- Jun 30, 2018
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there is not even ONE midget ingame - just the MC is few inches shorter then the girls - nothing really big or serious
- Jun 16, 2021
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Hello Doomazar
welcome and thank you for presenting your project here.
many developers have already tried to develop family stories of this kind, but very few have also understood how to set themselves apart from similar projects through the content and even interestingly designed publications were unfortunately very quickly abandoned.
Your renders and animations look good, although for me personally the sister looks older than the (probably) mother and the (probably) aunt somehow doesn't fit in optically at all, or there's just no direct blood relationship.
It remains to be seen which influence the decisions made (point system) will have on the further course of the game and what exactly you want to tell/describe and will probably only emerge after a few updates.
good luck
welcome and thank you for presenting your project here.
many developers have already tried to develop family stories of this kind, but very few have also understood how to set themselves apart from similar projects through the content and even interestingly designed publications were unfortunately very quickly abandoned.
Your renders and animations look good, although for me personally the sister looks older than the (probably) mother and the (probably) aunt somehow doesn't fit in optically at all, or there's just no direct blood relationship.
It remains to be seen which influence the decisions made (point system) will have on the further course of the game and what exactly you want to tell/describe and will probably only emerge after a few updates.
good luck
- Nov 19, 2017
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The beginning is already interesting, the father leaves and someone has to take care of the women day and night.
- Jul 7, 2021
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- Jun 1, 2021
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I don't like forced LIs.
It's short.
It's a bit rough around the edges.
But it can be good.
It's short.
It's a bit rough around the edges.
But it can be good.
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To be fair, trying to create a male character that's neither the standard of absolute masculinity with a "perfect" looking face, nor comically ugly to the point of looking weird and not fall into the pit of a face so average, it's completely non relatable, is painfully frustrating in Daz Studio. To me, it's very obvious that most people creating content for Daz are way more focused on females than males, so when you're trying to have a MC that's simply "kind of interesting", you're in for hours of tweaking morphs.
- Nov 20, 2018
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HEY! Keep your "inches" away from mine! I already told you: 9 inches is plenty.
- Jun 12, 2017
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Hippity Hoppity time to fuck my whole family
Not how it work chief. You show you got the goods and people will come and pay.
So, there's a [creampie] tag but there is no [vaginal sex] or [anal sex] tag. How does that work?
- Jun 30, 2018
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maybe cheese-cream pie, strawberry-cream pie or any other creamy pie?
- May 22, 2020
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I felt like naming myself Woll instead of Will before giving it a try. No idea why.
I must say it felt really in place with all those misspellings xD
(Seriously, it breaks way too much immersion. Unless you're aiming for the skip-all-text kind of person, double-checking here is of utmost importance. I'm not a native speaker, so I tend not to care about this type of thing, specially typos. But we're way out of scale here.)
Renders are decent. Animation was a bit unaligned, but will get a pass. But why did the BJ girl had her tongue white? I know she was thirsty, but damn....
But one thing you're doing great so far: you don't get us stuck at a single render for too many sentences. That's great. It helps the game not to get too boring.
Good luck on your game
I must say it felt really in place with all those misspellings xD
(Seriously, it breaks way too much immersion. Unless you're aiming for the skip-all-text kind of person, double-checking here is of utmost importance. I'm not a native speaker, so I tend not to care about this type of thing, specially typos. But we're way out of scale here.)
Renders are decent. Animation was a bit unaligned, but will get a pass. But why did the BJ girl had her tongue white? I know she was thirsty, but damn....
But one thing you're doing great so far: you don't get us stuck at a single render for too many sentences. That's great. It helps the game not to get too boring.
Good luck on your game
- May 6, 2017
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Wow, this might come off as harsh or mean. But this gotta be the worst writing I have ever seen. Even games with horrible engrish is at least better written than this. This game doesnt suffer too badly from engrish. But rather how it all is written.
I dunno maybe it was originaly written in some other language, and then google translate?
Overall, I got the feeling this VN was written by a very, very young individual.
And sure, not everyone can write perfectly. But this wasn't even close to "ok".
But at least this game gave me a good laugh, I was literally laughing while playing. It was so funny, even tho it wasnt meant to be. So that's always something I guess? (trying real hard here to find positive things to say)
Characters looks..alright?
I dunno maybe it was originaly written in some other language, and then google translate?
Overall, I got the feeling this VN was written by a very, very young individual.
And sure, not everyone can write perfectly. But this wasn't even close to "ok".
But at least this game gave me a good laugh, I was literally laughing while playing. It was so funny, even tho it wasnt meant to be. So that's always something I guess? (trying real hard here to find positive things to say)
Characters looks..alright?
I tried to edit the script (event.rpy) but after all the changes I got an error and wonder if some of the bad "Engrish" appears in the Renpy Game Code as well.
Passing this for now, may come back at a later date.
Passing this for now, may come back at a later date.