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zeronex00

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finished the game and its mediocre
-they have a ending for mitsuki and tokiko but none for makiura she should atleast was given a proper ending or conclusion she just broke in the end and disappeared although it is indicated that shes still part of the survivors
-there is no conclusion for the intelligent zombies especially the flayer man no final showdown kek
 
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Lunarius

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If i just take the credits on vndb at face value the author of the WN / LN seemed to be invloved with vol. 1 and 2 only, but maybe those were just the usual "original creator credits"? Not sure, tbh. But it's still weird seeing them missing form vol. 0 and 3. Anyway i just do not get my hopes up for more then, seems to be the best way of going about it.
Unfortunately, that would explain a few things.

The writing for most of volume 3 was still pretty good, but it just wasn't quite as strong as the writing of 1 and 2. And if the web novel author was giving tips and cues with volumes 1 and 2 but not with 3, then that really would explain why the characters in 3 felt a little more flat.

And, people just up and disappearing from the face of the internet? That does happen from time to time.

That being said...

What bothers me the most is that we didn't get a good look at that group that was trying to take over the town hall. Yeah, their leader is a psycho who intimidated a bunch of others into cooperating. But what was he aiming at? What was his goal with all this? All that the game reveals is that he and his gang wanted to seize the mountain retreat for themselves. But compared to everything that the teaser in volume 2 foreshadowed, that's weaksauce. We don't even get any hint about where that group came from - not even when Yuusuke is talking with the psycho when the latter is dying from his injuries.

Yuusuke doesn't even ask the fucker whether he was involved with any of the shit that had been going on at the university campus. Even though that would have been a perfectly valid question. Remember, when mr. psycho here was threatening Yuusuke earlier, he was giving a pretty detailed description of what it looks like when you cut a zombie open. I don't think he was bluffing there, either. And there really was a place in the city where people were doing that sort of thing - the campus. I mean, remember that part in volume 1 where Yuusuke is exploring the campus and he comes across this female zombie with no arms, legs or teeth that's been turned into a fucktoy? Yeah.

Frex, Yuusuke even encountered a dude who attacked him with a nailgun when he was exploring that campus. He knows that there were living people there up until very recently, so he has every reason to suspect that some of the sick fucks from the campus might have escaped and might have made it to the town hall. Yet he never actually puts two and two together, and he never actually asks the psycho about the campus.
Right then and there, they could've tied up a huge loose plot thread going right back to volume 1, and they just didn't. It's so frustrating.

Fuck, I might as well just ramble about all the missed opportunities in volume 3...

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All in all, this still is one of the the best visual novel series I have ever read. But the endings in volume 3 really are disappointing. The 'good' ending especially: Yuusuke is living with Mitsuki and the kids in the mountain resort, you get one final sex scene with Mitsuki, a few lines afterwards, and then boom, credits roll. It barely even qualifies as an ending, really.

The Tokiko ending felt much more like an ending, even though it's supposed to be an alternate route. Unlike the main ending, the Tokiko ending actually tells you something about what's been going on outside the city and the mountain resort. It still doesn't tell you a whole lot, but at least it's enough to wrap a few things up.
 
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it was kinda okay that there were not final show down with the faceless dude, like land of the dead, just wish there was a walk away scene like that, although things were certainly like that (insert obi wan "in a certain point of view"). I kinda agree with others that the ending was kinda fast? one intense fuck then describe what a certain someone does while a certain someone is sleeping then poof. I honestly just skip the sex scenes by now, more into the story.
 

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All in all, this still is one of the the best visual novel series I have ever read.
Might i suggest reading more vns, then? Not to be an ass but this might be one of the best "zombie" vns.
But there is a million and one better written vns out there, honestly.

