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demo for a new game coming..it was just posted yesterday..give him at least three months before you bury him..but knowing @Andrealphus track record..updates should be fast and pretty consistent...he's the master of "more content for under 150MB than anyone" lol
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This is not really a game yet, as there are no choices in this initial preview demo. But the developer promises there will be plenty. In fact, if you decide to check this game out, don't bother with any saves. The developer says that choices will be incorporated into this intro.
It appears that the female MC can become anything from a virgin keeping herself for marriage with her high school crush, or a crack whore, or variants in between, depending on the choices we make. Of course, if no choices are made to change the outcome of this demo, the crack-whore path looks much more likely.
The developer has promised that the forced outcome of the demo will be avoidable in the future.To be honest, the visuals are barely acceptable at this point. But if you appreciate a really good narrative, this game should suit you.
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Join date March 14th and your second post, not surprised you can't read the thread title which clearly says demo.
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As other people said, right now it's nothing more than a short kinetic novel, but the author clearly displays some talents as narrator.
The art is hand-drawn I think (instead of generic DAZ crapola), which is a huge plus in my book. It's nice and fitting what there is of a story and scenes. I can't wait to see what the author has in stock for the future evolution of the heroine, physically and mentally.
All in all, this could potentially become a (very) interesting game. I hope the author will stick to it, thank you.
The art is hand-drawn I think (instead of generic DAZ crapola), which is a huge plus in my book. It's nice and fitting what there is of a story and scenes. I can't wait to see what the author has in stock for the future evolution of the heroine, physically and mentally.
All in all, this could potentially become a (very) interesting game. I hope the author will stick to it, thank you.
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I like the hand-drawn art a lot. I just wish there was more of it. Things progress story-wise, but the images do not. We are being told one thing, but the picture is of something we heard of 15 screens ago.
I don't know whether the developer plans to increase the output and variety of renders in future releases. I hope so. But I'll probably play through it regardless.
yes i read that it was a demo. i also read it wrong i saw 2017 and thought it was the post date not the posters join date
so i assumed it was dead thats why i asked, hence the ?
i like the art and the them of the game looks promising
sorry i didnt realize that my join date and amount of posts determine if im allowed to ask questions,
if that is the case i wont post any more and lets hope no new people to the forum try to ask a question.
Ask away
I ll try to answer any question !
And to answer those who say that there is not enough art: please remember this is not a daz game, traditional art is way more time consuming...
- Apr 10, 2018
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"I am not a slut!"
We'll see about that.
"Depending on your choices she will stay true to herself or become a sex addicted slutty college girl."
I'll give you one guess.
Love the premise here, but this is wayyyyyyyyy too early. Way too early. What's here looks great and reads great, but honestly, it's at least 6 months away from giving it another glance. If you like the tags, watch the thread and check back in summer. It's not worth getting into yet. This dev has a decent track record of releases though, so I'm hopeful at least. PLUS, it's female protagonist. Female protags FTW.
We'll see about that.
"Depending on your choices she will stay true to herself or become a sex addicted slutty college girl."
I'll give you one guess.
Love the premise here, but this is wayyyyyyyyy too early. Way too early. What's here looks great and reads great, but honestly, it's at least 6 months away from giving it another glance. If you like the tags, watch the thread and check back in summer. It's not worth getting into yet. This dev has a decent track record of releases though, so I'm hopeful at least. PLUS, it's female protagonist. Female protags FTW.
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I fully understand the time involved in creating hand-drawn art. To me, though, it's a drawback, which I felt compelled to mention to those considering playing this game.Ask away
I ll try to answer any question !
And to answer those who say that there is not enough art: please remember this is not a daz game, traditional art is way more time consuming...
However, it is a drawback that I fully expect to ignore, if... no, when this game fulfills the high promise of the demo.
Looking forward with great anticipation to your first full release.
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I thought the art was pretty good. It is nice to have a different body type from the usual girls too. I hope she gets to shave though.Ask away
I ll try to answer any question !
And to answer those who say that there is not enough art: please remember this is not a daz game, traditional art is way more time consuming...
