VN Ren'Py Abandoned Horizon of Passion [v0.5] [Line of lust]

4.00 star(s) 1 Vote

Fragmandk

Active Member
Game Developer
Jul 3, 2017
525
1,116
wow what is up with all those games using Iray DeNoiser common learn to render before you make a game
 
Last edited:
  • Like
Reactions: Bryon Smothers

Famescua

Active Member
Donor
Compressor
Aug 10, 2018
648
1,677
Ok I remember the other game now, lol. I'll replay the update of this game and give my take on it. This time without mixing up another game with it.
Also just so you know the other game was called something special.
 

EvilChef

Well-Known Member
Sep 23, 2016
1,124
1,494
my early comments stand..engrish is not as bad..but..the game is.."polite words to avoid a warning condemnation of the game"
You are way too kind m8.
I've playd up until the first day of school now and i have to take a break before my brainz goes all gooey on me.
 
  • Like
Reactions: Line of lust

eddie987

Well-Known Member
Dec 5, 2018
1,527
6,964
So what i understand from the comments mc is another spineless beta cuck that just sits and watches as a loved one gets blackmailed into a blowjob? Well good enough to stop me from trying the game,good luck with your project dev,its clearly not for everyone... Edit : maybe someone can add new tags as blackmail,rape or whatever the fuck is going on in that bathroom
She's not a loved one, and I'm not sure if she will be a love interest in the future or not (although at some point the MC is jerking off while thinking that she's riding him), since she's the school bully's gf, but at the end of the previous update the MC runs into the school janitor or something like that, blackmailing her into a bj and he just stands there, doing nothing. He's supposed to be shocked, but as I see it he's either a cuck (he was beating the meat for her, but now he stands there watching someone using her) or a douche (he doesn't care because she's a bitch). Either way he's another unlikeable MC.
 

DarkSithLord47

Well-Known Member
Mar 10, 2019
1,033
4,344
She's not a loved one, and I'm not sure if she will be a love interest in the future or not (although at some point the MC is jerking off while thinking that she's riding him), since she's the school bully's gf, but at the end of the previous update the MC runs into the school janitor or something like that, blackmailing her into a bj and he just stands there, doing nothing. He's supposed to be shocked, but as I see it he's either a cuck (he was beating the meat for her, but now he stands there watching someone using her) or a douche (he doesn't care because she's a bitch). Either way he's another unlikeable MC.
Thanks for clarifying that,definitely not gonna play a game with that kind of mc.
 

EZ8lt

Engaged Member
Dec 24, 2019
2,457
5,388
She's not a loved one, and I'm not sure if she will be a love interest in the future or not (although at some point the MC is jerking off while thinking that she's riding him), since she's the school bully's gf, but at the end of the previous update the MC runs into the school janitor or something like that, blackmailing her into a bj and he just stands there, doing nothing. He's supposed to be shocked, but as I see it he's either a cuck (he was beating the meat for her, but now he stands there watching someone using her) or a douche (he doesn't care because she's a bitch). Either way he's another unlikeable MC.
Letting a bitch treated like a bitch won't make you a douche.
 
  • Like
Reactions: Line of lust
May 30, 2017
436
2,721
Note: I apologize for translating the first version of the game. Now everything is fixed and the comments below about the translation are not valid and can be misleading.
decided to change the situation
As it turnes out
a new, radiant life.
As it turnes out, translation still are not valid. Use of English still not norml, even after dev decided to change the situation. He apologizes for translating the first version of the game, presumably because he is no longer translating it at all, leading him to a new, radiant life.
 
