VN Ren'Py Abandoned Hunger for Chaos [v0.2] [SuperWriter]

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MrFriendly

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Leave blondie alone
Lol Trust me, I will get 100 requests by the time this game is finished. Pregnancy probably being a number one, followed by The harem route
Yeah, pregnancy and harems are the two things I see people wanting in every game. I find it dilutes the strength of the romantic relationships if there are harems. And as for pregnancy I don't like time jumps or really short pregnancies so I'd rather not have them (beyond what we see in PP). Though if you ever do a game where the landlady/tenant relationship is already established and she's preggers with the MC's kid that would work. :)

And I think you are underestimating the number of times both will be requested... LOL
 

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Lol Trust me, I will get 100 requests by the time this game is finished. Pregnancy probably being a number one, followed by The harem route
Yeah, pregnancy and harems are the two things I see people wanting in every game. I find it dilutes the strength of the romantic relationships if there are harems. And as for pregnancy I don't like time jumps or really short pregnancies so I'd rather not have them (beyond what we see in PP). Though if you ever do a game where the landlady/tenant relationship is already established and she's preggers with the MC's kid that would work. :)

And I think you are underestimating the number of times both will be requested... LOL
I concur, Super you are underestimating the exigency of those tags greatly.
100? more like 70% of F95zoners + patrons.
 

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Yeah, pregnancy and harems are the two things I see people wanting in every game. I find it dilutes the strength of the romantic relationships if there are harems. And as for pregnancy I don't like time jumps or really short pregnancies so I'd rather not have them (beyond what we see in PP). Though if you ever do a game where the landlady/tenant relationship is already established and she's preggers with the MC's kid that would work. :)

And I think you are underestimating the number of times both will be requested... LOL
I concur, Super you are underestimating the exigency of those tags greatly.
100? more like 70% of F95zoners + patrons.
LOL You know what? After being on f95 for the last year, I'm vastly underestimating the pervs on here.

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Wow, these are awesome!!! Thank you so much
 

Raziel_8

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LOL You know what? After being on f95 for the last year, I'm vastly underestimating the pervs on here.
If u think the harem + preggo lovers are the pervs u still have much to learn how depraved the real pervs here are...or what kind of content they like...

So i heard we can we sign up for preggo content :whistle:
 

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Yeah, you guys have the same mindset as me. There absolutely will be a route where you romance both Valentine and Camila together. As a matter of fact, that might be the only route for them, and not individual routes. they are basically a package deal and it's really hard to picture romancing one without the other because they are so close.

The plan to routes that I currently have,

Valentine + Camilla
Torry
Piper
Torry + Piper

Does that mean I can have the harem tag or not?
No Harem? Well, that's unfortunate for me :LOL:. But your story, your rules. Do your thing (y).

Speaking as a connoisseur of True Harem content. The general rule of thumb for a Harem is that there be at least 3 or more female characters pursuing the male protagonist intimately all at the same time, in a single playthrough/single route story. True Harem is where all the female characters know about each other and all happily agree to sharing the male protagonist romantically and sexually.
Or think of it as a package deal like you said, but with 3 or more women, instead of just 2 women.

For your planned routes they'd just be a "love triangle" or "three-way romance", or polyamory to be less specific. But not a Harem.

Correct me if i'm wrong here. In your other game "Picture Perfect", in a single playthrough the protagonist can/will be in a relationship with Paris, Sasha, Miracle, and Sabrina all at the same time with them all aware of each other and cool with sharing Daddy protagonist. So, with there being 4 girls there, that qualify as a harem. A true harem in that case.

Games where the protagonist can have sex with multiple women throughout the story in a single route, but has to pick one girl at the ending isn't a harem. Misleading is what it is and that's assuming there isn't a oblivious main love interest taking all the screen-time & renders, seen it too often.
I don't think there will be a harem in this game because this is not your standard slice of Life, but a sci-fi mystery.
Speaking in general here, not putting any words in your mouth or anything. But a Harem plot can exist in any setting, genre or theme, Fantasy, Space Opera, Sci-fi, Mafia/Gangster story, Crime Mystery, etc. Not just a slice-of-life theme. I got what you're saying, that it won't fit for your story you have in mind.

Excuse me for rambling.
 

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No Harem? Well, that's unfortunate for me :LOL:. But your story, your rules. Do your thing (y).

Speaking as a connoisseur of True Harem content. The general rule of thumb for a Harem is that there be at least 3 or more female characters pursuing the male protagonist intimately all at the same time, in a single playthrough/single route story. True Harem is where all the female characters know about each other and all happily agree to sharing the male protagonist romantically and sexually.
Or think of it as a package deal like you said, but with 3 or more women, instead of just 2 women.

For your planned routes they'd just be a "love triangle" or "three-way romance", or polyamory to be less specific. But not a Harem.

Correct me if i'm wrong here. In your other game "Picture Perfect", in a single playthrough the protagonist can/will be in a relationship with Paris, Sasha, Miracle, and Sabrina all at the same time with them all aware of each other and cool with sharing Daddy protagonist. So, with there being 4 girls there, that qualify as a harem. A true harem in that case.

