VN Ren'Py Abandoned Hunger for Chaos [v0.2] [SuperWriter]

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its not bad but, i dont get the incest tag or the sci-fi tag. did i miss a scene where two family members have sexual contact with intent? i only see a shower scene where washing was happening. a real stretch to call that incest.
nor did i see anything remotely sci-fi

im all for advertising but the tags are for current content, there's a whole OP and feed for that other own trumpet blowing

that being said, its a short intro so its way to early to know if anything interesting will evolve but the renders are solid enough so the V is fine. hopefully the N will be at least as good
This is an adult game with two roommates. I think you can assume where it's going lol. As for the sci-fi tag, it will make sense very soon, but there is a lot more story to tell. You won't get all the answers in the first chapter

I think the games is pretty cool so far , can't wait to se the rest of the story .. 1 thing tho .. i don't like food in my hair .... lmao jk
Lmao Thanks a lot for playing! Chapter 2 will be out this month
 

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Now I am in a bit of a quandary. HfC had Torri and I loved her character and how well she fit the MC. I was happy to hear that she'd be back in JaB, but now that I've played the first chapter...

I am just too in love with the MC/Val/Mila dynamic that I don't want to risk it by going after other girls! :LOL:

A great start to the game, and the three main characters' oddly close relationship raises a lot of questions that I'm looking forward to hearing the answers to. I mean, sleeping all in the same bed, tickle/cuddle fights, romantic dancing are all one thing (and it all came across as adorably intimate but not lewd) but who showers with their twin and younger sisters when they are in their 20s (I assume)? And just the offhand "you've got a huge dick, bro" comment.

We know something happened to their parents (dead or missing), but that's extreme even so and I'm eager to find out why that is.

Add on weird pod person Piper and I really want to see where this goes.

And I'll admit... I want to see how Torri can work her way back into the story and if I'll care for her as much as I did previously.
 

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Damn another good one I've got a few questions but I'm gonna wait for more story I mean we're only on #1 so I guess your supposed to have questions I do love that torrie's back looking forward to seeing how her and the girls interact? Also looking forward to finding out more about pipper? That girls definitely got a story keep up the goods (y)
 

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Now I am in a bit of a quandary. HfC had Torri and I loved her character and how well she fit the MC. I was happy to hear that she'd be back in JaB, but now that I've played the first chapter...

I am just too in love with the MC/Val/Mila dynamic that I don't want to risk it by going after other girls! :LOL:

A great start to the game, and the three main characters' oddly close relationship raises a lot of questions that I'm looking forward to hearing the answers to. I mean, sleeping all in the same bed, tickle/cuddle fights, romantic dancing are all one thing (and it all came across as adorably intimate but not lewd) but who showers with their twin and younger sisters when they are in their 20s (I assume)? And just the offhand "you've got a huge dick, bro" comment.

We know something happened to their parents (dead or missing), but that's extreme even so and I'm eager to find out why that is.

Add on weird pod person Piper and I really want to see where this goes.

And I'll admit... I want to see how Torri can work her way back into the story and if I'll care for her as much as I did previously.
Really happy on your review of the game and that you enjoyed the reboot! Definitely a lot of questions, but they will be answered! Chapter 2 will be out very soon

we need a landlady :D

Ps: I liked hunger for chaos too cant say which one i like more both are pretty good
Glad that you think the reboot is just as good! So much more coming, I promise

Damn another good one I've got a few questions but I'm gonna wait for more story I mean we're only on #1 so I guess your supposed to have questions I do love that torrie's back looking forward to seeing how her and the girls interact? Also looking forward to finding out more about pipper? That girls definitely got a story keep up the goods (y)
Thanks a lot, man. And yeah, a lot of shit is happening and there is a lot of story to tell! Got a lot more good stuff coming for you
 

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So are going to have a choice with who joins the harem and will this be an actual harem or what goes for harem on this site? Also is there a straight not slutty girl in this game because at this point they are a mythical creature?
 

