VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.12.3] [Nyx]

[Deleted member 596203]

First impressions.

I don't like the way the mom looks as if she is as old as her son. I get it that the women are supposed to look sexy, but for that they don't have to look young, it's weird enough if the MC looks like he is 25 and the mom as if she is 30, but here they look like they are both around 20, that really throws me off.

Apart from that, lots of great looking girls, some really cute character-wise. Apart from Layla and Elena I like Melissa the most, she looks a lot more like an actual milf than the mom AND she has that punk/tomboy look that I really like.

IDK what people are talking about in relation to some of the girls seems like there's very little substance to all that speculation. She has got a secret, but unless I missed some very specific evidence I don't see that her being a prostitute seems very likely.

All in all I'm impressed with the game and hope this one continues.

When I first started creating this VN, I had 0 experience with DAZ3D. So I didn't really know how to make someone look older. And changing her appearance now would look weird too (Or I have to redo every render she's in).. So for this one, let's say she won the genetic jackpot..

 

[KoGa3]

Updated my Mod for the new game version v0.3 (hopefully there are not to many bugs in there...)
Functions so far: Music/Audio addon+"Jukebox", walkthrough, status screen, some cheating.

The link is on the OP or you go here.
There is also an own page here on F95zone for the Mod, you can find it here

 

[Osamabeenfappin]

I've loved this so far. Congrats on making a VN with an actually likeable best friend. All the girls are gorgeously rendered, and likeable. (except for that one receptionist). And the plot is moving along at a good pace. This is definetly one to keep an eye on moving forward.

 

[Qmil679]

I've loved this so far. Congrats on making a VN with an actually likeable best friend. All the girls are gorgeously rendered, and likeable. (except for that one receptionist). And the plot is moving along at a good pace. This is definetly one to keep an eye on moving forward.

Indeed. The only thing that worries me is the situation with Erynn. Besides, the game is great, more and more interesting from update to update.

 

[Osamabeenfappin]

Indeed. The only thing that worries me is the situation with Erynn. Besides, the game is great, more and more interesting from update to update.

I'm leaning towards Erynn is an escort myself. But whether she is or not, I'm willing to bet her life is an absolute drama filled shit show right now. So........ kinda dreading interacting with her going forward. And she'll probably be a secondary play through at best.

And 'model' is often an IRL code for, escort, hooker, prostitute, whore, whatever you want to call it.

However who knows, maybe we're all just mis reading the situation and she's actually wholesome AF.

 

[EthanHunt95]

Such a lovely game
Really enjoyed
This is not incest game right or
(Some options there Im confusing that's all)
Looking forward to next updates...

 

[Qmil679]

I'm leaning towards Erynn is an escort myself. But whether she is or not, I'm willing to bet her life is an absolute drama filled shit show right now. So........ kinda dreading interacting with her going forward. And she'll probably be a secondary play through at best.

And 'model' is often an IRL code for, escort, hooker, prostitute, whore, whatever you want to call it.

However who knows, maybe we're all just mis reading the situation and she's actually wholesome AF.

Well, almost nothing is known about this situation yet. We know she made mistakes in the past, she even cried when she said it when MC was asleep, so it must have been something serious. After the conversation in the club and her clothes, you can suspect a few things. We have to wait for the next update and see if we will find out anything more, there is nothing to come up with for now.

 

[Osamabeenfappin]

Well, almost nothing is known about this situation yet. We know she made mistakes in the past, she even cried when she said it when MC was asleep, so it must have been something serious. After the conversation in the club and her clothes, you can suspect a few things. We have to wait for the next update and see if we will find out anything more, there is nothing to come up with for now.

Pretty much. As an aside I think Melissa and mom have the best tits in the game so far. Melissa might be the sexiest character hands down.

 

[Qmil679]

Pretty much. As an aside I think Melissa and mom have the best tits in the game so far. Melissa might be the sexiest character hands down.

I agree. It is a pity that there is not much content with them. So far, most scenes are with Layla, Elen and Alexis. Let's hope something will appear in 0.4.

 

[nevermoreXX]

With that response that she gave in the club
"So.. What's the occasion? Some private party or something like that?"
"Yeah.. Something like that.."

And the comment she makes later
"I made so many mistakes.."
"I needed you here.. Who else watches out for me.."

Makes you wonder what she has been doing since you left.

At the moment I'm leaning towards Layla and Elena as the best options.

They also had their fucked up moment. Probably teacher ? When elena said


el "What's going on with you and the new guy anyway?"
la "Nothing's going on..."
la "Just a little harmless flirting.."
el "Harmless flirting? Remember what happened with ... you know who?"
la "I know..."
el "I'm just looking out for you Layla, okay.."

 

[Qmil679]

They also had their fucked up moment. Probably teacher ? When elena said


el "What's going on with you and the new guy anyway?"
la "Nothing's going on..."
la "Just a little harmless flirting.."
el "Harmless flirting? Remember what happened with ... you know who?"
la "I know..."
el "I'm just looking out for you Layla, okay.."

Also such an unknown. We don't know anything about it yet, we have to wait for the next updates to see if it will be mentioned. But I feel that when we get closer to Layla, he will tell us sometime. Because we want to know her and her past, as well as the rest of the women in this game.

 

[Sulring Durgul]

Well, this update made it clear that all the girls have baggage or drama in their life.
Elena is probably the least messed up of them, she just has a lot going on at home. I'm starting to find her more interesting than the other girls, though I was on team Alexis from the beginning.
The scene with Erynn in her room made me regret that MC didn't have an option to actually wake her up and clear things out when he saw that she'd been crying. What kind of lame fucker just leaves a girl that has cried herself to sleep?
The situation is just providing drama for drama's sake: we have no clue as to what happened between them in the past, so having to choose how you answer her the following day is ridiculous. It could be one of them hurt the other or it was just a misunderstanding, but how can we make an informed decision without the facts?
I was not really interested in Erynn anyway, her mother is way hotter so I guess I'll just ignore her part of the story.

