Gh0st_Harambe

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This is a great VN.

The only critique I have of it is that the dev made Alexis and Nikki both extremely attractive and extremely accessible. Why even bother with anyone else when the two most attractive characters are delivered to you on a silver platter so quickly? I don't have a personal issue with it, it's just something I can see making the emotional impact the dev would try to deliver in the future impossible if it doesn't affect either of their plot lines.

I also feel as if they tried to make Erynn a conventionally attractive character and missed the mark pretty drastically. She has the jaw of a heavyweight boxer. Her jaw is so masculine and powerful she could probably drink peanut butter with that thing. Looking at the polls her ranking doesn't surprise me at all as she has the cut and paste look of a post-op SoCal chick.

If I was the dev and wanted Erynn to be a hitter I would've aimed for a model that looked more like Kaylah from Hillside:
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The level of attractiveness is incomparable IMO




Patreon in general doesn't allow incest content. I was surprised that this VN even somewhat teases it.

Putting myself in the dev's shoes it's something I wouldn't even flirt with.
Erynn all day long.
 

Bailz

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im gutted i might have to change the name of my train because Erynns not so crazy anymore, maybe the Erynn love train and maybe the destination is no longer heartbreakville, but im getting my hopes up and knowing Nyx shes probably standing with a sledgehammer just waiting to shatter that hope she is pure evil
 

Gh0st_Harambe

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im gutted i might have to change the name of my train because Erynns not so crazy anymore, maybe the Erynn love train and maybe the destination is no longer heartbreakville, but im getting my hopes up and knowing Nyx shes probably standing with a sledgehammer just waiting to shatter that hope she is pure evil
If you are the driver, im one of the passengers.
Erynn till the end.
 
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MrFriendly

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is there any chance that the mc will ever bang adriana?
I seriously doubt it. Unlike most of the AVN on this site it seems Nyx is trying to have more realistic or “realistic” relationships. So Adriana is unlikely to go off and fuck the MC, especially if she knows that the MC is with one or both of her daughters. In addition we’ve not seen a lot of hints that Adriana is unhappy with her marriage.
 

LSC82

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I seriously doubt it. Unlike most of the AVN on this site it seems Nyx is trying to have more realistic or “realistic” relationships. So Adriana is unlikely to go off and fuck the MC, especially if she knows that the MC is with one or both of her daughters. In addition we’ve not seen a lot of hints that Adriana is unhappy with her marriage.
She's even supportive if she finds you making out with her daughter in the couch...
Just what has this world come to? Supportive mothers that don't want to steal their daughters boyfriends? Disgusting...
 

Poser_Voyeur

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I dunno man, nutting in your biodad's wife who's clearly pining after you sounds like a shit ton of baggage. :D

I was actually really surprised at how little drama there is on Alexis' path with ep7. Outside of patching things up with Erynn, its all helping other people now. Until Nyx throws the next bomb. Or you're making out with Layla.
Well I think Erryn's arrival is going to spark drama between Lexi and Erryn, and we are about to go away on training camp with Layla, so scope for more drama between Lexi and Layla depending on events there.

I agree with previous poster (Porthas IIRC) who mentioned that SO FAR, we have just about managed to skirt the boundaries of not technically cheating with any girl (#WeWereOnaBreak).

In my current playthrough I have got back with Lexi, have told Erryn that, but have not yet told Layla.
So Training Camp is probably going to require several save points as tough decisions seem to lie ahead.....
 
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I agree, but I did kind of wonder if Nyx was maybe setting up a threesome fling with Iris when Iris kissed Lexi. Yeah, Lexi didn't react positively to it, but I dunno, they gave me vibes of having fooled around, and maybe one thing might lead to another with MC.

I wouldn't say no. :love:
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Mr. Muscles

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I'm pretty torn actually. I was really enjoying Alexis' relationship with the MC before the revelation, after it, I'll admit that I was slightly conflicted. Still, resuming their relationship was really engaging so I kept this path alive. I'm also growing fond of Erryn, not as much as Alexis, but it's a thing. I like Layla, she's sweet, but I feel like that's all there is in her. Still, that's another path that is still open. I also like Cara, but she's probably on third place with Layla. In my head, it just makes more sense for the MC to be more interested in Alexis or Erryn. I also justify some choices by saying that the MC isn't in a relationship with anyone, so sleeping around shouldn't be much of an issue, except for certain cases like Layla and Alexis, so I feel like I'll have to end Layla's relationship very soon in order keep Alexis strong if this can go somewhere.

I'll admit I rate Alexis pretty high as the main girl for the MC, so far.

What do you people think? To you, how does your own MC justify his choices and sees everything that is going around him?
 
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