Yes he was an accident and sorry, you can't change it.Also why is his nickname Oops? Was he an accident? lol And how do I change it?
Yes he was an accident and sorry, you can't change it.Also why is his nickname Oops? Was he an accident? lol And how do I change it?
All opinions are welcome even the ones I might disagree with. They all help in the long run.Sorry to give some bad criticism, but the MC is unlikable, dumb and selfish, furthermore the writing is bad.
Too much infodumping at once and the way the MC talks to himself and/or his own brain is cringe-worthy and this (talking to himself) happens too much.
I would suggest getting some creative writing classes or some help with the writing from an established (VN) writer.
Pretty nice renders though, good luck and don't give up.
p.s. All above is my personal opinion, nothing more.
You never played the original Unity version?So the 3 girls that are staying have now been revealed can't wait to see what will happen next especially with Cassie and Megan it seems the fuse has already been lit for those two hating each other, helping Charlotte with her shyness is going to be fun as well already small signs of her coming out of her shell, not bad so far still early in development so will give this one time to see where it goes.
Can't say that I have no this is the first time I've played this one wasn't aware that it was originally on Unity.You never played the original Unity version?
Ah, I was wondering, because the story isn't really that different so far, so you'd know some of what's in store with the girls.Can't say that I have no this is the first time I've played this one wasn't aware that it was originally on Unity.
I must have been playing a different game then or my eyes must suck.Ah, I was wondering, because the story isn't really that different so far, so you'd know some of what's in store with the girls.
The Unity version suffered from leaps in quality of the renders for each update (so that the differences between the first chapter and the second alone were really jarring to see)+ the usual Unity quirks, due to that I understood the need for a reboot very well.
You are right, I will amend it but keep this as showing I was wrong.That's not any better.
Either it's "Were you just checking" or it's "We're just checking" - Without context i don't which you're aiming for to be correct. Either way the correction of the incorrect grammar also had an error.
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We will be testing the next build very soon and hope to have the next update out sometime in mid December.Still no update?