Well, in all honesty, these game over choices are big BS! Especially the one where you have to choose a drive to pull. You have to make a choice without knowing if this will give a game over or not, just to play on. And then about 10-15 minutes later you get that stupid-ass-fucking-bs game over. Who in the developer team (if this a team) thought "hey, let's annoy the players with random game overs"? Please kick that asshat! Because those choices don't add anything to the story or gameplay wise!
So, now that the rant is over, some feedback on the rest of the game. The story seems interesting so far, I'm not through the demo just yet, will finish it tomorrow. The visuals, well, not the greatest in my book. It looks like a mix of DAZ and AI and I have no clue, why someone would mix these two. Models are fine though.
As for kinks/fetishes, my humble suggestion would be to clarify them now. It will definitely keep the thread a more civilized and "cleaner", than adding the more controversial things later one, especially when they seem to appear out of nowhere.
Much success!