VN Ren'Py ImoTsuyo: If It's for My Young Sister, I'll Be Stronger [v0.15] [otaku_argento]

[Jnx]

Jnx or Jnx idk how it works to tag you. Hope you can see this.

Thank you for taking the time to play ImoTsuyo and write such a review.
I will expand to answer you each point in detail giving my opinion about it.

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Thanks for playing ImoTsuyo, I hope you continue downloading the new versions and that they continue, in a certain way, calling your attention not to leave it.

I appreciate the reply, and insight into what your thoughts are on everything. And I will say, I know full well I will probably be one of the more critical voices toward your project, especially seeing as this will appeal to the wholesome crowd. It's more that I see potential and room for growth rather than giving an "A+" for effort and cute girls. (Which is why most games on this site get high ratings) I'm also a weeb that has watched more anime than god, and even though I like it, I'm tired of the tropes so I complain about it a lot more. And the "White Knight" comment wasn't really a praise, and I hope it's toned down a little in future. But now that you're aware, do with it what you will. The absurdity in adult games is something I'd like everyone to move past, especially in heavy, story-driven experiences like this. Once in a while is fine, but Saigo in this has presented himself as a complete standoffish asshole that only likes his sister. Sure, he beat the bully by my count four times I believe now? But the way he talks to everyone never lets up and I'm sure that's part of the growth he'll have. However the one week he knows everyone doesn't seem enough for people to look past all of the negative character traits he flaunts.

Anyway, critiquing aside, this story has very endearing anime vibes that I like and I'm curious how it all goes so I will check everything out again to see how things progress. I would advise you to think about adding event/title card CGs for things that have already happened though, but I get how much more you'd have to do because of them.

And side note, no, lousy grammar is not better than not reading at all. The translation is this is heavily serviceable, but it still was very rough. I would rather wait 6 months for something translated and localized, because otherwise it feels like a shovelware game pumped out for monthly patreon money. Not saying that's what you do, more that, that is what so many of the "Devs" on here do. Churning out default RenPy UI games, with flipped Daz models, bad google translate engrish, and the story is usually "Lazy guy suddenly attracted to his family and women want his penis." Which I will thank you for having an actual story in your visual NOVEL.


But keep up the good work and hope things go well for you and this project.

 

[otaku_argento]

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Well, feel free to come back when there's a new version or improved translation notice, which isn't going to happen soon. So it's also an option for you to wait those 6 months for a miracle. Xd
Meanwhile, I'll keep updating and translating with Google and DeepL.

 

[Lunarmist]

Android Port for Imotsuyo:If it's for my young sister,I'll be stronger[v0.05][otaku_argento]

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[otaku_argento]

Android Port for Imotsuyo:If it's for my young sister,I'll be stronger[v0.05][otaku_argento]

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Thanks for doing an android version, although idk if it work. What do you mean with link was broken? Still a long way to go for v0.06, but I'll try to make an official android version when I update it. Idk how you worked the game or if you played it, but were you able to add the cell phone function into the game? I mean when you press D key on PC version. Anyway, thx for your work.

 

[Lunarmist]

Thanks for doing an android version, although idk if it work. What do you mean with link was broken? Still a long way to go for v0.06, but I'll try to make an official android version when I update it. Idk how you worked the game or if you played it, but were you able to add the cell phone function into the game? I mean when you press D key on PC version. Anyway, thx for your work.

MixDrop was giving me a captcha failed error eventhough I tried to download it on different browsers and with different proxies. I was able to get the port to work on an android 11 phone and on bluestacks but didn't check if the cell phone function was playable or not.

 

[otaku_argento]

MixDrop was giving me a captcha failed error eventhough I tried to download it on different browsers and with different proxies. I was able to get the port to work on an android 11 phone and on bluestacks but didn't check if the cell phone function was playable or not.

Well, things like that can happen when you do things without the dev's permission, but thanks for trying.

 

[FurryestXOfficial]

OK, voy ha grabar el video hoy, asique si hay algo que deba saber, ponmelo en un comentário aquí
Me encanta como ha quedado la miniatura XD
La versión sin C-nsura la subire a PornHub o algo XD
( OK I'm going to record the video today, so if there's anything I should know put it in a comment here
I love how the thumbnail turned out XD )

 

[otaku_argento]

OK, voy ha grabar el video hoy, asique si hay algo que deba saber, ponmelo en un comentário aquí
Me encanta como ha quedado la miniatura XD
View attachment 2021575 La versión sin C-nsura la subire a PornHub o algo XD
( OK I'm going to record the video today, so if there's anything I should know put it in a comment here
I love how the thumbnail turned out XD )

Pues... podrías esperar este mes si no tenés apuro, aún sigo trabajando en la v0.06 con la que ya llevo más de 2 meses xd. Se viene un cambio muy drástico en el diseño y la jugabilidad pero todavía falta un poco, si querés ver un avance, hay posts gratis en mi patreon. Ahora si tenés algo de apuro, mandale mecha nomas. Eso sí, el capítulo 3 tiene una escena de desnudo, pero en la v0.06 se vienen más y con animaciones. Decida usté'.