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I don't know? Maybe she could let it grow long enough to be styled! Handlebars? A long, braided pigtail? ... Well... it would be different!
Funny that just last two days I discuss with people another game with "corruption" element which at that moment have a lot of content but almost no sex or nudity scenes and now I find this game which have foced bj, forces sex and impregnation in 3rd scene! What an irony
@Andrealphus
First, I want to suggest to make dark transparent the text box but you already note that.
Second suggestion: maybe you sould change the colour of characters names. Again, in some scenes it little hard to read them (scene in cafeteria for example).
Third suggestion is to add tag "rape" to the game because...the scene with the professor is difficult to characterize otherwise than rape.
Next are the questions.
First of all I should note that apart of some people here persanally I understand that you as author have your own vision of game in general, story, how should it develop, characters, ets. Buuuut, I find few things in this short demo a little bit frustrating.
1. Don't you think that the game have quite depressive beginning? On her very first day at university MC has already been drunked, lost her virginity, raped and impregnated by really creepy professor.
(Personally for me the end of demo looks like MC not only will not have the desire to become slut but also will be mentally traumatized for a while to have any relations, even keep chatting with her friend from school, because her first sex experience was really fucked up and now she might be pregnant).
1.5. Also, don't you think that this whole event appears way too early in the game?
2. It's not very easy thing, but don't you think that the whole Mr Grossman's encounter and MC's attitude during and after sex scene is not even "not realistic" but "unrealistic"? Even if we say that was corruption and "bringing her inner slut to the light"... Again, on her very first day she was corrupted by professor with a couple glasses of alcohol from "quiet bookworm" to nearly "porn actress" (as she said to herself)? Really?
3. Ok, last question about prof. Do you make him creepy asshole on intent or he just turned out like that?
You already answered for my next two questions, so so I'll just clarify a couple of things.
5. Right now I'm not sure will I support this game with money on not. So can I come to discord server without becoming a patron?
Anyway, atop of that I must say, that I really like art style and how MC looks. The whole story looks promising
with a least two possible main routes "good girl"+"bad girl" (and maybe some lesbian route, why not) and with different subroutes (like being "good girl" MC can stay loyal for her old friend or she can meet some sport-guy who will need help with his studies).
Sorry for such a long post!
@Andrealphus
If you don't mind, I have few suggestions and few questions.Ask away
First, I want to suggest to make dark transparent the text box but you already note that.
Yes, it would be much better. In first scene and in shower scenes it's really hard to read white text on the light background.
Second suggestion: maybe you sould change the colour of characters names. Again, in some scenes it little hard to read them (scene in cafeteria for example).
Third suggestion is to add tag "rape" to the game because...the scene with the professor is difficult to characterize otherwise than rape.
Next are the questions.
First of all I should note that apart of some people here persanally I understand that you as author have your own vision of game in general, story, how should it develop, characters, ets. Buuuut, I find few things in this short demo a little bit frustrating.
1. Don't you think that the game have quite depressive beginning? On her very first day at university MC has already been drunked, lost her virginity, raped and impregnated by really creepy professor.
(Personally for me the end of demo looks like MC not only will not have the desire to become slut but also will be mentally traumatized for a while to have any relations, even keep chatting with her friend from school, because her first sex experience was really fucked up and now she might be pregnant).
1.5. Also, don't you think that this whole event appears way too early in the game?
2. It's not very easy thing, but don't you think that the whole Mr Grossman's encounter and MC's attitude during and after sex scene is not even "not realistic" but "unrealistic"? Even if we say that was corruption and "bringing her inner slut to the light"... Again, on her very first day she was corrupted by professor with a couple glasses of alcohol from "quiet bookworm" to nearly "porn actress" (as she said to herself)? Really?
3. Ok, last question about prof. Do you make him creepy asshole on intent or he just turned out like that?
You already answered for my next two questions, so so I'll just clarify a couple of things.
4. So game will be more like visual novel when player have to make a choice in particular moment or player will have some freedom of action: where to go, with whom to talk and what to do?
5. Right now I'm not sure will I support this game with money on not. So can I come to discord server without becoming a patron?