  • Like
Reactions: Line of lust

EZ8lt

Engaged Member
Dec 24, 2019
2,457
5,388
Doesnt matter if she deserves it or not,some of us just dont like sitting and watching as someone else is being blackmailed/raped or shit like that without a choice to interfere or not,not everyone is a voyeur or a beta ;)
Letting someone who is weak being abused by someone stronger makes you a douche, no matter if that someone is a bitch. Maybe she's is a bitch because she's been blackmailed into sucking someone's dick.
Watching someone, who at the previous day literally bursted into your home uninvited, began to attack you and then your roommate/sister without any real explanation or reasoning, is fine. I get if you have hero complex, and sure, I'd help out a stranger or someone whom I know is not a dickwad, but calling this being a beta or a cuck, that's just fucking stupid. :D Btw Nihilus dude, without playing the game and knowing the scene, jumping to the hoots is not a good idea ;)
 
  • Like
Reactions: Line of lust

DarkSithLord47

Well-Known Member
Mar 10, 2019
1,033
4,344
Btw Nihilus dude, without playing the game and knowing the scene, jumping to the hoots is not a good idea
I dont need to play the game to know its not to my liking if i dont have a choice to stop that scene or not. Here's the thing i like having choices in the games i play and i know i'm a hypocrite for saying this but if i'm the one doing the corruption/blackmail etc i'm fine with it... if someone else is doing it without me having a saying in it its a game over for me... its as simple as that,staying there and watching someone else getting his dick sucked by blackmail/force..well let's just say i'll leave that for other people ;)
 

eddie987

Well-Known Member
Dec 5, 2018
1,527
6,964
Watching someone, who at the previous day literally bursted into your home uninvited, began to attack you and then your roommate/sister without any real explanation or reasoning, is fine. I get if you have hero complex, and sure, I'd help out a stranger or someone whom I know is not a dickwad, but calling this being a beta or a cuck, that's just fucking stupid. :D Btw Nihilus dude, without playing the game and knowing the scene, jumping to the hoots is not a good idea ;)
So sexual assault is ok, as long as the person being assaulted is a bitch and if you don't like people being sexual assaulted, when you can easily stop it, you have a hero complex... Makes sense... Like everything else in this game...
Also when you have the hots for someone (like I said, the MC was jerking off thinking that he wants to fuck her) and you just stand there watching, when someone is forcing that person into a bj, you kinda are a cuck.
 

EvilChef

Well-Known Member
Sep 23, 2016
1,124
1,494
Ok, i think this game gave me an aneurysm. Seriously Line of Lust, get urself a native English speaker to do the translations. I'm not usually the person to bash on a dev, but seriously the Engrish was torturous.
If and i say if the Engrish gets lessened it's not impossible that this game could become entertaining. Because of the hilarious 70's porn movie vibe i get from it.
 

hyco2

Member
Sep 15, 2017
147
289
I have played this. And then I stopped, because there is no fun in it. I have no idea what will come, and I'm not interested.

Bad things:
- Engrish. I know it has been mentioned in this thread. It is worth mentioning again.
- Renders. They are often so badly edited it throws you out of the game. Also, a forest consists of 1 tree and some sad dune leading to the murky waters of chemical dissolution. I was surprised they left the water with still having meat on the bones.
- Story/interface. It is freeroam, only it isn't, because you are railroaded to do what you have to do now. Mostly it is a walk action walk sleep rhythm. You don't play, you work under strict supervision. I can do that, but not without payment. Also, uninteresting.

Good things:
- Tits, i guess.

Sorry, dev, I don't think this game is a feather in your cap!
 

Mormont

Devoted Member
Nov 30, 2018
11,925
53,076
I was hoping I didn't have to see that scene with Hannah again certainly more going on with her in this update than meets the eye but what rotten timing for Olivia to walk in on that, of course, that would happen :LOL: Not a fan of these other girls getting into certain situations either.
 

phreadom

Active Member
Sep 2, 2017
652
1,279
Are the renders fixed yet? Or does the game still look like a giant grainy smudge? (Writing quality aside...)

I just can't deal with how bad the game actually looked. And worse was that it wasn't always the whole image either... usually just people's faces etc. It was horrible. :(
 
4.00 star(s) 1 Vote