute shit xp these give to actually level and the incredibly high encounter trigger rate made slogging through the cave actually painful, its a giant waste of time and not fun to have the same 2 enemies jump you after literally 2 seconds of holding down right. Adding to that, you use the timer model for combat but generally the enemies timer should stop when you get your turn, why does going through the wheel to choose your action not pause the enemies timer? All this does is encourage spamming

-the quest system seems to be held together with duct tape and pieces of string, to test it I made another save, the same quests broke in totally different stages. Idk what you did here but its very much not working as intended. Half of the time I cannot tell if I am in the wrong place or if the quest just decided to stop working on that save, if I didnt run several saves to test I literally wouldnt be able to tell and just give up as many here have. I dont even know what content im missing. I did the cave for apparently no reason, I cannot catch the mayor, I cannot steal the watch, the bartender wants a barrel, I found the bar secret but I cannot trigger it since I cannot add the bartender to my party cause barrelquest is stuck. Or at least thats what I assume I need to finish.

-Mapdesign. Just what. Some of the maps are barebones as hell and literally just a few cubes places that still manage to have clipping walls while others are highly detailed and thought out, mostly the houses. Yet at some places you added no collision so for example in the mayors house at night I am just allowed to climb into the wall behind his desk and move out of bounds.

-Why is there a minimap if you didnt bother to actually load in a minimap, me being able to see where my character is in an empty green square adds nothing.

You asked for criticism so there you go. THIS ALL BEING SAID, I have seen working rpgmaker prototypes that had a worse setting and less content. This is not unsalvageable, far from it, you clearly know where you want things to go. But as far as I can see you really need to learn how to use rpgmaker, the main things holding it back right now is that the technical issues of the gameplay itself make it nearly unplayable. Your porn can be the best on this site, if no one can reach it in the game, no one will play. Keep fixing things and godspeed.
 

BGRW2020

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Ok - I went to the inn and saw the mayor talk to a women in red - maybe the witch? listened to their conversation but tried to follow outside no-one there and went to the house where I thought this women lived (where I walked in before and was scooted our by a maid) could not get in this time - then went back to the mayors wife to tell her and couldn;t instead it started the whole quest over
 

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So, as for the transformation, I was debating whether or not to add that tag. A character becomes a ghost-like creature due to a fuckup with magic. Pregnancy is not fully working, but it is started. I like fantasy. Who hasn't played world of warcraft and thought "I wonder what it would be like to fuck a draenei..."?

This is my first attempt, and as for the version number, I should probably edit that. it's my first alpha almost playable release, so starting with v1.x.x.x would actually imply a finished game. Guess I should have put v0.0.0.1.

oh, and click on the corner of the bar in the tavern for a secret I added when I got bored one day.

and now the bad news. I tested this before publishing. My friends tested this before publishing. Yet, there is a missing image. I ran through that fight dozens of times and it never appeared. I will update and reupload the files. Sorry for this. Kinda makes me feel like an idiot.

The game will still work if you click "seen it before" when asking about the intro.
Another error for you to look at. error again.jpg
 

Lordpsyan

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So, rpg maker mv comes with a very old version of NWJS. This has many issues that cause the game to close or freeze. I have fixed this. I am preparing to release v0.0.0.2 Alpha (think I may remove one of the 0's from the version as it really makes no sense to have it) and this version has many bugs fixed. This is the changelog for v0.0.0.2 Alpha:

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The crashes and closings were caused by errors in loading background music or from using too much memory. The preloader put too much junk into memory, so that was removed.

I am updating the main post to also include a walkthrough.

Now for a common question: "Where do I go to see the mayor and the classy lady at 9pm?"

This is not yet in the game, so you don't go anywhere yet. You do need to talk to Mary (bartender) so you can gain access to the big yellow house.

I will release v0.0.2 Alpha either tonight or tomorrow. I still have more testing to do, but so far no crashes.

Another note: I am always logged into my Discord server (link in first post) and I have no problems answering questions, so feel free to jump in there.
 
