Greetings,
first I would like to thank all the comments!
I'm collecting all your feedback to work on the next versions.
thank you very much for your time spent with this evaluation!
some feedbacks:
-> Pics look grainy:
I'll work on it! I may not be able to render the images in chapter 1 again. But this will certainly be improved in chapter 2. I will do my best trying to render again... or the best of my computer. Hehehe
-> Crappy animations:
Well, I'm going to try to improve it. Sorry.
-> Text are difficult to read and bad english:
Maybe I'm going to need help on it. But... Working on it!
-> Bugs:
I already taked notes about your feedbacks... already working on it.
-> Mac Version:
Yes, I'm going to upload as soon as possible.
-> Story difficult to understand:
Yes... I'm going to work on it. Is related to bad English. But I'm going to focus on it.
Thank you guys!
dolgargula