Games where the protagonist can have sex with multiple women throughout the story in a single route, but has to pick one girl at the ending isn't a harem. Misleading is what it is and that's assuming there isn't a oblivious main love interest taking all the screen-time & renders, seen it too often.

Speaking in general here, not putting any words in your mouth or anything. But a Harem plot can exist in any setting, genre or theme, Fantasy, Space Opera, Sci-fi, Mafia/Gangster story, Crime Mystery, etc. Not just a slice-of-life theme. I got what you're saying, that it won't fit for your story you have in mind.

Excuse me for rambling.
Thanks for clarifying about the harem tag! And yes, you'll be able to romance all girls in a single setting. And of course you can have a hharem in any setting, but certain settings make it hard, like being on the run or something vs slice of life

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Thank you for creating such amazing sigs for all 3 of my games! You are thest on here. And added to the OP

Nice start, the girls are looking great and their dynamics with the MC will be very interesting to follow, overall I enjoyed a lot this first chapter, keep it up!
Marvelous game love it, looking forward next update.:love:
Thanks so much, guys. Ch. 2 out very soon! (few weeks)
 

Raziel_8

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Thanks for clarifying about the harem tag! And yes, you'll be able to romance all girls in a single setting. And of course you can have a hharem in any setting, but certain settings make it hard, like being on the run or something vs slice of life



Thank you for creating such amazing sigs for all 3 of my games! You are thest on here. And added to the OP




Thanks so much, guys. Ch. 2 out very soon! (few weeks)
About the 3 games, i don't know if u mentioned it before or in a other thread, but what are ur plans for the shedules/progression of the games.

I think it is safe to say that Picture Perfect is ur main project at moment, so my question would be, how do u plan to progress with Secret Summer and Just Another Bubble ?
Will u finish Picture Perfect first and then work on the other two on a alternating shedule, or do u choose one of them as main project and the other will be a side project with slower development ?

On a personal note about Secret Summer and Just Another Bubble:

Both games are still in the first updates, but from what i can say, they both have good charcters and looking at Picture Perfect i'm convinced that u will also make well written and interesting storys for both.

That being said, in my opinion Just Another Bubble would be the more interesting game. I think u said something about the story will be surprising and not what we are expecting, while i don't know what u have planned, i think a well written 'out of the ordinary' story would be welcomed by many + with the MC and both sisters we also have an interesting relationship dynamic from the beginning.
(I'm really sorry for Paris and our little vampire, but from all 3 games Camilla & Valentine are the best characters)

Secret Summer is not bad by any means and the whole father/son business could be used for some good moments.
But the story of the son who wasn't in contact with rest of the family (mom+sisters) for years, is one of the most used themes on this site, which makes it kind of dull and hard to stand out.
 

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About the 3 games, i don't know if u mentioned it before or in a other thread, but what are ur plans for the shedules/progression of the games.

I think it is safe to say that Picture Perfect is ur main project at moment, so my question would be, how do u plan to progress with Secret Summer and Just Another Bubble ?
Will u finish Picture Perfect first and then work on the other two on a alternating shedule, or do u choose one of them as main project and the other will be a side project with slower development ?

On a personal note about Secret Summer and Just Another Bubble:

Both games are still in the first updates, but from what i can say, they both have good charcters and looking at Picture Perfect i'm convinced that u will also make well written and interesting storys for both.

That being said, in my opinion Just Another Bubble would be the more interesting game. I think u said something about the story will be surprising and not what we are expecting, while i don't know what u have planned, i think a well written 'out of the ordinary' story would be welcomed by many + with the MC and both sisters we also have an interesting relationship dynamic from the beginning.
(I'm really sorry for Paris and our little vampire, but from all 3 games Camilla & Valentine are the best characters)

Secret Summer is not bad by any means and the whole father/son business could be used for some good moments.
But the story of the son who wasn't in contact with rest of the family (mom+sisters) for years, is one of the most used themes on this site, which makes it kind of dull and hard to stand out.
I do have my schedule and plans on my patreon. I have a 6 week schedule where I release all 3 games within that time, with an update being every 2 weeks.

As for your like of JAB, I'm really happy that you enjoy these characters, even more than my others. But I have almost 400 patrons that are supporting me for those games, as I just released this one.

The stories may be generic, but what makes them different is the characters and player relationships. That's what I think people play for, as you can see, the stories themselves are not special or any different from others, but they don't necessarily need to be. These characters and Dynamics are different and unique.

As for jab storyline, yeah. that's going to be something completely different that you definitely won't be able to guess. A LOT of shit to unpack in the upcoming updates. I can promise you that
 

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Question, could you possibly put a link on this page for the original as well? So those of us that want to, could try both?
 

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Question, could you possibly put a link on this page for the original as well? So those of us that want to, could try both?
The original is not in development anymore and it's not the version of the game I want people to play. This is the version that I envisioned. Sorry about that. The previous game was just darker than I intended and that's not what I want to put out there. I hope you understand
 
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