- Apr 22, 2018
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Totally in
Spoiler!
My first minutes: alright... but.. whats up with all the "that"s ? sounds like german english.
*clicks further* "across the globe world leaders wait to see what this america..." never mind. probably not what europeans would write/think these days. not the millenials at least.
But... Olivia... her boyfriends name is Brad? And.. Brad P.. eh... Brad Fermont is president now. So.... shes kinda the first lady?!
probably not. but Brad really made an impression here, didnt he? ;P
.... I m two minutes late at most...
my reaction?
*press flirt* I m a flirtmachine. Its so easy. Just pressa button and let em boys melt xD
*success*
wait... what? pounds? they pay in pounds? What kind of america is this? :O
... oohh we re in london. my mistake. so Olivias enthusiasm about Brad... eh... Fermont becoming president really was just for the looks. Noted.
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constructive criticism:
Male lips look very feminin and colourful,
let someone recheck the expressions. Some things dont sound native.
personal dislike: Enzo. what a greasy guy. I d "accidentally" drop his coffe right over his groin if hed call me "baby" after mere 30 seconds of conversation (Wouldnt be the first time xD), even telling me what I think and want.
I like dominant men. But Enzo... greasy!
Anyway. Interesting start, even more interesting and promising plot and hopefully more characters coming to have good choices who to get close with.
So I m definetly in!!! And I cant wait to see the games overall develpoment
mc kinda looks familiar... but hair and eye-colour are new ;P
Spoiler!
My first minutes: alright... but.. whats up with all the "that"s ? sounds like german english.
*clicks further* "across the globe world leaders wait to see what this america..." never mind. probably not what europeans would write/think these days. not the millenials at least.
But... Olivia... her boyfriends name is Brad? And.. Brad P.. eh... Brad Fermont is president now. So.... shes kinda the first lady?!
probably not. but Brad really made an impression here, didnt he? ;P
.... I m two minutes late at most...
my reaction?
*press flirt* I m a flirtmachine. Its so easy. Just pressa button and let em boys melt xD
*success*
wait... what? pounds? they pay in pounds? What kind of america is this? :O
... oohh we re in london. my mistake. so Olivias enthusiasm about Brad... eh... Fermont becoming president really was just for the looks. Noted.
_______________________________________________
constructive criticism:
Male lips look very feminin and colourful,
let someone recheck the expressions. Some things dont sound native.
personal dislike: Enzo. what a greasy guy. I d "accidentally" drop his coffe right over his groin if hed call me "baby" after mere 30 seconds of conversation (Wouldnt be the first time xD), even telling me what I think and want.
I like dominant men. But Enzo... greasy!
Anyway. Interesting start, even more interesting and promising plot and hopefully more characters coming to have good choices who to get close with.
So I m definetly in!!! And I cant wait to see the games overall develpoment
mc kinda looks familiar... but hair and eye-colour are new ;P
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