You have to look beyond what incest is: familiarity and power imbalance. Within the premise of the story, you have both, even without a blood relation. But on top of it you get also what I tried to describe in #957.
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well dam what a game ...... i fucking love this game .... sorry i'm retired and can't afford to help the Dev.
i gotta tell ya this is a fucking awesome game
awesome story .... awesome renders ....
i gotta tell ya this is a fucking awesome game
awesome story .... awesome renders ....
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Great game so far; I like it a lot.
It could use a proofread, though. There's missing and superfluous articles and prepositions. Sometimes characters just say stuff in really weird ways (e.g. "It was necessary to stop the blood as soon as possible."; nobody talks like that. Something like "I needed to stop the bleeding" would feel much more natural.) Also, the "closet" that hides Ghosts's bunker, isn't a closet, it's a shelf.
There are two small errors in continuity that I found. First, when MC first gets home and talks to Miranda, they talk about how MC had sex with Diana, which may not have happened. And later, during the meeting with Mongul, Rat King is brought up like the reader is supposed to know him, but his introduction was optional, so this can be a point of confusion.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to more of this. Good luck, dev.
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It could use a proofread, though. There's missing and superfluous articles and prepositions. Sometimes characters just say stuff in really weird ways (e.g. "It was necessary to stop the blood as soon as possible."; nobody talks like that. Something like "I needed to stop the bleeding" would feel much more natural.) Also, the "closet" that hides Ghosts's bunker, isn't a closet, it's a shelf.
There are two small errors in continuity that I found. First, when MC first gets home and talks to Miranda, they talk about how MC had sex with Diana, which may not have happened. And later, during the meeting with Mongul, Rat King is brought up like the reader is supposed to know him, but his introduction was optional, so this can be a point of confusion.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to more of this. Good luck, dev.
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Just found this gem. Great game with an interesting plot. Like LGM I too noticed some of the wording was a bit weird and that there were some inconsistencies with the dialogue at time. Noticed some parts of the incest patch are at times not working as well, such as the daughter's addressing MC by name or Miranda referring to them as step-daughter's. Overall a good game, excited to see where this project continues from here.
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This is one great game even though I can't support it now I just wanna say Great work dev I love it a lot!.
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Glad more people are finding this game and that it's finally getting the attention it deserves
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MC will get to find that out on account of his wonderful babes ... or not, on account of his
distaste for her. Making people hate her is her only defining trait.
distaste for her. Making people hate her is her only defining trait.
Wrong character in
(Why does every line end with an empty comment?)
v005_007.rpy:
Code:
mcnick "You promised to help me..."#
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Yes, thanks, there is a bug. The "#" is a service symbol for the translation program, it doesn't affect anything.
