VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.12.3] [Nyx]

[Puma1978]

I wouldn't call myself an Erynn fan, but I have been surprised at times by the vitriol directed toward her. I have more issues with her story than her character, but I am still willing to see where it goes. If she ends up stuffed in the fridge, the author better have a good reason for it. Killing her off just to move the story along or to silence her haters isn't a sufficient reason. Her story sucks. Pretty much has sucked from the beginning. She has pretty much only existed to discomfit the MC and to stir up shit with the other girls, never to advance their own relationship (which goes in circles). But it could be salvaged in any number of ways that don't involve a coffin.

I would apreciate in some games if Devs would also improve storytelling and Character introductions of older parts in games which were released already. Of course it would be for some peple annoying to start a new game to see added content but
you are right that the story around Erynn is far less engaging to accept her as LI over Alexis who has reallly most detailed and acceptable storyline with beautyful renders and animations.
I find that the Secret Eryn is keeping from MC around Ethan etc..far more repulsive than the Lie of Alexis at beginning which was not such a big deal to me than the Dev and Erynn Fans want to make it up to.
If the Dev really wants to present Erynn as LI Nr.1 for MC she must get a more engaging story/content in chapters 1-8 or the Dev must pull down Alexis to a complete NoGo in further storyline. (May she is involved in Ethans business or was making the video for him).

 

[Puma1978]

Many just don't like her type of person.
Regardless of content vested by Nyx.
Won't change what is.

Erynn is gorgous just by now not engaging enough in the story for some people.
Lets see what will be Nyx*s plan and content in further chapters.
May she will turn Alexis into a villian by her being a secret partner of Ethan or may she was the one who made the video and gave it to Ethan...who knows...between girls there is always hidden competitiuon and envy/jealousy ongoing....
With regards to Gabi i am now pretty sure that she at least knows MC's father or may her husband is MC's father.
If she is related to Valerie i am not so sure if the pics of Val in Gabi's bedroom were made by intention or Nyx just reused the background because of convenience.

 

[MrD812]

Erynn is gorgous just by now not engaging enough in the story for some people.
Lets see what will be Nyx*s plan and content in further chapters.
May she will turn Alexis into a villian by her being a secret partner of Ethan or may she was the one who made the video and gave it to Ethan...who knows...between girls there is always hidden competitiuon and envy/jealousy ongoing....
With regards to Gabi i am now pretty sure that she at least knows MC's father or may her husband is MC's father.
If she is related to Valerie i am not so sure if the pics of Val in Gabi's bedroom were made by intention or Nyx just reused the background because of convenience.

Was not referring to Erynn.
Alexis only, not Erynn.
And as far as Val goes...

Said it before and i'll say it again.
After seeing image of Val going Full-Frontal-Josy on Ethan....
I'd have her Baby!!!

 

[xXwankerXx]

But we cant ignore her author throw us to her problems and affect rel with Lexi if we chose not help.

And you never wondered why Nyx made Alexis dump the MC if the player chooses to be a self-centered dickhead and let an asshole, who bullied him, slap her ?? I mean, except the infamous "confession", what did Erynn do to deserve your hate so much ?? Did u bois ever bother playing her route to see how shit really happened and if she's worth being a LI ??

I wouldn't call myself an Erynn fan, but I have been surprised at times by the vitriol directed toward her. I have more issues with her story than her character, but I am still willing to see where it goes.

Same here. It's painfully obvious that Nyx intended to make her story a lil more complicated, probably even darker, than what we've gotten so far, and the sex tape BS was the lesser evil. Let's be honest, in 2022 with OnlyFans and all the shit that objectifies women, Erynn's innocent character is simply ridiculous, just like Jill's from BaDIK. At least in Jill's case, DPC can say she comes from a very rich and influential family who wanted something better for her after they failed with Lana, who's probably dead. In our case, Nyx can't say a single mom like Melissa can do a good job at being both a mom and a dad for Erynn, so her being as naive and innocent as Jill, especially when it comes to sex, is just Nyx's way of avoiding NTR debates.

All that messege just full of hate and your own bitternes)))

You know all that anger that many feel can go away if author just add few lines with her apollogy eather in "after bar scene" or in "confront scene". And remove stupid lines of MC blaming himself, he can blame himself for how he act with his mother at that time, but not in situation with Erynn.

