I believe the frustration is this: Know your audience and what they want. If you make a porn game, make porn the focus. If you make an RPG, make character development and story the focus. I get that you guys want people to read your story, because you think it's super important to the game and you believe it to be awesome. But take it from somebody who have read it; You could easily shorten it down 80 %, still have the same info given to the player and not waste 15 minutes of idly clicking through things.
A more thorough review would be this:
Pros:
artstyle
characters
environments
potential ( for beautiful porn scenes. That's about it).
cons:
story, its too bloated and provides zero additional info that couldn't be portrayed with "you are character x, in charge of Hogwarts. You're less morally crippled than the previous headmasters and as such have a mission; Change the rules in your favor and corrupt the students and faculty of hogwarts". Bam.
needless dragging on with no progression made, this is especially the case with the bullshit "talk to these girls, find out their stance on this bullshit, then click through for 10-20 minutes, and try all options until something progresses". I mean, who the hell cares what daphne has to say about rules, or what fatty has to say about underwear?
cryptic progression and insane amounts of guessing, especially with snape and the whole rule-segment with the four girls.
( i am going to put "bullshitting the player" here as well, as the concept is misleading. It's a porn game, with 1 sex scene and a few boob pictures...i mean, come on.)
verdict:
it feels like the devs dont play their own game. If they did, they would've removed 80 % of the text, removed the rule-discussion segment, streamlined a bunch, actually added sex scenes and similar interesting things.
