Lmao Jesus Christ, I didn't think her face was that bad xD.
She will be receiving a touchup/makeover in the next episode anyway which players can vote on so people are happier.
Body aesthetics not so much but I'll do some minor adjustments where needed.
Besides teasing her alien-like features is there actually any constructive criticism?
Thanks,
Dob.
Wow, there's a lot of jerks in here! Sorry your first day at work as a dev had to be so shitty. Ignore the people who think being rude and unfiltered is funny and focus on those who are trying to help, like
Stevie's reply.
I'm interested in your game. I was immediately drawn to the cast of characters and the female MC. I see lots of ways for her to get lewded. Hoping to see more of it, so keep your head up and carry on.
I do agree that the MC's face needs some work, primarily in the proportions. She looks a little bit like a victim of Down's Syndrome, where the forehead is disproportionately large compared to the features, and the head overall is a bit large for the body, especially as shown in the bikini pose. While planning the scene and morphing the model, maybe you can zoom out to get fuller perspective or add another stock model or two so you can compare her head to theirs - then delete them before rendering.
Another suggestion: you have indicated that the game will develop as patrons vote. That's fine, but I suggest that you have a core plan overall for the game, one based on what you like to create. It's easy to let the patrons influence your game to the point where you're not making something you enjoy, and your motivation and your art will suffer from it.
For instance, if you plan for this to be a BBC game, but instead the patrons keep voting for content between MC and her father and brother, you'll find yourself making an incest game. If that's not your bag, you'll soon lose interest in it. So make sure you have a plan for the game and provide voting options that align with that plan.
Anyway, wish you luck and looking forward to further releases!