VN Ren'Py Abandoned Hometown Trap [v1.5] [Spaceball1]

[ahliang]

New here, but I'm a bit surprised at the versioning. Version 1.0 IMHO should be a complete release, but in my playthrough it seems like nothing more than a demo (completely linear, maybe 10-15 mins content if you read slowly). Unless I'm doing something wrong, because it ends with some groping and that's it.

Please indicate it thusly, so as not to disappoint people who came expecting a complete game.

 

[SpaceBall1]

Well to be fair though. You basically says it sucks, but you don't tell why it sucks. Try some constructivce critic. Then you might get a better response. If you still end up with just a facepalm. Then the egg is on their face, not yours

Thank you. And about your first comment. Yes, that is what I am going for. Most people don’t look like the “model” men you see in most games. Obesity is a one of the largest health problems out there.

 

[heytherewhoop]

great game so far! will kayla (the brunette) get some action too?

 

[SpaceBall1]

New here, but I'm a bit surprised at the versioning. Version 1.0 IMHO should be a complete release, but in my playthrough it seems like nothing more than a demo (completely linear, maybe 10-15 mins content if you read slowly). Unless I'm doing something wrong, because it ends with some groping and that's it.

Please indicate it thusly, so as not to disappoint people who came expecting a complete game.

My bad. I am new, obviously. When I uploaded it from ren’py, it automatically gave me 1.0. I couldn’t change it. I don’t know how to fix that. But when I read through it slowly it takes over 35mins.

 

[SpaceBall1]

great game so far! will kayla (the brunette) get some action too?

Short answer….yes…

 

[Gambitf95]

The title is maybe a little misleading because when I see "trap" in the title I often hard pass on the game.

 

[SpaceBall1]

The title is maybe a little misleading because when I see "trap" in the title I often hard pass on the game.

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your call bro.

 

[menatv]

Yes, the guys look like they came from Jabba the Hut's home planet. But hey, the uglies need some lovin' too!

Great start to the game. I like how even the old farts are also trying to get into her pants. Definitely looking forward to more. Following this thread now.

 

[ahliang]

My bad. I am new, obviously. When I uploaded it from ren’py, it automatically gave me 1.0. I couldn’t change it. I don’t know how to fix that. But when I read through it slowly it takes over 35mins.

Kudos for being responsive to feedback, maybe i read faster than the average then.

Might I suggest you use a mapping tool to plot out the main story and branches with a view to complete this game? There's truly a huge number of abandoned games, it's not even funny.

If you update as fast as you reply, there's hope for this one yet. May the Force be with you!

 

[Joshua Tree]

Yes, the guys look like they came from Jabba the Hut's home planet. But hey, the uglies need some lovin' too!

Great start to the game. I like how even the old farts are also trying to get into her pants. Definitely looking forward to more. Following this thread now.

Why not make NORMAL, everyday people though... And that goes for any creators out there that goes to the exteme either way.

 

[El Tanque]

Why not make NORMAL, everyday people though... And that goes for any creators out there that goes to the exteme either way.

Probably if it had been like that, it would not have aroused the curiosity or interest of many, it is the freak circus syndrome, it horrifies you, but you have to see it.
I for one had to see it, but I will not play it, as it's not to my liking, my curiosity is satiated by seeing the images and reading a little of the comments, however I wish good luck to the dev.

 

[SpaceBall1]

Probably if it had been like that, it would not have aroused the curiosity or interest of many, it is the freak circus syndrome, it horrifies you, but you have to see it.
I for one had to see it, but I will not play it, as it's not to my liking, my curiosity is satiated by seeing the images and reading a little of the comments, however I wish good luck to the dev.

I appreciate you. Honestly I think some of the “freak” comments and “ugly” and “horror” are a little extreme. I mean yeah there are 3 characters who are old and a little over weight. But the guys at the poker table are skinny and older and 3 of the 4 aren’t ugly, and they are more important to the story then the 2 in the beginning. Hiro and mr. Wang aren’t that bad. I made the little Mr. Yoshi as a joke but he is fun.

 

[Joshua Tree]

Probably if it had been like that, it would not have aroused the curiosity or interest of many, it is the freak circus syndrome, it horrifies you, but you have to see it.
I for one had to see it, but I will not play it, as it's not to my liking, my curiosity is satiated by seeing the images and reading a little of the comments, however I wish good luck to the dev.

Not really. that's like say you have to watch the most fucked up porn ever just because you curious. Watch things that make me crawl into a fetus positon and have bad dreams for days, I just don't do.

I suppose if creators tried to make their characters more "normies", it would ask to much of them to create a good story and characters

 

[El Tanque]

Not really. that's like say you have to watch the most fucked up porn ever just because you curious. Watch things that make me crawl into a fetus positon and have bad dreams for days, I just don't do.

I suppose if creators tried to make their characters more "normies", it would ask to much of them to create a good story and characters

That's why I started my comment with the word "probably", it was just a hypothesis of mine.

 

[El Tanque]

I appreciate you. Honestly I think some of the “freak” comments and “ugly” and “horror” are a little extreme. I mean yeah there are 3 characters who are old and a little over weight. But the guys at the poker table are skinny and older and 3 of the 4 aren’t ugly, and they are more important to the story then the 2 in the beginning. Hiro and mr. Wang aren’t that bad. I made the little Mr. Yoshi as a joke but he is fun.

I'm not criticizing your game, I haven't even played it, I just got a little curious and saw the images, maybe I got carried away by what others have written and generalized all male npc as ugly.
But in general I don't like playing games as a woman.
As a fellow developer I hope you do very well with your game.

 

[SpaceBall1]

I'm not criticizing your game, I haven't even played it, I just got a little curious and saw the images, maybe I got carried away by what others have written and generalized all male npc as ugly.
But in general I don't like playing games as a woman.
As a fellow developer I hope you do very well with your game.

I didn’t take it as criticism. I understand that some people will like it, and some won’t. Thank you again for your comment and encouragement. Good luck to you too.

 

[Miss Kobayashi's]

the game is like all games with such a default genre and as always grandfathers touch a young and innocent girl and stick if the developer does not add something new the game, like all games, becomes a default

 

[Miss Kobayashi's]

"Then the problems start to snowball as the day goes on. Before she even knows it, every man in the town has bullseye on her body." lmao

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I totally agree with this dude the default theme in all games

 

[FMag]

Looks incredibly good, a lot of potential. Thanks dev!

 

[Shad0wCha0s]

android?