VN Ren'Py Abandoned Horizon of Passion [v0.5] [Line of lust]

[EvilChef]

Are the renders fixed yet? Or does the game still look like a giant grainy smudge? (Writing quality aside...)

I just can't deal with how bad the game actually looked. And worse was that it wasn't always the whole image either... usually just people's faces etc. It was horrible.

Still smudged.

 

[Baharomont]

Boooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooored....
The Story and Art what i see 1000 times already...
And Low Fap-Fap Content... At least for Now...

 

[Line of lust]

Oh, I think if I get to the full quality, there will still be comments about how bad it is
I have already taken into account all the shortcomings, but the fact is that I have found good native speakers and do not understand why starting from version 0.4 the translation into English is so bad. About the scenes starting from 0.4 they are not so bad, but with the rework they will be even better, which has already started...

 

[Line of lust]

As for the story, I understand that it's not as exciting as I would like it to be with full interactivity, but then again, I wrote the story with full interactivity and the fact that I didn't have the opportunity and I had to twist out, and it seriously undermined the reputation of the game.

 

[Famescua]

Well I just replayed the game. Yes the renders aren't the best but they are passable. I've seen better but I've also seen worse. The story has potential, but the translation really needs work. I still saw that scene where the girl was forced to give another guy a bj. That is not really my thing. Wether or not she is a bitch is besides the point. I was under the impression that we would get a choice to see it or not to see it. Just so you know there are some people that will say it doesn't matter there are also alot that will stay away from the game because of it. I've seen it happen a few times already. I don't like it myself but didn't really care as long as we get to decide if we will do stuff with the girl after that. I don't like being railroaded into situations I'd rather choose myself. MC still has issues with letting girls/women basically order him around. So kinda weak mc, hopefully that will change in future updates of this game.

 

[Rindarion]

The english translation could use a bit of work but other than that i think the game is pretty decent so far.

 

[9inchz]

Your mom and sister decided to change the situation and move to the new place. As it turnes out, you are going to move to a new place where you and your family are hoping for a new

incest?

 

[Line of lust]

incest?

Yes

 

[Line of lust]

The translation was corrected, now everyone has to get the point.

 

[EvilChef]

The translation was corrected, now everyone has to get the point.

Ok, i'm gonna give it a shot once the new translation is out. As i stated before, the story seemed kinda cheesy 70's porn, which i honestly find amusing. The translation was appalling though. So with a good translation i have no doubt it can be a good game.

 

[Line of lust]

Ok, i'm gonna give it a shot once the new translation is out. As i stated before, the story seemed kinda cheesy 70's porn, which i honestly find amusing. The translation was appalling though. So with a good translation i have no doubt it can be a good game.

The translation has already been corrected and the links have been updated, so you can do it right now.

 

[EvilChef]

The translation has already been corrected and the links have been updated, so you can do it right now.

Got to the first day of school, so far the translation is a heck of a lot better. A few strange oddities, but VERY much improved.
Edit. Yep, playd through it completely now and it's a LOT better.

 

[botc76]

my early comments stand..engrish is not as bad..but..the game is.."polite words to avoid a warning condemnation of the game"

Thanks! You suffer the horrible game, so I won't have to. Needs of the few and all.

hafta be..some people dont like me and look for any opportunity to report me..ima target

Reported!

 

[Line of lust]

I want to inform you that now the game is in processing and after it will be added full interactivity with the map, improved quality of all locations, scenes, as well as improved appearance of the characters and will eliminate all the defects (including translation into English) that I know about at the moment. Thank you for your support.

 

[rafa30]

Good Game
More scene Olivia and MC

 

[Line of lust]

Good Game
More scene Olivia and MC

This should be the third good review of this visual novel for adults in the history of this forum, now I will take a screenshot of this review, print and hang on the wall

 

[Benn Swagger]

Line of lust ... if you want to get help, go join Dev Hub's discord channel. It's a channel limited only for Developers & creators, not random wankers. They dedicated that channel to support fellow developer, sharing their knowledge & connection. People who know how hard making something, instead just playing & whining.

Since I'm not moderator of that channel, all I can say is, join F95 discord, ask N7, or Sam, or KinneyX23 to be invited into that channel. When you joined, DM the mods with your patreon or website of your game, so you will have developer roles. After that read the rules, then join the chat. Make sure asking problem on proper channel, don't asking randomly in general chat. If you have coding problem, ask on # coding_talk channel ... in animation problem (modeling & rendering) ask on # 3d_talk channel.

 

[Zerex123]

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Can I link to the second game from your signature?)

 

[cxx]

Can I link to the second game from your signature?)

if you are asking link to that game then here https://f95zone.to/threads/reluctant-archon-ch-4-part-one-kyois.27830/

 

[Deleted member 1486785]

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