Is it possible for someone who is like a good programmer/story writer to message the artist and become like a team and make an AMAZING game together?
because this game is like an 11 out of 5 when it comes to Art, and like -7 out of 8 when it comes to everything else.
Its actually pretty hard for a pro writer to help here.
I dont know who else is a professional writer in this forum aside from me but to actually work on this game (story wise) would cost the dev a pretty penny which i highly doubt the dev team would pay to actually rise this story to something lets say more substantial.
To give you an example. Making me or someone similar actually use our free time to work on this for lets say a month would cost you around 600€ up to 1200€ depending what you exactly want.
To work full time on this project for lets say a year you would actually have to outpay my publisher for 2 or 3 books i could finish in the same time which would mean around 45k to 60k as a years salary.
Seeing that this game makes almost 10k a month the actual writer would eat half the income. I highly doubt the dev team would agree to that at all. And even if they would which they won't but lets assume they would the amount of story the writer lets appear out of thin air would blow this game to proportions no one would be willing to actually read, animate or program or play for that matter.
More then a monthly fee for some decent story line pointers and an actual plot are not needed for these kind of projects and myself offer small advice or pointers for free in this forum. I kinda play with the idea to make a guide for new devs or even old ones on how to actually make a good story/plot like a red line through a game that they can follow and make their developing process alot easier but i didnt find the time yet to actually write it down.
If you like to get back a few pages you can see that one of the devs is in this forum discussing stuff but not open for constructive critique or suggestions on how to improve the game so it could be pretty hard for someone with skill to actually help as it looks like the dev doesnt want you talking bad about his project in any way.
But for your issues. I can understand that ppl feel like this game COULD be something awesome! But for now it isnt.
It starts with the claim that the save system isn't fixable and ends that the so called story of this game is basically non existant there is only a plot that makes the delay in delivering sexual content for over 3 years more understandable.
But before we draw any conclusion lets wait for next month and the next update and see how the plot and the actual sex scenes develop before our eyes. If they are half decent i will go back to become a patreon and i am pretty sure i wont be the only one coming back once this game has some decent content.