Just use this with those filters or change them how you see fit on vndb and sort through. You should be able to find something complete and well written for sure. :D
 
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Rik Ralph

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Honestly, I just feel sad and empty. I really loved this series and seeing how it ended felt like a great injustice to this novel. They really needed to give this series a fourth installment in order to properly wrap things up, instead they chose to cram the ending into one volume when it looks like it needed another volume to flesh out.
 

ricky2018

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Wait is this the end... I thought that we'd at least get a scene with the spear zombie, that's kinda disappointing.
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The author abandoned the story so the game developers probably had no material to go by and didn't want to make filler material and just ended the doctor's arc on that one sentence.
 

da jungler

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Is it just me, or dose vol 3 just feel like a half-assed vol 2, part 2?
That was how it ended with the web novel, apparently, the author stopped writing and abandoned the project. Not even sure if he is still alive to continue it back cause I really want more of intelligent zombies screen time
 

da jungler

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The author abandoned the story so the game developers probably had no material to go by and didn't want to make filler material and just ended the doctor's arc on that one sentence.
Wish the author will come back to pick up this awesome project, that is, if he is alive..
 

Lunarius

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This is just how I feel but...
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Hey, you've got a really good point there.

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That particular scene still kinda messes up the story. But with what you say, Yuusuke's behaviour there does make a bit more sense.

Might i suggest reading more vns, then? Not to be an ass but this might be one of the best "zombie" vns.
But there is a million and one better written vns out there, honestly.

Just use this with those filters or change them how you see fit on vndb and sort through. You should be able to find something complete and well written for sure. :D
Ha, apologies for the late reply! I overlooked it before.

Still - gotta disagree with you on a few points.

First, don't just assume that I'm some random n00b to VNs. I've been into visual novels since 2007, and I have read several dozen at this point. Yet I still think that the I Walk Among Zombies series holds up better than... almost all of them, really.

I mean, even many of the well-written VNs are formulaic and predictable once you take a closer look, you know?

Now, formulaic doesn't have to mean bad - and I actually did like several VNs that I'd call formulaic (like Sakura no Mori Dreamers, or Crescendo for a much older example). I'm also aware that the use of common tropes and stock characters is a tried and true way to make it easier for people to get into the story.

But even so - stories that I'd call good have characters that aren't just running on common tropes. Characters that make you feel that they have personalities and motivations like real people. I don't really get that feeling with most visual novels. But I did get it with the I Walk Among Zombies series - and I don't think that I'm alone in that, because the threads on this series feature page after page of people discussing what might make the characters tick.

Another thing I value in stories is setting. Yeah I know, zombie fiction has been done to death (hell, I don't even like zombie stories most of the time). But what I mean with 'setting' here is, does the setting actually make you feel that there's something going on in the story outside of the main characters and the main plot? Does the story make you feel that the characters are interacting with the setting, and that the setting is interacting with the characters? Or is the setting nothing but a twodimensional backdrop?

The I Walk Among Zombies series are among the VNs that made me think "hey, there's stuff going on in the background here". Sure, there's plenty of other VNs that also pull this off (like Tsukihime and Fate/stay night) - but there's also plenty of VNs that don't.

On a side note: even a story with a well-written setting can fall flat if it fails in other regards. Just look at Myth (from Circletempo) - it's got one of the most cleverly written settings I've ever seen in a visual novel, and figuring out what's going on in the background is actually required if you want to find the links between the different characters' stories as well as the different worlds and get the true ending. But at the same time, Myth's characters were somewhat flat and unconvincing, and IMO it really hurts this VN.

I'll admit that I got burned out on the usual stuff with quirky brightly coloured schoolgirls and other stock tropes. And I kinda like dark, morbid stories in general. But even so, I'd still say that the I Walk Among Zombies series really is better than most VNs.
 

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Hey, you've got a really good point there.

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That particular scene still kinda messes up the story. But with what you say, Yuusuke's behaviour there does make a bit more sense.



Ha, apologies for the late reply! I overlooked it before.

Still - gotta disagree with you on a few points.

First, don't just assume that I'm some random n00b to VNs. I've been into visual novels since 2007, and I have read several dozen at this point. Yet I still think that the I Walk Among Zombies series holds up better than... almost all of them, really.

I mean, even many of the well-written VNs are formulaic and predictable once you take a closer look, you know?

Now, formulaic doesn't have to mean bad - and I actually did like several VNs that I'd call formulaic (like Sakura no Mori Dreamers, or Crescendo for a much older example). I'm also aware that the use of common tropes and stock characters is a tried and true way to make it easier for people to get into the story.

