VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.12.3] [Nyx]

[Avaron1974]

Are you aware that when you apply for a job in the US, most of the time, the company has a security department that does a background check and the first place they look is social media.

Which is why I think the blackmail is dumb.

Which do you think is going to look worse to them, a sex tape used as revenge porn filmed against her will while she was in college OR working as a high end escort which, on paper and if she's ever arrested, is down as prostitution.

Remember her clients are all rich so could well end up being someone high up the ladder of where she would be working.

Now, it comes out in class she's been in a sex tape with her then boyfriend. She'll have teenage boys fapping for days over that shit. The knowledge of the tape gets back to their parents. Some will be sickened, some will not care and some will sympathise however all will forget after a few months and there are some institutes that would have her back for that.

Then it comes out she's worked as a prostitute. Now she's got teenage boys saying they will pay her for a fuck. That gets back to the parents and there is uproar. Who's going to want to have their children around a whore?

We know she isn't having sex with them but they won't. On top of that she's getting more pressure to fuck them and lets face it, she doesn't make good decisions so sooner or later, without help, she would.

Now we hit why I don't like Erynn at all.

We have been told, multiple times, how intelligent she is with the rather large problem being every single thing she's done has been incredibly dumb. I haven't seen a single scrap of evidence that she is as intelligent as the game wants me to believe.

Which brings us to Erynn and Ethan. I see people call Ethan a manipulator but ask yourself this, why is it only 2 people have fallen for it and it just so happens to be 2 idiots in Erynn and Zach. Literally no one else believes his bullshit and knows he's a snake yet Erynn falls for his shit every . single . time.

She even stands the MC up, a guy she claims to have so many feelings for, to see Ethan.

Erynn claims Lexi is her best friend yet she believed Ethan, a guy she claims to know is full of shit, when he said Lexi had been coming onto him. She believed him over her supposed best friend.

Then she claims dibs on a guy she hasn't seen for 5 years and falls out with Lexi AGAIN this time not even allowing the MC to make his own choices.

So, in closing, she's not as clver as she thinks she is, she's gullible, she's got narcissistic tendencies and she's been hung up on Ethan for years.

Erynn does not has a single redeeming quality except she's attractive.

As the old song would have gone if it was sung about this game ..... everything she can do every single love interest does better, they can do everything better than her.

 

[KhamulTG81]

... OR working as a high end escort which, on paper and if she's ever arrested, is down as prostitution.

false statement...

escort ≠ prostitution

Escorts are exchanging their company, ie companionship, for a fee. The exchange in no way guarantees any sexual acts will transpire. The client pays for a companion, what the companion does with the time she has been paid to supply is up to her.

Which is why I said on paper and not as a fact.

What the job is and what hysterical parents will claim it is are 2 entirely different things. They won't take the time to distinguish between hooker and evening companion, they are all the same to them.

You wrote:

... on paper and if she's ever arrested, is down as prostitution.

wich is just untrue.

 

[Puma1978]

Honestly it's the worst story for many reasons.

Alexis is introduced as this girl who is into 1 night stands and bootycalls the MC. Nothing wrong with that, that's a fun girl.
But later we learn she's best friends with Erynn and knew who the mc was all along, which begged the question:
"If you knew all along he was your BFFs crush why did you fuck him? And kept fucking him later?"
"I fucked him because he's hot" would obviously make for a despicable friend, so this got retconned into somehow she feels deeply connected to this kid she barely knew but stole her first kiss for a few seconds, five years ago.

The retcon flips her from girl who likes to have some fun to hopelessly in love way too fast(totally overshooting past me who was just having some fun with this girl and now she's uber attached).
And this backstory is something i can't relate to, she's a horrible backstabbing friend and more than a little manipulative.
And funny enough is sanctimonious as shit if she catches you lying to her, Jesus the high horse on this girl.

The Alexis vs Layla (and vs Erynn) drama being written out so quickly killed the character for good to me.
This was the kind of drama that i was enjoying(not girls getting assaulted or worst), how would they react when they found out? It's all solved quickly and without fireworks, Layla takes it in the chin like a champ, which feels very wrong to me(Alexis at least cries).
And if you kept the lie they find out off screen, she just pops in to tell you off, not unrealistic, but not the most entertaining way to handle this.

With Erynn much the same, there is a "getting caught" route, so some fireworks, but even if you witheld info in the previous episode(and got the almost sex with Erynn scene)the MC automatically tells Erynn he's with Alexis after the training camp, you can't even stick to lying, it's handled for you automatically, that's disappointing.
And of course Erynn now has much bigger problems to worry about than catfighting Alexis.

I dont see any deeper relation between Erynn and MC at the beginning. And there was no sign that Erynn had a crush on him as a young boy. Just the opposite. Erynn was a teenager and the MC a young boy who got bullied by Erynns boyfriend and Alexis was the one who comforted him when he was crying. And Erynn was in a relationship with Ethan while Alexis was single.
And the moments between MC and Alexis are also just better integrated in the story so i think the Dev developed the Alexis path better then the other options. I think Erynn is preserved to get the girlfriend of Iris later in the game because may she will have issues to trust men after Ethan.