No, that's just a random guy commenting on the internet who can't believe how much fuss some ppl make about something trivial like a fictional character that's completely avoidable and not even guilty of the shit they throw at it. And Erynn did apologize to him, she looked for him immediately after he stormed off, but his mom didn't let her see him coz he was crying. She also sent him letters where she apologized and asked him if she could come visit him to talk things out, but our pouty princess didn't even bother to read them, but you're right, Erynn really is a dumb bitch, coz other women in her place would just give him a middle finger and tell him to go fuck himself.

If she ends up stuffed in the fridge, the author better have a good reason for it. Killing her off just to move the story along or to silence her haters isn't a sufficient reason.

Nah, Nyx wouldn't go that far. Plus, it wouldn't make sense coz she's the canonical LI (debatable), considering she was his first love and a good part of the story revolves around her. She already tried to kill off Nikki and reconsidered doing it when she saw how popular she was. Don't know what that disturbing render of the mystery woman is meant to imply, but if Erynn's gonna kick the bucket, it's gonna be on the bad ending.

the Secret Eryn is keeping from MC around Ethan

What the fuck are you talking about ?? What secret does she keep from the MC ?? The fact that she's being blackmailed and emotionally abused by an insecure asshole into being "eye candy" for other insecure assholes ?? How would you explain that to your friend ??

I find that the Secret Eryn is keeping from MC around Ethan far more repulsive than the Lie of Alexis at beginning which was not such a big deal to me than the Dev and Erynn Fans want to make it up to.

So let me get this straight, a woman, friend of yours, being ashamed and too scared to tell you that she was dumb enough to let herself get blackmailed by a cunt is worse than your male best friend fucking the woman you have a crush on/love ?? Man, unless you a closet cuck, your logic is the only thing that's repulsive here bruh, no offense. No wonder peeps like you hate her so much.

If the Dev really wants to present Erynn as LI

She already did that since day 1. Alexis, Layla, Elena, Nikki and Cara are there just as plan b. Even Nyx had her pic as avatar before she created Valeria. Look at her

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[Puma1978]

And you never wondered why Nyx made Alexis dump the MC if the player chooses to be a self-centered dickhead and let an asshole, who bullied him, slap her ?? I mean, except the infamous "confession", what did Erynn do to deserve your hate so much ?? Did u bois ever bother playing her route to see how shit really happened and if she's worth being a LI ??



Same here. It's painfully obvious that Nyx intended to make her story a lil more complicated, probably even darker, than what we've gotten so far, and the sex tape BS was the lesser evil. Let's be honest, in 2022 with OnlyFans and all the shit that objectifies women, Erynn's innocent character is simply ridiculous, just like Jill's from BaDIK. At least in Jill's case, DPC can say she comes from a very rich and influential family who wanted something better for her after they failed with Lana, who's probably dead. In our case, Nyx can't say a single mom like Melissa can do a good job at being both a mom and a dad for Erynn, so her being as naive and innocent as Jill, especially when it comes to sex, is just Nyx's way of avoiding NTR debates.




No, that's just a random guy commenting on the internet who can't believe how much fuss some ppl make about something trivial like a fictional character that's completely avoidable and not even guilty of the shit they throw at it. And Erynn did apologize to him, she looked for him immediately after he stormed off, but his mom didn't let her see him coz he was crying. She also sent him letters where she apologized and asked him if she could come visit him to talk things out, but our pouty princess didn't even bother to read them, but you're right, Erynn really is a dumb bitch, coz other women in her place would just give him a middle finger and tell him to go fuck himself.



Nah, Nyx wouldn't go that far. Plus, it wouldn't make sense coz she's the canonical LI (debatable), considering she was his first love and a good part of the story revolves around her. She already tried to kill off Nikki and reconsidered doing it when she saw how popular she was. Don't know what that disturbing render of the mystery woman is meant to imply, but if Erynn's gonna kick the bucket, it's gonna be on the bad ending.



What the fuck are you talking about ?? What secret does she keep from the MC ?? The fact that she's being blackmailed and emotionally abused by an insecure asshole into being "eye candy" for other insecure assholes ?? How would you explain that to your friend ??



So let me get this straight, a woman, friend of yours, being ashamed and too scared to tell you that she was dumb enough to let herself get blackmailed by a cunt is worse than your male best friend fucking the woman you have a crush on/love ?? Man, unless you a closet cuck, your logic is the only thing that's repulsive here bruh, no offense. No wonder peeps like you hate her so much.



She already did that since day 1. Alexis, Layla, Elena, Nikki and Cara are there just as plan b. Even Nyx had her pic as avatar before she created Valeria. Look at her

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on Patreon now and tell me who the blondie is.

