He's fucked about a dozen women already in what, only a week, that's hardly being afraid of pussy. Are you upset because he didn't start off raping women everywhere?This game would be better if the MC weren't a mentally challenged incel that's afraid of pussy.
Saying "uh huh" every five sentences also adds nothing.
Absolutely not. I don't like noncon of any form.He's fucked about a dozen women already in what, only a week, that's hardly being afraid of pussy. Are you upset because he didn't start off raping women everywhere?
Yeah, the errors are getting worse each update. This latest update is nearly unreadable. Considering how short the updates are becoming, and how long the time between them, you'd think they could at least read over their drafts once before releasing them.Took a bit of a break but finally caught back up. Once again offering my editing services, because for as much as I love this story it's insane how practically every sentence has a typo or some other type of error in it. Hope they keep up the good work, but if they ever need someone to give it a once-over, I'm right here.
Updated my Android port to v0.51Hi all my compressed unofficial Android port of In For A Penny 0.51
Usual gestures, save name/delete, seethru textbox, resizeable game and dialogue text.
Scrollable choices (when multiple and large)
Scrollable textbox - no more text off the bottom of your screen
Alternative persistent saves/log location
Grant storage permissions on first run!
Mega
1. You assume that the dev could trivially correct the script issues if he read more carefully; I assume the issues' root cause is that he is a non-native English speaker. That would explain most of the errors; they're either the best English he can write, or he's trying to use translations that aren't coming through well. Yes, bringing in someone who could correct the English is an obvious solution, but he may be reluctant to do so unless he can afford to pay for their services (a volunteer might more readily put off the task for other personal priorities, and might quit in short order, leaving just a tease of what could be, and then he's back to what he has. Even a motivated fan who's being paid provides no guarantee of maintaining a professional schedule).Yeah, the errors are getting worse each update. This latest update is nearly unreadable. Considering how short the updates are becoming, and how long the time between them, you'd think they could at least read over their drafts once before releasing them.
This update took about 5 minutes to play through. How does the dev not have 5 minutes to read it themselves and make some corrections before posting it? Love the game, but if the errors continue to get worse at the current rate, it'll be impossible to read future updates.
I really didn't mean for my criticisms to sound so harsh. I'm actually a translator/proofreader, myself. I'd happily offer my services here, except that I'm working on a few games already, and this one is so far along that I couldn't possibly fit it into my schedule.1. You assume that the dev could trivially correct the script issues if he read more carefully; I assume the issues' root cause is that he is a non-native English speaker. That would explain most of the errors; they're either the best English he can write, or he's trying to use translations that aren't coming through well. Yes, bringing in someone who could correct the English is an obvious solution, but he may be reluctant to do so unless he can afford to pay for their services (a volunteer might more readily put off the task for other personal priorities, and might quit in short order, leaving just a tease of what could be, and then he's back to what he has. Even a motivated fan who's being paid provides no guarantee of maintaining a professional schedule).
2. I believe he is still putting out an update a month. He may have been late on a few occasions, but his basic release schedule remains the same. I'm a bit behind on this right now, and haven't been a "play through each update completely, as it comes out" player for a while (if I ever was), so I can't comment on the size of each update. But it doesn't seem right to complain about "how long the time between them" is becoming. There are many successful AVNs on this site that release at best 2 to 3 times a year; monthly (or better) releases should be applauded.
Nope. And no need for one. What few choices there are is pretty straight-forward. This is more or less a glorified Kinetic Novel.Is there any walkthrough-mod?![]()
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