Anyway, atop of that I must say, that I really like art style and how MC looks. The whole story looks promising
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Sorry for such a long post!
1- Yes it's dark and depressing on purposeFunny that just last two days I discuss with people another game with "corruption" element which at that moment have a lot of content but almost no sex or nudity scenes and now I find this game which have foced bj, forces sex and impregnation in 3rd scene! What an irony
@Andrealphus
If you don't mind, I have few suggestions and few questions.
First, I want to suggest to make dark transparent the text box but you already note that.
Yes, it would be much better. In first scene and in shower scenes it's really hard to read white text on the light background.
Second suggestion: maybe you sould change the colour of characters names. Again, in some scenes it little hard to read them (scene in cafeteria for example).
Third suggestion is to add tag "rape" to the game because...the scene with the professor is difficult to characterize otherwise than rape.
Next are the questions.
First of all I should note that apart of some people here persanally I understand that you as author have your own vision of game in general, story, how should it develop, characters, ets. Buuuut, I find few things in this short demo a little bit frustrating.
1. Don't you think that the game have quite depressive beginning? On her very first day at university MC has already been drunked, lost her virginity, raped and impregnated by really creepy professor.
(Personally for me the end of demo looks like MC not only will not have the desire to become slut but also will be mentally traumatized for a while to have any relations, even keep chatting with her friend from school, because her first sex experience was really fucked up and now she might be pregnant).
1.5. Also, don't you think that this whole event appears way too early in the game?
2. It's not very easy thing, but don't you think that the whole Mr Grossman's encounter and MC's attitude during and after sex scene is not even "not realistic" but "unrealistic"? Even if we say that was corruption and "bringing her inner slut to the light"... Again, on her very first day she was corrupted by professor with a couple glasses of alcohol from "quiet bookworm" to nearly "porn actress" (as she said to herself)? Really?
3. Ok, last question about prof. Do you make him creepy asshole on intent or he just turned out like that?
You already answered for my next two questions, so so I'll just clarify a couple of things.
4. So game will be more like visual novel when player have to make a choice in particular moment or player will have some freedom of action: where to go, with whom to talk and what to do?
5. Right now I'm not sure will I support this game with money on not. So can I come to discord server without becoming a patron?
Anyway, atop of that I must say, that I really like art style and how MC looks. The whole story looks promisingwith a least two possible main routes "good girl"+"bad girl" (and maybe some lesbian route, why not) and with different subroutes (like being "good girl" MC can stay loyal for her old friend or she can meet some sport-guy who will need help with his studies).You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.
Sorry for such a long post!
1.5 - Not really
2 - No
3 - On purpose
4 - Purely visual novel but i am on the fence about wether or not having a "slutty" stat
5 - The game will be part of the $10 tier on my patreon but will also be sold for $5/chapter on itch.io, and of course you can join the discord
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After a few days I've realise that my previous post was more about my frustrarion about the demo than about the demo itself, so I delete it.1- Yes it's dark and depressing on purpose
1.5 - Not really
2 - No
3 - On purpose
4 - Purely visual novel but i am on the fence about wether or not having a "slutty" stat
5 - The game will be part of the $10 tier on my patreon but will also be sold for $5/chapter on itch.io, and of course you can join the discord
You must be registered to see the links
Still I'm confused and have some questions, like "what could be the reason to end the demo in a depressed mood?" but I guess we'll find this out sooner or later and I have few guesses about it. The simple one - the guy who came up with it is some king of genius! No kidding! Most of the devs ends theirs demo with cliffhanger and/or some hot stuff, but you chose to do both in a really memorable manner!
I'm glad that you'll add option to avoid event with professor but after playing the demo one more time I start to understand him
You've made MCin a certain sense extremely hot, so most likely I would not have restrained myself if I were a professor Also, since you think about having some kind of "slutty stat" I have few ideas about it along with a couple of suggestions for other things. I don't want to be annoying so if you want I can post them here or on your Discord or send them to you via pm.
Again, txs for invite for your Discord! And most likely soon I'll become your 10$ tier patron!
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Wish MC had appearance and style kinda like Sasha, Lexi or Anna from LoSeSB, but i'll play It after some updates anyway