To be honest...if i pöay as MC and i identify myself as MC the whole game so to me personally if i met in a plane a friend of another friend from childhood which i dont recognize and she offers me sex in the plane i would also sax yes.
And it would be less bad to me as MC if i find out that the girl from plane was the friend of another friend.
But if i see my supposed to be Nr. 1 LI still sticking around with the Bully guy from childhood and keep it secret that he is blackmailing her and forces her to work as an escort....that makes me loose the interest in her.
You have the problem that you see everything through Erynn's perspective and not through MC perspective.

 

[xXwankerXx]

But if i see my supposed to be Nr. 1 LI still sticking around with the Bully guy from childhood and keep it secret that he is blackmailing her and forces her to work as an escort....that makes me loose the interest in her.

Erynn's a naive, dumb girl who's afraid of what ppl, especially her mom, her friends AND the MC, might think of her if the asshole was to leak the sex tape. She already told the MC she can't go to the police coz she don't have solid proof, and Ethan can use the contract to claim everything is perfectly legal... it's all mentioned in the game. If only you bois would've paid attention to the story before insulting and bashing a fictional character...

You have the problem that you see everything through Erynn's perspective and not through MC perspective.

How can you help someone if you don't see their problems through HIS/HER perspective instead of your own ?? And we talk about a really delicate issue that could ruin Erynn's future here, not a need-a-new-gucci-bag-or-other-expensive-shit kinda "emergency". What you just said shows that you a selfish person who only thinks about his own good, and your sweet Lexi dumps you for that. Still think I'm wrong when even Nyx and Lexi agree with me ??

 

[The Senior Perv]

I wrote not for war))). Its just my opinion and anger on about how author tell this concrete part of story. I dont understand, some random girl show more humility than close friend. And why MC need to act on high ground if close friend dont even apologise to you first thing first after reunion. Insted she acted like you are the mean one,cos you ignor her. Lexi made 1+1(confession and run away) in her head, and you want to tell me that Erynn didnt? If she knew that betwen them was some unfinished bisines why not solve it first thing first and move on? Like friends or more, that common sense, instend i hear "We dont laughed at you". Ah ok, so i confess to you and you feel it so insignificant so you can go to joke around with your friends while i still wait for some answer, how is it make situation better? You know all that anger that many feel can go away if author just add few lines with her apollogy eather in "after bar scene" or in "confront scene". And remove stupid lines of MC blaming himself, he can blame himself for how he act with his mother at that time, but not in situation with Erynn.

Ah shit, you just awakened the war between fans and haters again... thanks dude. Now we will have to see 10 pages of comments either defending or attacking Erynn.

 

[NewTricks]

Ah shit, you just awakened the war between fans and haters again... thanks dude. Now we will have to see 10 pages of comments either defending or attacking Erynn.

Yeah. It is a neverending negative feedback loop for sure but all the posts help F95's engagement stats so they can keep on charging a large enough ad rate to keep the lights on so... you know... there is a bright side

 

[Nurikabe]

...you are right that the story around Erynn is far less engaging to accept her as LI over Alexis who has reallly most detailed and acceptable storyline with beautyful renders and animations.

If the Dev really wants to present Erynn as LI Nr.1 for MC she must get a more engaging story/content in chapters 1-8...

Erynn is gorgous just by now not engaging enough in the story for some people.

Lets see what will be Nyx*s plan and content in further chapters.

We are reading an incomplete, rough draft of a story that is still being written. It amazes me how many people make huge, judgemental leaps about characters that are incomplete.

The ridiculous sect of Erynn haters on F95 has no effect on anything in real life. Fortunately for Nyx, the story, and all the characters, the fans and supporters love how it is going.

 

[LionHeart 95]

To be honest...if i pöay as MC and i identify myself as MC the whole game so to me personally if i met in a plane a friend of another friend from childhood which i dont recognize and she offers me sex in the plane i would also sax yes.
And it would be less bad to me as MC if i find out that the girl from plane was the friend of another friend.
But if i see my supposed to be Nr. 1 LI still sticking around with the Bully guy from childhood and keep it secret that he is blackmailing her and forces her to work as an escort....that makes me loose the interest in her.
You have the problem that you see everything through Erynn's perspective and not through MC perspective.

Perspective! is meant to be two part: Primary MC and not any other in the game. 2nd view is of through the DEV's eyes, but only just enough to know what is really going on at the moment. not foresight. this view is to allow for fun in our choice(s). This is needed to give the Player a sense of being in the world created by the DEV.