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So, rpg maker mv comes with a very old version of NWJS. This has many issues that cause the game to close or freeze. I have fixed this. I am preparing to release v0.0.0.2 Alpha (think I may remove one of the 0's from the version as it really makes no sense to have it) and this version has many bugs fixed. This is the changelog for v0.0.0.2 Alpha:

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The crashes and closings were caused by errors in loading background music or from using too much memory. The preloader put too much junk into memory, so that was removed.

I am updating the main post to also include a walkthrough.

Now for a common question: "Where do I go to see the mayor and the classy lady at 9pm?"

This is not yet in the game, so you don't go anywhere yet. You do need to talk to Mary (bartender) so you can gain access to the big yellow house.

I will release v0.0.2 Alpha either tonight or tomorrow. I still have more testing to do, but so far no crashes.

Another note: I am always logged into my Discord server (link in first post) and I have no problems answering questions, so feel free to jump in there.
Overall good launch. It would be helpful to include a quest to make money via farming to guide new players for continuity. Also while I manage to get into the cave, It is currently proving difficult to find the way OUT of the "Dark Cave". A better marker would be great otherwise your just going to frustrate the players. I do agree with some of the comments that the respawn rate of the cave is tweaked a bit high also. I did manage to grind my way from lvl 10-19 in the cave trying to find exit but the game has currently lost my interest due to the frustration on exiting the cave. Nice start though, the game has promise. Cheers.
 

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Overall good launch. It would be helpful to include a quest to make money via farming to guide new players for continuity. Also while I manage to get into the cave, It is currently proving difficult to find the way OUT of the "Dark Cave". A better marker would be great otherwise your just going to frustrate the players. I do agree with some of the comments that the respawn rate of the cave is tweaked a bit high also. I did manage to grind my way from lvl 10-19 in the cave trying to find exit but the game has currently lost my interest due to the frustration on exiting the cave. Nice start though, the game has promise. Cheers.
All the way as far as you can go left then follow the left wall up while at the same time hitting the left move button also.
Took me a long time to find that, then go to the bottom and using the down movement while at the same time the left button to find your way out.

Did you fight the spider all the way to the right?
Major fight there but I won with only 100 hit points left and it gave me 15,000 xp.
 

Melvis

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I dunno if it's just me, but this game crashes more than any RPGmaker game I've ever seen. Any time a scene changes there's like a 50% of spontaneous shutdown. If it's a problem on my end I wish I knew how to fix it.

Edit: Yeah I'm dumb, this was apparently already addressed.
 
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I dunno if it's just me, but this game crashes more than any RPGmaker game I've ever seen. Any time a scene changes there's like a 50% of spontaneous shutdown. If it's a problem on my end I wish I knew how to fix it.
Read 3 post above yours.
 

Commander HS

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1. Did manage to find the goblin camp and told mayor but the quest didn't update
2. Don't even know where the hell is the witch
3. Talked to mayor's wife, saw mayor and lady talk but if i go to mayor's house at night it trigers the same shit
4. Bar girl told me to bring barrel of ale but where's the barrel? If it's in the inn can't seem to carry one also it doesn't show which one to pick
5. Have funny visited the cave and got to the other side, fight with spider, walked through the door but there's nothing
6. Learned stealth but how to get mayor's poket watch
 
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Lordpsyan

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1. Did manage to find the goblin camp and told mayor but the quest didn't update
In this release, I have not updated the quest information yet.
2. Don't even know where the hell is the witch
Witch is not implemented in game, yet. This is a very early release.
3. Talked to mayor's wife, saw mayor and lady talk but if i go to mayor's house at night it triggers the same shit
The mention of the Mayor meeting with the classy lady at 9pm is as far as that quest line goes in this version.
4. Bar girl told me to bring barrel of ale but where's the barrel? If it's in the inn can't seem to carry one also it doesn't show which one to pick
There is a bug in that quest, and you cannot pick up the barrels, which are by the stairs in the tavern. This is fixed in v0.0.2
5. Have funny visited the cave and got to the other side, fight with spider, walked through the door but there's nothing
after fighting speeyider, you head north and will find a flower, but you need a jar to get it and you must have completed the bar quest and found the faerie in the graveyard. Since the Ale cannot be picked up this quest cannot be done.
6. Learned stealth but how to get mayor's pocket-watch
Haven't added the pocket watch part yet. Again, very early release of game. New update with fixes only coming today.