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So are going to have a choice with who joins the harem and will this be an actual harem or what goes for harem on this site? Also is there a straight not slutty girl in this game because at this point they are a mythical creature?
I don't think there will be a harem in this game because this is not your standard slice of Life, but a sci-fi mystery. As for the slutty girls, none of mine are, so not sure what you are talking about there
 

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I must say I'm impressed with how this has gone. I did enjoy the original version but I like how this one feels now it's got that less dark feel to it. Not sure what to make of Piper she seems a little bit off especially that bit about her dream of being a ghost. Valentina and Camilla are great and I noticed the girl from the original is on the menu screen so hope we get to see her soon. And again great job with the revamp (y)
 

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I don't think there will be a harem in this game because this is not your standard slice of Life, but a sci-fi mystery. As for the slutty girls, none of mine are, so not sure what you are talking about there
If there is not going to be harem in this game I would suggest removing the tag as it is misleading to those that use the tags to find kinks they like. The question about slutty girls was more of a general question and not one directed at you personally.
 

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I don't think there will be a harem in this game because this is not your standard slice of Life, but a sci-fi mystery. As for the slutty girls, none of mine are, so not sure what you are talking about there
It's been a recurring theme in a lot of games recently, so I think that's why he asked. I've seen a bunch of games where all women are bisexual and ready to bang anyone in sight because... I don't know, "reasons". I mean, I know some people like fuckfests, but what's the point of "conquering" someone who's already banging everyone left and right? Peeing with a morning wood is a bigger challenge than that... I personally see it as lazy writting and a "need" to add sex scenes just for the sake of it. Anyway, that doesn't have anything to do with your games, so it doesn't really matter. It just seems that it made some people more cautious.

Now, about the reboot. I actually liked the darker theme in the original version, but I also like the premise of the new one so far, so I can't really say if I prefer one over the other. It's nice to see that Torry will be coming back in this version too (with the same personality hopefully) and from what I saw so far, Val is probably going to be my second favourite character in your games (Sorry Sasha, third place is not bad). What I like in all the characters you've created (in the other games too) is that they are all unique. Not in the sense that we never saw the innocent younger "roomate" before for instance, but everyone has his/her own personality that goes beyond any stereotype that they might be based on. I'm not sure how to explain it correctly. They feel more fleshed out I guess. More like a real person, than a porn parody of one.
 

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I must say I'm impressed with how this has gone. I did enjoy the original version but I like how this one feels now it's got that less dark feel to it. Not sure what to make of Piper she seems a little bit off especially that bit about her dream of being a ghost. Valentina and Camilla are great and I noticed the girl from the original is on the menu screen so hope we get to see her soon. And again great job with the revamp (y)
Glad you enjoyed the Reboot so far! And the less dark feel is exactly what I wanted to get rid of, so I'm glad you pointed that out. Torry is back literally next chapter with pretty much all of her same renders. I thought she was perfect the way she is and was introduced

If there is not going to be harem in this game I would suggest removing the tag as it is misleading to those that use the tags to find kinks they like. The question about slutty girls was more of a general question and not one directed at you personally.
Ah, thank you for pointing that out, just remove d the tag. And no, there are no slutty girls in my games.

It's been a recurring theme in a lot of games recently, so I think that's why he asked. I've seen a bunch of games where all women are bisexual and ready to bang anyone in sight because... I don't know, "reasons". I mean, I know some people like fuckfests, but what's the point of "conquering" someone who's already banging everyone left and right? Peeing with a morning wood is a bigger challenge than that... I personally see it as lazy writting and a "need" to add sex scenes just for the sake of it. Anyway, that doesn't have anything to do with your games, so it doesn't really matter. It just seems that it made some people more cautious.

Now, about the reboot. I actually liked the darker theme in the original version, but I also like the premise of the new one so far, so I can't really say if I prefer one over the other. It's nice to see that Torry will be coming back in this version too (with the same personality hopefully) and from what I saw so far, Val is probably going to be my second favourite character in your games (Sorry Sasha, third place is not bad). What I like in all the characters you've created (in the other games too) is that they are all unique. Not in the sense that we never saw the innocent younger "roomate" before for instance, but everyone has his/her own personality that goes beyond any stereotype that they might be based on. I'm not sure how to explain it correctly. They feel more fleshed out I guess. More like a real person, than a porn parody of one.
Ok, that makes more sense when you explain it in that context. and I really appreciate your comments about my characters because that is by far the number one thing I try to get right. you are following these characters for the whole game so they need to feel real and you need to give a fuck about them, so I'm happy that they don't just feel like generic tropes to you!
 