When we play we put ourselves in the Role as the MC. So Erynn can bite it in my opinion. I'm all for second chances. but she is in such a mess right now that all she remembers is that when she was with the MC all was right in her world. When he left it began to fall apart and she wants him back to fix it. Her letters, did he lie and keep them! but not read them (would be great plot twist if so). I cant see her thinking he can fix anything as he was just her friend no back story telling us he could fix anything he was just a love struck child back then. I am always there for my true friends but that is all Erynn is now not a LI. too messed up and though he did not read the letters to MC she never said "I'm sorry" I missed you so much. MC is the one who says lets start over.

That said I have played where Erynn and MC are more than friends as I want as much content as the Dev will provide.
NYX is a fantastic creator with skills that outshine many if not most Devs on this sight. We love to hate a character so much it seems as if she is real to us all. that is the true testament of this VN. show me a VN with characters as well written and you will see a DEV with strong Following and Patrons wanting More More and More from them.

 

[constantine]

I don't get why those who have a thing for Lexi seem to really hate Erynn. It's one thing to criticize her for her actions and behaviour, but people wanting her to be harmed because she once mistreated the MC when they were younger is just misguided hostility imo. Those negative feelings about Erynn are mostly based on their own reading of her, rather than what is being portrayed in the story I feel. And other than one moment when Lexi comforted MC, she had no interest in him when they were younger. They weren't friends before, and when MC moved, if she really cared, why didn't she try to contact MC? Erynn tried to call and wrote letters at least.

It's like, a single moment with Lexi comforting MC has made Lexi an angel and Erynn a demon for not doing the same. Yet, there was an entire friendship Erynn had with MC prior to that. Erynn did like MC enough to be friends in the first place. Yes, it was bad she didn't comfort MC right away, but she made a snap decision to get Ethan to stop bullying MC first, not because she wanted to hurt MC or make fun of him (MC thought that, but it's not what actually happened). People can't seem to be objective when it comes to Erynn for some reason. Yes, Erynn has her issues, and I understand why romancing may be a bad idea, but to me, the vitriol towards her isn't justified.

 

[liazz577]

I don't get why those who have a thing for Lexi seem to really hate Erynn.

If MC ignore Erynn and don't help her, Lexi will leave MC for that. There's the reason, helping-Erynn route is mandatory to continue Lexi's route, which is weird :v it's like a linear storyline where u don't have any choice but to help Erynn even though u don't like her or don't want to romance her.

 

[Nurikabe]

If MC ignore Erynn and don't help her, Lexi will leave MC for that. There's the reason, helping-Erynn route is mandatory to continue Lexi's route, which is weird :v it's like a linear storyline where u don't have any choice but to help Erynn even though u don't like her or don't want to romance her.

The thing is, she IS the story. You don't have to make her the LI. But in the end, this isn't a story about Alexis. Or Layla. Or any other girl. It is the story of a boy who fell in love with a girl, left when he felt unloved, and returns to see this girl again. It is their story. Everyone else is just flavor. You get all the choices you can handle. But the story is still about the MC and Erynn.

 

[CrioniC.Syn]

If MC ignore Erynn and don't help her, Lexi will leave MC for that. There's the reason, helping-Erynn route is mandatory to continue Lexi's route, which is weird :v it's like a linear storyline where u don't have any choice but to help Erynn even though u don't like her or don't want to romance her.

Do you have friends?

If you don't help Erynn, Lexi breaking up with you is weird? You saw her best friend getting slapped by Ethan and did nothing. Do you really think Lexi will stay together with a guy like that?
You can just be there for Erynn and after say you can't help her. That way you aren't a complete douche and you can stay with Lexi.

This game should come with another warning:
"If your IQ is lower than 90, go play something else!"

I've met lots of dumb people before, but this website seems to be a hotspot.

 

[liazz577]

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The thing is, she IS the story. You don't have to make her the LI. But in the end, this isn't a story about Alexis. Or Layla. Or any other girl. It is the story of a boy who fell in love with a girl, left when he felt unloved, and returns to see this girl again. It is their story. Everyone else is just flavor. You get all the choices you can handle. But the story is still about the MC and Erynn.

MC didn't come back to his home town for Erynn. He barely knew erynn at the point where he came back home. So Erynn's defender literally think the game revolves around her and the MC? What about MC's father, or his step-father cheating on his gf's mom? Or Layla's agressive admirer,...? .
The game is about a lot of stories intertwined together. Are they all related to the MC? Yes. Are those stories all related to Erynn? Absolutely not. Erynn makes little apparence compared to some other LIs. So no, it is not a story about MC and Erynn. The game are stories with MC in the centre.