 

[Avaron1974]

false statement...

escort ≠ prostitution

Escorts are exchanging their company, ie companionship, for a fee. The exchange in no way guarantees any sexual acts will transpire. The client pays for a companion, what the companion does with the time she has been paid to supply is up to her.

Which is why I said on paper and not as a fact.

What the job is and what hysterical parents will claim it is are 2 entirely different things. They won't take the time to distinguish between hooker and evening companion, they are all the same to them.

 

[Puma1978]

Honestly it's the worst story for many reasons.

Alexis is introduced as this girl who is into 1 night stands and bootycalls the MC. Nothing wrong with that, that's a fun girl.
But later we learn she's best friends with Erynn and knew who the mc was all along, which begged the question:
"If you knew all along he was your BFFs crush why did you fuck him? And kept fucking him later?"
"I fucked him because he's hot" would obviously make for a despicable friend, so this got retconned into somehow she feels deeply connected to this kid she barely knew but stole her first kiss for a few seconds, five years ago.

The retcon flips her from girl who likes to have some fun to hopelessly in love way too fast(totally overshooting past me who was just having some fun with this girl and now she's uber attached).
And this backstory is something i can't relate to, she's a horrible backstabbing friend and more than a little manipulative.
And funny enough is sanctimonious as shit if she catches you lying to her, Jesus the high horse on this girl.

The Alexis vs Layla (and vs Erynn) drama being written out so quickly killed the character for good to me.
This was the kind of drama that i was enjoying(not girls getting assaulted or worst), how would they react when they found out? It's all solved quickly and without fireworks, Layla takes it in the chin like a champ, which feels very wrong to me(Alexis at least cries).
And if you kept the lie they find out off screen, she just pops in to tell you off, not unrealistic, but not the most entertaining way to handle this.

With Erynn much the same, there is a "getting caught" route, so some fireworks, but even if you witheld info in the previous episode(and got the almost sex with Erynn scene)the MC automatically tells Erynn he's with Alexis after the training camp, you can't even stick to lying, it's handled for you automatically, that's disappointing.
And of course Erynn now has much bigger problems to worry about than catfighting Alexis.

I dont see any deeper relation between Erynn and MC at the beginning. And there was no sign that Erynn had a crush on him as a young boy. Just the opposite. Erynn was a teenager and the MC a young boy who got bullied by Erynns boyfriend and Alexis was the one who comforted him when he was crying. And Erynn was in a relationship with Ethan while Alexis was single.

Hi,

Fap: no - more story driven

Artwork: looks beautiful, animations could need more frames

MC: actually good looking, I like the tattoos, could also get a piercing, Is not overly dumb, just in view of relationsships view an asshole, don't know how he gets through with this that they still like him.. lol

Story: puh...

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Cons: animations, no harem or FwB type

Feelings:

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Characters: girls look nice, glad there are no monster boobs and asses, all have something nice,

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... and you have your enemy's which are required for the drama...

Dick: looks average, at least I don't read that any girls is praising its size etc and pretending it is this large...

Fetishes: seems kind of vanilla, cannot remember feetstuff - yay!

Left me really with mixed feelings, I prefer to feel good while playing and I hope I forget the end, might look back into it once some episodes are added...

Best luck and Thanks

regards

I fully agree with the character description...they are very realistic without any monster anomalies....

 

[Puma1978]

Erynn and Ethan were friends, they werent more than that.
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So i wonder then how Ethan was able to do a sex video with Erynn which he is using now to blackmail her. There was for sure a point when Erynn was with Ethan otherwise the blackmail story would not make any sense.

 

[deadh30775n]

Will erryn's mom gonna be lewdable?

 

[SolarEclipsed]

I dont see any deeper relation between Erynn and MC at the beginning. And there was no sign that Erynn had a crush on him as a young boy. Just the opposite. Erynn was a teenager and the MC a young boy who got bullied by Erynns boyfriend and Alexis was the one who comforted him when he was crying. And Erynn was in a relationship with Ethan while Alexis was single.

Ethan wasn't her boyfriend, he had a crush on her and his slightly demented view was she was his, his view point has never changed, there is a comment about it. Erynn may have had a crush on the MC but he was hit by Ethan as Ethan realised that the MC more of a shot

So i wonder then how Ethan was able to do a sex video with Erynn which he is using now to blackmail her. There was for sure a point when Erynn was with Ethan otherwise the blackmail story would not make any sense.

He didn't make a sex video with her, he filmed her losing her virginity with her then boyfriend Zane that you don't meet, more evidence of his controlling behaviour

 

[ljabc]

i just like young girl Nikki and hot milf Emily

 

[Avaron1974]

So i wonder then how Ethan was able to do a sex video with Erynn which he is using now to blackmail her. There was for sure a point when Erynn was with Ethan otherwise the blackmail story would not make any sense.

The sex tape isn't with Ethan, it's with her college boyfriend. Ethan got hold of the tape from him.

