VN Ren'Py Abandoned House of Seduction[v2.2] [Madzeal]

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Keldar

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Ok so the beginning looks promising, new models are sexier than in 0.1 but please have mercy on us with the NTR and let the MC save his sweet busty mom from that fucker. Also u should start making the MC a bad ass ... the lazy, no job, wimpy MC cliché may not have the impact u want on players. Looking forward to see how it goes ...

Good luck with the project ! (y)
By the end of 0.2 I got a job had 1 of the women fantasying about the MC and was in a relationship another, setting the ground world for a threesome. So that seems pretty non wimpy to me. But I had to help people out, clean the house when asked, not snap at people who got angry at me and not be max from big brother.

I found if you took non childish insecure options aka what a Incel would call the beta options because they think aggression and being an ass is alpha which explains why they are incels as they learn the wrong lessons, you take steps to being a man. You help out the household so the women know they can rely on you, you get a job and you show respect to the women. There is a reason why if you take these options the women start to desire the MC because it shows confidence and responsibility, which is how you actually get a girl in real life. Being a typical "bad ass" makes you a wimp because its all posturing and insecurity and women will see through that, the only thing being a "bad ass" has going for him is the illusion of confidence but being respectful, helping out women who need help and having a job doesn't exclude showing confidence. You show confidence, respect and have a job and you are ahead of the "bad ass" as these fools always fuck up as they are insecure and you can't hide insecurity for long.

Also Elaine/Mom isn't in a relationship with the MC so there is no NTR, seriously that is non subtle difference. If meg goes on a date with someone else then that is NTR, because she is having a relationship with the MC. Just because a female character goes out with someone other than the main character in a game doesn't make it NTR, they have to be in a relationship. Seriously the way some people talk they would call the MC sleeping with another man's wife NTR because she still fucks her husband after her affair with a MC.
 
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Lonewolf007

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I think the Elaine should hook with m.c. instead of the other guy . I would like the m.c to have the option to get rid of him at least and hook up with Elaine instead . adding the option would please both sides of this [ just a Idea ] so far good game
 

Akamari

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So I saw your review and we see eye to eye on some things and not on others which is to be expected as games are a subjective media so what you and I like will be different. But I was curious about one point you made.

You said the MC was an asshole. How much of that was your choice do you think? In my playthrough I was respectful, helpful and didn't set up the perv app. I did not get the impression that the MC was an asshole at all. I not sure what the storyline was with being a prick but for me playing the non asshole options the women became attracted to the MC and fantasized about him and things progressed from there. They felt they could rely and trust the MC so they developed feelings for the MC. I pretty much played a laid back secure guy so when someone insulted me I pretty much ignored it because I didn't let insecurities cause me to take the bait. The game seem to acknowledge said choices and I didn't seem like an asshole. I am curious if this is a case of us not seeing eye to eye of if the game has enough depth to give us two divergent paths for the MC, one a decent chap the other an asshole.

I snipped out most of your quote as it wasn't relevant to what I wanted to ask you...
OK, my bad. It seems I somehow clicked too fast and accepted to install that app. This is one of the reasons why I like the options to either rollback or at least check past dialogue.

You're right, MC doesn't have to be an asshole. I'll edit it out of my review. Thanks.
 

xXwankerXx

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Also Elaine/Mom isn't in a relationship with the MC so there is no NTR
You do know most people get pissed at the idea of having MC's mom fuck some other dude than him do u ... it's no NTR ok but you're trying "to rebuild" your relationship with her so that kinda makes you interested in his mom, in a sexual way in future updates as the dev stated, thus the NTR reference. I don't know about u bruh but if I have to share my women, I'll do it only with other women.

Also you don't seem to make a diference between being a bad ass and a douche (your version of a "bad ass" = insecure pussy, or poor Cassie who flaunts her bitchy attitude just to hide her past trauma) ... by making him more of a bad ass (not insecure pussy) I meant the dev should make the MC the exact oposite of what he is now ... confident, supportive of women (especially those he tries to seduce), getting a fucking job to make a dough, but most important more of a charming dom (not the stereotypical asshole, one who knows how to make a lady fall for him ;)) the sub/good boy relationship with Meg may not be everyone's cup of tea.
 

Krull

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Nerttu

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@Nerttu, I just installed the latest version (2018.3.2f1), it's the same.
What you mean "installed" ???? You just extracted the loaded .rar file and you are good to go !!! My previous version saves or profile (v1.2) don`t work, so I´m quite sure, I have to start all over again !!!! You could try to delete the Hos folder in your /LocalLow/madZeal folder and allso start all over !!!
 

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Could a nice kind person add this to the OP please.
 
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lTTMl

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@Nerttu, I deleted the file save "hos" in "\ AppData \ LocalLow \ madZeal" it does not work. I have other Unity games, I have no problem, so it does not come from me.

@Madzeal, I did not know it thank you, but the save does not work.
 
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