 

[Nurikabe]

MC didn't come back to his home town for Erynn. He barely knew erynn at the point where he came back home. So Erynn's defender literally think the game revolves around her and the MC? What about MC's father, or his step-father cheating on his gf's mom? Or Layla's agressive admirer,...? .
The game is about a lot of stories intertwined together. Are they all related to the MC? Yes. Are those stories all related to Erynn? Absolutely not. Erynn makes little apparence compared to some other LIs. So no, it is not a story about MC and Erynn. The game are stories with MC in the centre.

What is the first story told in this VN? A story about Erynn.
Where are all the drama points — the point in the story where the most dissonance occurs? Almost all of them surround Erynn. Erynn and the MC, Erynn and Alexis, Erynn and Ethan...

You tell me.

mc "Ever since we were very young, Erynn and I were inseparable."
mc "Always chasing each other around, even though she's 3 years older than me."
mc "As we grew older though, our interests went different ways."
mc "I still liked playing with her."
mc "Erynn, on the other hand, started hanging out more with her friends from school."
mc "She was really popular and got lots of attention from other boys."
mc "Especially that idiot Ethan who stuck to her like glue and gave her bike rides to school."
mc "I wasn't happy about it at all and grew more jealous every day."
mc "I was about 12 when I came up with, in my opinion, the only way to spend more time with Erynn again."
mc "Confessing..."
mc "Telling her I like her."

a "How did you confess?"

mc "Well, I gave her a flower and basically just said that I liked her..."

a "Oh... You gave her flowers, that's cute..."

mc "Not flowers."
mc "A single flower. One... Which I took from a vase in the kitchen."

a "Flower, flowers... It's the gesture that matters."
a "No one ever got me flowers. I think it's cute. And charming."
a "But continue."

mc "*Sigh*"
mc "I still remember the laughter as if it happened yesterday."
mc "She took it as a joke..."
mc "Or rather, she made me the joke. Even her friends were laughing at me."
mc "I hated her for it."
mc "... And my jealousy slowly grew into anger."
mc "It didn't stop there."
mc "My anger towards her didn't only affect me, but also my grades and attitude at school and home."
mc "Mom often got calls from my teachers with yet another complaint about me and detention became a daily routine."
mc "I couldn't care less."
mc "After a couple of months or so, mom finally had enough of my rebellious behaviour and sent me to live with my dad."
mc "That was 5 years ago."
mc "When my dad decided to remarry, we moved in with his fiancée and her 2 kids. The house became really crowded. Stuff happened and ... yeah."
mc "So, I decided to move back to mom's and finish my last year of school there."

a "But what about the girl ... Erynn? What happened with her?"

mc "I don't know to be honest."
mc "Our relationship was bad already after the so-called confession."
mc "When I moved away, I lost all contact."
mc "Haven't spoken to her since..."
mc "She wrote me a few letters the first couple of months, but I never read them. I tore and threw them away. Which I really regret now."
mc "But back then, I just didn't want to hear from her."

a "That reunion will be ... interesting at the very least."

mc "If it's ever going to happen to begin with..."

a "You don't want to meet her?"

mc "I do but... Not sure yet to be honest. I might run into her at some point though... And who says she wants to meet me?"

a "..."

 

[liazz577]

She was introduced 1st cuz she was the childhood 1st love, it doesn't mean the whole game is about her. The tattoo girl has a whole story ark about her and the MC but again the story isn't about her either. Drama points revolve around Erynn means she's some kind of drama queen, it doesn't mean she the main female character

 

[Puma1978]

We are reading an incomplete, rough draft of a story that is still being written. It amazes me how many people make huge, judgemental leaps about characters that are incomplete.

The ridiculous sect of Erynn haters on F95 has no effect on anything in real life. Fortunately for Nyx, the story, and all the characters, the fans and supporters love how it is going.

Yes in my case current status for me is that Alexis has he better story and also more dense scenes in the current game status.
As i wrote already maybe Nyx will turn tables later and maybe she turns Alexis in a bad person and Erynn will get a better attention.

 

[dolfe67]

Alexis seems like the main LI, and it feels like a real love story. Erynn is an important character to the story sure, but more as a friend than a LI.

And I don't hate Erynn, I help her as much as I can as a friend but nothing more

 

[Puma1978]

Alexis seems like the main LI, and it feels like a real love story. Erynn is an important character to the story sure, but more as a friend than a LI.

And I don't hate Erynn, I help her as much as I can as a friend but nothing more

Agree thats the way i see it also.