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I don't think there will be a harem in this game because this is not your standard slice of Life, but a sci-fi mystery. As for the slutty girls, none of mine are, so not sure what you are talking about there
After playing the intro, I'm totally fine with not being able to have every LI in the game on one playthrough. I do, however, need to ask if MC can be with both Val and Mila? I don't know if I could make that choice...
 

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After playing the intro, I'm totally fine with not being able to have every LI in the game on one playthrough. I do, however, need to ask if MC can be with both Val and Mila? I don't know if I could make that choice...
Yeah, maybe a mini "harem" or something of that nature? Or perhaps the MC could be in an open relationship with someone else? (Not sure that Val and Mila would want to share but maybe Piper or Torry would be willing to have an open relationship...
 

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Yeah, maybe a mini "harem" or something of that nature? Or perhaps the MC could be in an open relationship with someone else? (Not sure that Val and Mila would want to share but maybe Piper or Torry would be willing to have an open relationship...
For me, it's the sisters that make the most sense given what we know so far. The three of them are close. Weirdly, adorably close. And it's hinted that this is because of what happened to their parents. That experience pulled them together.

Having the MC decide to be with his two girls for the rest of his life makes perfect sense. And the fact is I find both of them and their relationship with MC to be sickeningly loveable.

We'll just have to see where SuperWriter goes with the story.
 

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After playing the intro, I'm totally fine with not being able to have every LI in the game on one playthrough. I do, however, need to ask if MC can be with both Val and Mila? I don't know if I could make that choice...
Yeah, maybe a mini "harem" or something of that nature? Or perhaps the MC could be in an open relationship with someone else? (Not sure that Val and Mila would want to share but maybe Piper or Torry would be willing to have an open relationship...
For me, it's the sisters that make the most sense given what we know so far. The three of them are close. Weirdly, adorably close. And it's hinted that this is because of what happened to their parents. That experience pulled them together.

Having the MC decide to be with his two girls for the rest of his life makes perfect sense. And the fact is I find both of them and their relationship with MC to be sickeningly loveable.

We'll just have to see where SuperWriter goes with the story.
Yeah, you guys have the same mindset as me. There absolutely will be a route where you romance both Valentine and Camila together. As a matter of fact, that might be the only route for them, and not individual routes. they are basically a package deal and it's really hard to picture romancing one without the other because they are so close.

The plan to routes that I currently have,

Valentine + Camilla
Torry
Piper
Torry + Piper

Does that mean I can have the harem tag or not?
 

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Yeah, you guys have the same mindset as me. There absolutely will be a route where you romance both Valentine and Camila together. As a matter of fact, that might be the only route for them, and not individual routes. they are basically a package deal and it's really hard to picture romancing one without the other because they are so close.

The plan to routes that I currently have,

Valentine + Camilla
Torry
Piper
Torry + Piper

Does that mean I can have the harem tag or not?
A harem, in this case, would be multiple women in a consenting relationship with the same man so I think the harem tag would be warranted.

There isn't a polyamory tag, I don't think, so harem gets the point across that the MC is going to be in a relationship with more than one girl and all members of the relationship know and agree to it
 

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Yeah, you guys have the same mindset as me. There absolutely will be a route where you romance both Valentine and Camila together. As a matter of fact, that might be the only route for them, and not individual routes. they are basically a package deal and it's really hard to picture romancing one without the other because they are so close.

The plan to routes that I currently have,

Valentine + Camilla
Torry
Piper
Torry + Piper

Does that mean I can have the harem tag or not?
I don't know if, to qualify for the "harem" tag, everyone has to be in a harem. Personally I'd say that mini harems with a note on the OP should work. But I'm not as into harem games as some people are. And I'm team Val and Mila, they are so adorbs (and hot).
 
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Yeah, you guys have the same mindset as me. There absolutely will be a route where you romance both Valentine and Camila together. As a matter of fact, that might be the only route for them, and not individual routes. they are basically a package deal and it's really hard to picture romancing one without the other because they are so close.

The plan to routes that I currently have,

Valentine + Camilla
Torry
Piper
Torry + Piper

Does that mean I can have the harem tag or not?
According to the site's tag rules/list
Harem [1 person being courted by at least 3 others, all engaging in consensual sex simultaneously.]
so you're one person short for that.
 
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