But even so - stories that I'd call good have characters that aren't just running on common tropes. Characters that make you feel that they have personalities and motivations like real people. I don't really get that feeling with most visual novels. But I did get it with the I Walk Among Zombies series - and I don't think that I'm alone in that, because the threads on this series feature page after page of people discussing what might make the characters tick.

Another thing I value in stories is setting. Yeah I know, zombie fiction has been done to death (hell, I don't even like zombie stories most of the time). But what I mean with 'setting' here is, does the setting actually make you feel that there's something going on in the story outside of the main characters and the main plot? Does the story make you feel that the characters are interacting with the setting, and that the setting is interacting with the characters? Or is the setting nothing but a twodimensional backdrop?

The I Walk Among Zombies series are among the VNs that made me think "hey, there's stuff going on in the background here". Sure, there's plenty of other VNs that also pull this off (like Tsukihime and Fate/stay night) - but there's also plenty of VNs that don't.

On a side note: even a story with a well-written setting can fall flat if it fails in other regards. Just look at Myth (from Circletempo) - it's got one of the most cleverly written settings I've ever seen in a visual novel, and figuring out what's going on in the background is actually required if you want to find the links between the different characters' stories as well as the different worlds and get the true ending. But at the same time, Myth's characters were somewhat flat and unconvincing, and IMO it really hurts this VN.

I'll admit that I got burned out on the usual stuff with quirky brightly coloured schoolgirls and other stock tropes. And I kinda like dark, morbid stories in general. But even so, I'd still say that the I Walk Among Zombies series really is better than most VNs.
I feel the same way, I've read a lot of vn's but for some reason this one just has that feel to it, it's tragic that the story is basically an open ending after this vol (I haven't read vol.0 but based off the things I've read about it it's basically just side stories that take place throughout the entire story). I've seen complaints about the writing and how things weren't elaborated and such, but I feel that's mainly because the author planned to keep going and then lost interest or what ever happened to them so it's hard to establish lore when it can't be expanded on due to there being nothing after this. This vn just immersed you in it's setting, and into who Yuusuke was. Yuusuke wasn't some superhero here to save the citizens of this zombie infested land, he was just normal guy. Mind you that he was a cynic introvert with sociopathic tendencies but still just a guy who got lucky.
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I agree that there are parts where things fall flat and despite the fact this story has little to no branching storylines I keep coming back to read it over and over. I know how it ends and yet here I am again. I'm rambling at this point, thanks for coming to my TEDtalk.
 
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PeteHanson

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Ha, apologies for the late reply! I overlooked it before.
I have to say i moved on form this game for what feels like ages ago. But thanks for the late reply regardless. :)

First, don't just assume that I'm some random n00b to VNs. I've been into visual novels since 2007, and I have read several dozen at this point.
This is fair. Sorry for making this mistake. I just had this happen here before many times at this point and now it is always in the back of my mind that the folks here in the forum are not into vns, but just porn. So i think that one is entirely on me.
I still would say it is valid to suggest reading more vns to get a better grasp on what is out there.

I mean, even many of the well-written VNs are formulaic and predictable once you take a closer look, you know?
I honestly could not disagree more with this and i think we will not see eye to eye on this one.
I think something that does stand out will pull through regardless of how you subjectively think about it, there is a reason we have stories that are timeless after all.

But that was not even my point with this game, the fact that it sets up side characters, the flashback with yuske
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and nothing at all gets resolved or nobody even gets a satisfying ending, besides mitsuki. Because it got never completed, was my main issue and point with this series.

Now, formulaic doesn't have to mean bad - and I actually did like several VNs that I'd call formulaic (like Sakura no Mori Dreamers, or Crescendo for a much older example). I'm also aware that the use of common tropes and stock characters is a tried and true way to make it easier for people to get into the story.
I can not speak for crescendo, cause i never played that. I did find pretty damn average, though. The problem with that one was it found it a great idea to twist shit for the sake of a twist, not because it made sense anymore in the last third that was completely unnecessary and felt tagged on as a result, gave that a 6.5 if i remember correctly.