 

[nevermoreXX]

Also such an unknown. We don't know anything about it yet, we have to wait for the next updates to see if it will be mentioned. But I feel that when we get closer to Layla, he will tell us sometime. Because we want to know her and her past, as well as the rest of the women in this game.

yeah i dont know about that. I ditched Alexis. i am just not into instant sluts. Rachel included.
layla is just stupid ,spoiled. elena seems to be only intelligent or sounded like one.
Eryn? i wouldnt waste time with "model" if she was last on the planet. I had experience with one, she was so freaking wide it felt entire tribe of indians could fit in there and get lost. Avoided ever since

 

[Qmil679]

yeah i dont know about that. I ditched Alexis. i am just not into instant sluts. Rachel included.
layla is just stupid ,spoiled. elena seems to be only intelligent or sounded like one.
Eryn? i wouldnt waste time with "model" if she was last on the planet. I had experience with one, she was so freaking wide it felt entire tribe of indians could fit in there and get lost. Avoided ever since

Well, the first meeting with Alexis may be interesting, but immediately sex? It bothers me a bit. We don't know her well and she wants sex right away and we are a stranger to her. It was just spontaneous. I like her, but I prefer to get to know a woman more and then go to bed with her.

 

[Tkoyama]

Huuuum.....looks interesting.

 

[RBT71]

{It's just my own opinion (English isn't my first language, sorry if any silly mistake)}
Why everyone expecting a disney movie love story and ending I don't understand. All love stories doesn't end well{Most of them actually fails}.
I know it's a sex game, and harem route is one of the most popular choice because you get to see a lots of scene. But I never understand why a group of girls from different background will happily agree to share a guy who is mostly a schoolboy with a huge Dick and nothing else.

And i like most of the characters.
A girl could just looking for sex, maybe not looking for a relationship.
A girl could be an escort. It doesn't change the past.
And I hope there will an option to ditch a girl who not only refused but made fun of MC in his childhood. {May be fuck her and leave her. Even if she turns out to be an escort, it would still worth it}

So far I like the game.

 

[nevermoreXX]

Well, the first meeting with Alexis may be interesting, but immediately sex? It bothers me a bit. We don't know her well and she wants sex right away and we are a stranger to her. It was just spontaneous. I like her, but I prefer to get to know a woman more and then go to bed with her.

I totally agree! Its stupid on too many levels.

P.S
What can one even expect from woman who fucks 10 mins after meeting someone? STD for starter...she definitelly didnt even bother to ask for condom.. used to doing things too much? What can such girl even offer you ? fuck that shit

 

[ZagorTeNay]

Don't worry.. I don't see this as criticism at all. Feedback!
I try to answer some stuff without spoiling it..

Pacing about Melissa pool --> next day.. Means nothing worthwhile happened that evening.. MC's probably watching TV/Playing games on his pc/homework,... I don't see the point in spending time making those renders if I can rather spend more time in creating the important ones. But if people really want those fillers, I can add some to tie things together..

I added the max point system for the sole reason if you are interested in 1 specific girl, you get some kind of reward instead of chasing every girl.. Also can be changed to max -2. Depends what others think about it.

The cafetaria scene at school with, I think you meant Zach instead of Dylan.. Mostly in high school, everyone has "their" table, it's like this in movies and actually when I was at school, we did the same.. Always sitting at the same table..
Zach knows that too. Maybe he did that on purpose to get a reaction from the girls.. We don't know the relationship yet between them, only that Zach likes Layla.. Maybe it's just that kind of banter they have..
So I don't think they came on to strong..

The thing about Erynn.. This is a tough one.. The least bit I say about it will spoil it..
Do we actually know what really happened in the past..? You know MC's side of the story.. Maybe it's a missunderstanding, maybe it's more than that..
That scene will be created at some point to show what happened..
Even if you choose the "Two can play that game" option, you will still be able to forgive her later if you chose to do so.. Once you know what happened or if you get to know her again for the person she is..
The forgive option is just a more adult response to it.. Like don't dwell in the past, just move forward..

Lastly Alexis.. Maybe she didn't contact him is because she is embarassed/scared or doesn't want MC to know (yet)..
Or something important came up and she forgot.. MC didn't contact her either to ask..
They aren't dating (yet?) so they don't really owe eachother an explanation..
But I see your point.. I might add something. There will be a "filler update" at some point where I change some scenes, add scenes in between which give more info (There's only so much time in a month if I want to keep releasing each month).

But don't worry.. She has planned something for MC to make up for it.. You have to wait for that..

I hope this helps a bit..

Ignore some stupid comments here, some people throw a fit if women had more than one sex partner. And sometimes, "slut" can be more caring, loyal, "pure" woman when she meets the right guy.
As wise man once said ( or was it Alfius? ): what matters more is who is her last.
If I had to name some criticism:
- lighting could be better, sometimes color contrast is "too strong"
- some of the scenes transitioning can feel a bit "choppy", the way it jumps from one day to the next, immediately to set events.

 

[5p1der]

Damn man if Alexis and Layla are sisters (It sure looks like it) than there's going to be trouble for MC.

 

[Glooskabe]

Damn man if Alexis and Layla are sisters (It sure looks like it) than there's going to be trouble for MC.

Maybe? I don't think it would be to hard to downgrade Layla to friends status at the moment. Depending on what the heck happened with Alexis, we may not even want to continue with her.

Oh, you mean boning them both at the same time? You dog! Yeah, that could be problematic!