I hope this helps.
 

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1. Did manage to find the goblin camp and told mayor but the quest didn't update
In this release, I have not updated the quest information yet.
2. Don't even know where the hell is the witch
Witch is not implemented in game, yet. This is a very early release.
3. Talked to mayor's wife, saw mayor and lady talk but if i go to mayor's house at night it triggers the same shit
The mention of the Mayor meeting with the classy lady at 9pm is as far as that quest line goes in this version.
4. Bar girl told me to bring barrel of ale but where's the barrel? If it's in the inn can't seem to carry one also it doesn't show which one to pick
There is a bug in that quest, and you cannot pick up the barrels, which are by the stairs in the tavern. This is fixed in v0.0.2
5. Have funny visited the cave and got to the other side, fight with spider, walked through the door but there's nothing
after fighting speeyider, you head north and will find a flower, but you need a jar to get it and you must have completed the bar quest and found the faerie in the graveyard. Since the Ale cannot be picked up this quest cannot be done.
6. Learned stealth but how to get mayor's pocket-watch
Haven't added the pocket watch part yet. Again, very early release of game. New update with fixes only coming today.

I hope this helps.
You should put in the game that this is the "end of content" for each quest and that will get players to stop asking how to do each of the quest that is not completed yet.
 

Lordpsyan

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I started doing that. Currently working on my first beta release. This release will be focused on the Mayor, Remmie, and Desiree. Planning on adding the witch's home and adding new monsters to fight out on the main map. Might take awhile to get this done.
 

rance4747

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Either make sex twice as short, or make them skipable via clicking. Im tired of looking at "Your corn has filished growing" as my MC takes his time fucking finishing just one segment of a scene.
 
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Lordpsyan

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Either make sex twice as short, or make them skipable via clicking. Im tired of looking at "Your corn has filished growing" as my MC takes his time fucking finishing just one segment of a scene.
I have slowly been making the animations shorter. Average of 8-10 seconds now. Missed a couple in 0.0.2 but getting the rest of them shortened for the beta release.

As for making them clickable, I will look into how to accomplish that. It is a great idea, so thanks!
 

ChaosGhost

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good game so far but some constructive critique please add a flee option to fights ,and add potions or options to push or decrease fight pop up rate in dark cave its really annoying to fight all 5 steps with no option to flee or decrease the rate off fights and please lighten the entrance and the exit better,entry points need overhaul have to click offten behind the map so he transits,i hope the spiderwoman boss get a simliar fight end like the female orcs ( they need a amzonian tribe queen to conquer ) maybe LI if someone is into it both queen/boss spider,maybe a upgraded version of the lantern its really too dark to play greater light radius or a spell to learn for that

keep up the good work and i hope we get a update soon and yes most people like renpy ,rpgm is frowned by the most people only rpg enthusiast's like me will try them i think ,but when thats it what u want to make its ur project ur the higher being what makes the magic happen here

edit: bug report when i got to cherry at night i had the quest for the other rich wife Merideth quest open to meet her in the tavern,i was greedy and wanted to look a our naked beauty Catherine i got instant the tavern convo from the watch lady Merideth and black background no option to leave mayor house had to reload (quest shows not in quest log i got stealth trainning but that skill show not to in char description,watch quest is too not shown in log)
edit:after that i got the convo for mary to fuck her at catherines naked body at night in the mayor house ???
edit:talking with desiree(Maid) giving 5k gold for info crashed game
 
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