Back to the topic. Of course, it's always how it's done that should be the important factor, not that you have let's say a tsun- or yandere character or what ever flavor of the month you can think about. Still vns, even stories in as a whole should not just build upon those archetypes and if they do they should always have something to stand out form the see of other stuff that does it.

A western made vn i read last year which fell into this trap was: . A vn that wants so badly to be your average ecchi mecha anime - even though it's western made, it has no standout qualities as it's own, besides the english voiceacting, really. Plus it seemed have to been a kickstarter project and likely lacked funding towards the end, it feels rushed as a result.

But even so - stories that I'd call good have characters that aren't just running on common tropes. Characters that make you feel that they have personalities and motivations like real people.
I read something last year that gave me the same feeling i's called:
Was written by the same studio that does the games, btw.

I don't really get that feeling with most visual novels.
I agree with this, but that is also why i do not commit to long games on a whim, just after informing myself. Thus i missed out on , and many other vns listed as long (over 50 hours) for example as of now. And only in the last months finally played , which was very cool, imo.

Another thing I value in stories is setting.
This honestly sounds like majikoi and Tsujidou ai road should be right up your alley, then.

Yeah I know, zombie fiction has been done to death (hell, I don't even like zombie stories most of the time). But what I mean with 'setting' here is, does the setting actually make you feel that there's something going on in the story outside of the main characters and the main plot?
I agree, in theory, as i said above. The execution after the first game was my problem. The idea of a protag not being a goody two shoes for example was what originally drew me into vol. 1 of this series. Now on the other hand i feel very conflicted in even recommending this to others, considering how it ends.

The I Walk Among Zombies series are among the VNs that made me think "hey, there's stuff going on in the background here". Sure, there's plenty of other VNs that also pull this off (like Tsukihime and Fate/stay night) - but there's also plenty of VNs that don't.
See above. You have to filter through a see of crap, yup. But anime and manga are no different in this regard, hell every type of media is, really. My resolution to those problems are user scores like vndb, mal and other sites of this sort have and of course talking about stuff with friends sometimes even discussing what we thought about a certain game.

I know that is a classic at this point, but why not bring it up again, here cause i recently finished the Elite Version (being more or less the anime artstyle with extra content and endings of the vn added) of it.
is my go to example for a game that does both the setting / plot and the character writing to a masterful degree. Aside form the only vn i have near a 10, as in a 9,5 listed in my vndb profile. Btw those vndb profiles and even their new review system could be a good source of information regarding vns for you. ;-)

On a side note: even a story with a well-written setting can fall flat if it fails in other regards.
Naturally, it all depends how it's executed in the end there are vns that can pull through like afore mentioned ones and ones that do not. A game i played which did stick everything but the last twist was .

My go to example for something that fails in every regard and which made me very unpopular for voicing that a few months ago would be. . I tried liking that thing, played it for over a hundred hours, but gave up at a bit over the halfway point. I just can not stomach shit like this, actively working to make you hate or even infuriate you with every single character you come across and play as. Holy fuck just thinking about this again makes me agry..

Which is funny, because those two are on the surface and regarding their tags very similar vns, but Cartagra is executed well to good (7,5) and Higurashi is a pile of horseshit, that doesn't do anything well. Gave the Higurashi Ni chapters a 4,5 for "effort".

Just look at Myth (from Circletempo) - it's got one of the most cleverly written settings I've ever seen in a visual novel, and figuring out what's going on in the background is actually required if you want to find the links between the different characters' stories as well as the different worlds and get the true ending. But at the same time, Myth's characters were somewhat flat and unconvincing, and IMO it really hurts this VN.
I rarley play all ages vns, so i can not speak about that at all. It looks interesting form just the screenshots and tags, but that is all i can say about it, sorry. Maybe i should give that a go in the future and see for myself :)

I'll admit that I got burned out on the usual stuff with quirky brightly coloured schoolgirls and other stock tropes. And I kinda like dark, morbid stories in general. But even so, I'd still say that the I Walk Among Zombies series really is better than most VNs.
Didn't we all after years of this? :D
 
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