It is obviously too early for a proper review, so I will just sprinkle some words around.
Renders: For the most part pretty solid – the detail is there and they are an upgrade over the prior game, but...
The lighting in some shots gets so mangled, it may have been color corrected by someone legally blind.
Flow: Follows a simple day-by-day structure of how the two main characters prepare for the Big Event, but...
The cuts and transitions are sometimes so nonsensical that I thought I accidentally skipped a part of the game (e.g. the graduation).
Music/SFX: Pretty good. Nothing to add here, really.
Characters: The MC isn't a wimp, the main LI is written rather well, and the supporting cast is pretty enjoyable. I'm kind of curious where they'll end up.
Writing: Let me just say this - I refuse to believe this dialogue was written by a person. Pretty much every line feels computer-generated, inorganic, and, at times, extremely out of place. Every single time I thought I could get cozy and relate to a person, an absurdly ostentatious line hits my brain, resulting in a deep sigh (e.g. "Have you gathered your wits about you?" Really...?). The main protagonists are supposed to be young adults yet they sound like the graduation speech from the intro that overstayed its welcome. It's really quite bad.
Overall: The game's premise is pretty cool - exploring the porn industry sounds like a setup for many a twists and turns.
It is, unfortunately, ruined by the absolutely amateurish writing. If that aspect was to get a revamp, it can still garner some attention.