 

[FurryestXOfficial]

vale, esperare un mes y grabare en SPOOKYMONTH, gracias por el aviso, no hace falta que te des prisa por acabarlo, tu a tu ritmo, y con paciencia
(okay, I'll wait a month and record in SPOOKYMONTH, thanks for the notice, you don't have to rush to finish it, you at your own pace, and with patience)

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[otaku_argento]

vale, esperare un mes y grabare en SPOOKYMONTH, gracias por el aviso, no hace falta que te des prisa por acabarlo, tu a tu ritmo, y con paciencia

Con suerte será antes de Octubre. No es que me sienta presionado ni apurado en terminar, lo hago a mi ritmo, pero quiero terminarlo sí o sí antes de Noviembre ya que el 28/11 es el primer aniversario desde que lo publiqué y quería hacer una especie de votación antes, y ahí sacar la siguiente actualización (que ya sería más fácil y rápida) antes de ese 28/11. Cualquier cosa, los domingos subo los avances semanales en mi patreon por si te interesa verlos, sino de última te aviso cuando esté, mencionándote en un nuevo comentario.

Aunque algo viejo, buen meme por cierto.

 

[Lognaros]

Hey there, I can't download the patch, Mixdrop seems to have blocked the link, or maybe mixdrop itself have a problem.

 

[otaku_argento]

Hey there, I can't download the patch, Mixdrop seems to have blocked the link, or maybe mixdrop itself have a problem.

Don't download anything. Wait a week more for the new version.

 

[otaku_argento]

Hello everybody. It's been quite a while since the last time, almost 4 months since I last updated ImoTsuyo. There are many improvements that I hope you will like, new and good content. Although it took me a long time to update, I didn't have the time to review the game 100%, until today I was fixing bugs and so on. The first adult scene is available in chapter 15.5, with its animated version available for patrons. I hope you enjoy this version and all the new content. Feel free to try all the buttons to check if there are any bugs, tell me about it and I will try to fix them as soon as possible to release a fix version before v0.07. The next update will be out on November 28th, you have until that day to complete the v0.06 free poll, the link is on my Patreon. In v0.07 the results will be displayed. I recommend playing all 16 chapters before completing the poll because it has spoilers.


For @MisterNephilim:

Aw hell yeah some Gina content

I hope you weren't bothered by last time. My comment seemed like an attempt to attract your attention by saying that there would be content from the girl you like, but believe me when I tell you that it is not like that. I was completely convinced that Gina's content was in the latest version, but it was actually in the chapter after that the last one of the last version.
I'm sorry for the long delay and I hope you enjoy this new version, which has good content of Gina.
There may be some bugs, but I hope it's not one that prevents you from playing all the new content. If you find any let me know so I can fix it as soon as possible.


For @FurryestXOfficial:

Lista la nueva versión rey. Avisame si lo grabás, aunque te recomendaría probarlo antes de grabar porque quizás tenga bugs. Espero que disfrutes de esta nueva versión.

 

[yasirahmed]

Will there be harem?

 

[otaku_argento]

Will there be harem?

Yes, there will be in the canon route.

 

[MisterNephilim]

Big quote

Well now I can really say then that

Sweet, some Gina content

 

[otaku_argento]

Well now I can really say then that

Sweet, some Gina content

I hope you enjoy it, and I hope, if exist, the bugs don't avoid you to play and enjoy all the game.

 

[htc89234]

Well, feel free to come back when there's a new version or improved translation notice, which isn't going to happen soon. So it's also an option for you to wait those 6 months for a miracle. Xd
Meanwhile, I'll keep updating and translating with Google and DeepL.

Does this mean you are translating slowly from spanish to english and kind of Edit MTLing your own source material?

 

[otaku_argento]

Does this mean you are translating slowly from spanish to english and kind of Edit MTLing your own source material?

I didn't fully understand, but yes. I translate the entire game with a translator, I know some English, but the vast majority is with Google or DeepL.

 

[j5LDC2TB]

Could someone please post an optional link for the uncensor patch, for some reason mixdrop doesn't work for me.