 

[Puma1978]

Still does not answer my inquiry, should i re-phrase the question?

Sorry...i driifted...to your question...i diont see at the beginning that Erynn has any special feelings for MC other than for a young brother. Erynn was a teenager and MC a young boy. When Ethan bullied him in front of Erynn it was Alexis who went after him as he cried and comforted him. Erynn started or tried being with Ethan which ended up that Ethan is now blackmailing her with a sexvideo. Alexis was not in a relationship with someone and i dont see any special reason if she likes MC to ask Erynn first just because of the fact suddenly he is a grown up heandsome man and maybe now Erynn wants him all of a sudden.
I didnt picked up any hints that Erynn was telling Alexis when he was away that she has a crush on him?

 

[Avaron1974]

Erynn was a teenager and MC a young boy.

He was 13 and she was 15.

There is only 2 years between them.

 

[MrD812]

Hi,

Fap: no - more story driven

Artwork: looks beautiful, animations could need more frames

MC: actually good looking, I like the tattoos, could also get a piercing, Is not overly dumb, just in view of relationsships view an asshole, don't know how he gets through with this that they still like him.. lol

Story: puh...

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Cons: animations, no harem or FwB type

Feelings:

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Characters: girls look nice, glad there are no monster boobs and asses, all have something nice,

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... and you have your enemy's which are required for the drama...

Dick: looks average, at least I don't read that any girls is praising its size etc and pretending it is this large...

Fetishes: seems kind of vanilla, cannot remember feetstuff - yay!

Left me really with mixed feelings, I prefer to feel good while playing and I hope I forget the end, might look back into it once some episodes are added...

Best luck and Thanks

regards

Art is good, has some outstanding work and leaves little room for improvmants.
Concept on a huge scale is Awsome.
But, MC makes to many pussyfoot/unrealistic choices/actions(as well as others..Priorities, huge mistakes Nyx poorly wrote into the characters).
Some things can be overlooked and yet some, cannot.
Alot of work for one person, gotta give Nyx props for that!

 

[Gh0st_Harambe]

So i wonder then how Ethan was able to do a sex video with Erynn which he is using now to blackmail her. There was for sure a point when Erynn was with Ethan otherwise the blackmail story would not make any sense.

Erynn and her ex boyfriend (Zane) are in the video, Ethan recording them having sex.

 

[Puma1978]

Ethan wasn't her boyfriend, he had a crush on her and his slightly demented view was she was his, his view point has never changed, there is a comment about it. Erynn may have had a crush on the MC but he was hit by Ethan as Ethan realised that the MC more of a shot

He didn't make a sex video with her, he filmed her losing her virginity with her then boyfriend Zane that you don't meet, more evidence of his controlling behaviour

Right but the fact is that Erynn had a boyfriend and Alexis not. So i cant buy the story that Erynn always had a crush on MC.

 

[Avaron1974]

Right but the fact is that Erynn had a boyfriend and Alexis not. So i cant buy the story that Erynn always had a crush on MC.

Erynn was in college and MC had been gone for years by that point.

Alexis wasn't a virgin when MC met her on the plane so she's obviously had lovers.

 

[MrD812]

Sorry...i driifted...to your question...i diont see at the beginning that Erynn has any special feelings for MC other than for a young brother. Erynn was a teenager and MC a young boy. When Ethan bullied him in front of Erynn it was Alexis who went after him as he cried and comforted him. Erynn started or tried being with Ethan which ended up that Ethan is now blackmailing her with a sexvideo. Alexis was not in a relationship with someone and i dont see any special reason if she likes MC to ask Erynn first just because of the fact suddenly he is a grown up heandsome man and maybe now Erynn wants him all of a sudden.
I didnt picked up any hints that Erynn was telling Alexis when he was away that she has a crush on him?

Question i asked is one of Yes/No.
Ya' still did not get it, no biggy.

Advice, many things You will see if looked for.
Will not point them all out in the VN for You atm and ... they been addressed already in several posts here.
My very best reguards to You, Good Luck!

 

[crabshank]

im just here for val and elena at this point

 

[Puma1978]

Erynn was in college and MC had been gone for years by that point.

Alexis wasn't a virgin when MC met her on the plane so she's obviously had lovers.

Yes but i dont buy the spin that Alexis is a badass becaus she has sex with Mc while knowing Erynn always had such a crush on him. This was the main topic someone stated before.

 

[Canto Forte]

MC is the closest thing to a brother(gone because she rejected him) that Eyrin ever had.
Eyrin has all this freedom of a car and a flat because she is a high priced courtesan.
Nothing of these would be possible without the contract from Ethan dad.
That is how she is being manipulated.
Trouble is, she is getting fatigued, she cannot find pleasure in being unattainable.
The clients are starting to get handsy.
She is conditioned to stand up to controlling assholes, she has been standing up to ethan for a long time.
This is how confident women are: even as her enemy, she will grab you aside and have a heart to heart.
She is standing up to ethan how best she can, being hired by his family and him treating her like his meat.