- Dec 2, 2018
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I like your game and i hope it gets updated soon! It's not for everyone but real life scenarios and 'ugly' like the ones portrayed here are a big plus for me. So keep up the good work!
FYIW I enjoyed this so far and I really hope the negative comments don't distract you from your project! I would love to see where you're going with this!
- Dec 16, 2019
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I am not worried about the ugly guys i am worried about the poor girl who have no option to redeem herself. She gets bullied into alot of unwanted event and not choice on the outcome at this stage might aswell watch a movie also no control. She is saving herself for marriage now every all of the sudden wants to fuck and abuse her because she gave a pervert shit. That sucks big time. If it was my daughter those fat ugly buts would rot in a river somewhere.
- Dec 16, 2019
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Hey there. I appreciate your POV. Please don't take offense to anything that goes on in this game. She's not real and nobody was hurt in the making of this game. However, I am glad that I was able to make people like you emotionally attached to a character. That makes me feel good because I am really trying to write a story. Thank you
- Apr 27, 2020
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Everyone is concentrating on the old men. What about this new relationship. Did anyone like it? This isn't the only part these two are going to have in the game.Maybe they can join in on bullying Rayanne. But you obviously have your own plans.
- Aug 23, 2019
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Hat's off to SpaceBall1 , you've got a whopper of a game and generated lot of interest right off the bat. Follow your gut and don't let the crowd here dilute your imagination for this project. There's a vocal and rabid contingent that insist on interjecting themselves on any game that does cater to them.
- Dec 27, 2017
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This is your conundrum: while everyone knows that none of this is real, it is your job to develop the characters so that we DO get attached to them. So don't be surprised that people take offense when something bad happens to a likable character. If Felix Salten were alive and writing today, he would be getting tons of hate posts for killing off Bambi's mother. Saying that it's just a novel wouldn't help.
Now, your further conundrum is to make the story good enough (or sexy enough) so that people will continue playing in spite of any bad things that might happen to Rayanne. You also have quite a bit of competition for the 'corrupted innocent' out there. So a 'difference maker' would help.
I can only say for myself that I finished the release without hitting the Quit button. I enjoyed it enough so that I'll stay with it and try the next one, but no promises that I'll be able to finish that one.
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Good, because sometimes I want a different darker story apart from the same typical slow burn vanilla corruption games. Anyway, good luck
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- Sep 17, 2017
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Thoughts after playing the first update
Overall, really looking forward to seeing where this one goes.
Will be curious in particular to see how Rayanne progresses with all the different men around her, will they all slowly build on her until she crosses the sex threshold with all of them at around the same stage later in the story - or will some of her 'relationships' move faster than others to get sex content in the game sooner. Can't wait to play moreand find out.
Also - I see some people in the comments criticizing the male character design - Fuck 'Em. If they don't know what Ugly Bastard is and/or they don't like it then they can play something else.
Good luck SpaceBall1!
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Overall, really looking forward to seeing where this one goes.
Will be curious in particular to see how Rayanne progresses with all the different men around her, will they all slowly build on her until she crosses the sex threshold with all of them at around the same stage later in the story - or will some of her 'relationships' move faster than others to get sex content in the game sooner. Can't wait to play moreand find out.
Also - I see some people in the comments criticizing the male character design - Fuck 'Em. If they don't know what Ugly Bastard is and/or they don't like it then they can play something else.
Good luck SpaceBall1!
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Hey Jude...I love that song btw...Wow, thank you so much for your input. To be honest I didn't notice the hairline thing so it was not intentional but I am not worried about it. I am being completely biased when I say that my character Rayanne is the most beautiful girl in any game...because it's my game lol.
Yes Ellen has the same hairstyle and it was because when I was making that scene I didn't have enough different hair styles. But I tried to make it seems like she copied Rayanne on purpose to get to Andrew. I am going to fix that the next time you see her. Also if you noticed, the makeup I put on Ellen makes her face a different color than her body and I didn't se that until it was all finished. I wasn't going back and changing it so my remedy will be that Andrew sees her without makeup and tells her that he prefers her that way...problem solving and critical thinking skills. Ellen is evil and she is a replacement of Rayanne for Andrew so one could say the "evil version" is already in place.
Thank you for catching the missing ** signs. I'll fix it.
- Feb 20, 2021
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Very promising start. I love the story so far. keep up the good work! When is the next one coming out?
- Jun 8, 2017
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That doesn't change that what kained said is still correct though. Obviously this game has sexual themes you strongly dislike. That's fine, but maybe it would be easier to just move on to another game then.
I am already working on renders and writing the script. I don’t plan on making everyone wait too long.
