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Andrew Tate

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Am I the only one who thinks the LI looks strikingly like Eternum's Dalia? I know HS renders always have that that similar "HS look", but this similarity is at another level...
And what's supposed to be the next comment in line? The story uncannily the same?
 
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Ozygator

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Need a way to redefine characters for name and other things. Unless some major part of the story counters it, need either more config or a patch.
 

SteveyP

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The story seems unique. Not a fan of the virgin thing, especially in this setting. But at least we got it out of the way early instead of going through all the tropes that come with the tag. I might keep an eye out for it to see how this story unfolds as it does seem more on the original side.
 
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CrumblePi

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It is obviously too early for a proper review, so I will just sprinkle some words around.

Renders: For the most part pretty solid – the detail is there and they are an upgrade over the prior game, but...
The lighting in some shots gets so mangled, it may have been color corrected by someone legally blind.

Flow: Follows a simple day-by-day structure of how the two main characters prepare for the Big Event, but...
The cuts and transitions are sometimes so nonsensical that I thought I accidentally skipped a part of the game (e.g. the graduation).

Music/SFX: Pretty good. Nothing to add here, really.

Characters: The MC isn't a wimp, the main LI is written rather well, and the supporting cast is pretty enjoyable. I'm kind of curious where they'll end up.

Writing: Let me just say this - I refuse to believe this dialogue was written by a person. Pretty much every line feels computer-generated, inorganic, and, at times, extremely out of place. Every single time I thought I could get cozy and relate to a person, an absurdly ostentatious line hits my brain, resulting in a deep sigh (e.g. "Have you gathered your wits about you?" Really...?). The main protagonists are supposed to be young adults yet they sound like the graduation speech from the intro that overstayed its welcome. It's really quite bad.

Overall: The game's premise is pretty cool - exploring the porn industry sounds like a setup for many a twists and turns.
It is, unfortunately, ruined by the absolutely amateurish writing. If that aspect was to get a revamp, it can still garner some attention.
 

Pgsurprise

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Nov 27, 2022
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After finishing it, the story is fine so far but it has the same problem as a shit ton of new games have now. None of the sex scenes show any penetration at all.

Super disappointed that the first scene for the MC is all just behind or to the side with legs in the way, and damn near every dev is doing it for some reason. Lots of nice buildup to it for a lackluster payout.

Also this first chapter is heavy on the voyeur stuff and watching other people who are not the MC have sex. Hope that goes away in the future.
Artistic differences. For my taste many of the penetration scenes are not sexy, and sometimes off putting. I'm sure devs have their own ideas of what they find attractive, and it'd be hard to produce good visuals if they're not a fan.
 

v1900

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After finishing it, the story is fine so far but it has the same problem as a shit ton of new games have now. None of the sex scenes show any penetration at all.

Super disappointed that the first scene for the MC is all just behind or to the side with legs in the way, and damn near every dev is doing it for some reason. Lots of nice buildup to it for a lackluster payout.

Also this first chapter is heavy on the voyeur stuff and watching other people who are not the MC have sex. Hope that goes away in the future.
I blame HS for that, some devs avoid showing penetration if they can't fix the clipping of the vagina (overlapping of shapes). Sometimes the tools available just won't help. Honey Select is known to have problems with clipping of the penis and vagina, depending on the assets used.
 

Ozygator

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Good start. Renders were nice, music fit the scenes for the most part and the characters were fleshed out and entertaining.

It's amusing to hear some complaints about the writing, but the writing was fine. There was maybe a line or two that were jumbled, but not anything close to what some have mentioned.

I would recommend those who think that speaking in full sentences, with thought behind them, and not full of slang were "poorly written" to perhaps upgrade your vocabulary, speaking skills and learn to talk like adults. Yes this is how adults speak, instead of criticizing, you might want to learn from it instead. ;)

Looking forward to where this goes.. Let's see where the ex fits in, hopefully the MC won't fall back into that shit again. Also, will Eri and Mariam have a thing? We'll see!
 
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4.00 star(s) 14 Votes