VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.13.2] [Nyx]

[Crimsonfiend76]

its obvious Erryn liked the MC back then and would of said yes to him, but the MC stopped talking to her so she never got the chance to tell him

I’m not sure Erynn liked the mc the same way back when she was being confessed to. Clearly she was taken by surprise and Ethan being there fucked everything up, but up till then, I doubt she saw the mc as anything other than a very good, close childhood friend.

I’m sure if it was just her and Lexi there, she would not have rejected him outright, but maybe ask for a little time to consider what kind of feelings she had for him, if he was someone that could be more than just a friend. Had he not left I’m positive by the time prom came, they would definitely be together.

As Lexi goes, I think she maybe flirted and kissed him initially to make him feel better...and sure maybe she was just a little envious about a boy liking her enough to confess to her and give her flowers. But, after he kissed her back on the lips, taking her first kiss, at that moment was when she probably became smitten with the mc.

 

[MuffinManWantsPregnancy]

Damn, I just want a happy ending with the MC and Nikki. Make it happen please dev. If you want drama maybe a freak earthquake/volcano wiping out Madison Springs and all it's inhabitants. Just leave Nikki alone with the MC Thanks.

MC and Nikki at Dylan's BBQ with Zack and the boys. While everyone in Madison Springs is scrambling during a huge twister - you know, Life is Strange style.

 

[Volume115]

Honestly to me it makes sense, the fact that this club has a VIP room is highlighted, Erynn was wearing a similar dress, she was talking to the waitress and didn't have any friends with her that day, not a normal club hang out at all.
And yeah if you choose her she ditches work, probably gets scolded off screen because of it.

Yea yea, i see know, i was thinking that that girl was her friend, but you are right, it was waitress. So it is very likely that she is working in this club you have mentioned.

And that what you said about VIP room can also be true, it was highlighted. But i don't see any more clues in this direction, so we can only wait to next episode.
But man, idk, if your thought are correct and there will be even more behind this, then it will start to becoming not enjoyable for me ;d

 

[Mr. Hero]

Stop it guys! ERYN is theMain LoveInterest in this game...I dont think developer will destroy the main girl of the game...hopefully something good will happen...lets see!

 

[The Bush Diver]

Here are my thoughts after this last update...

First of all, I'm already very anxious for the next one. NyxValeria has done such an amazing job, and she surely deservers more patrons (10k, at least!).

An update full of drama, and I love it! My favorite girls are Alexis (obvious reasons!), Layla and Nikki. Somehow I can't fall for Erynn...

It would be great to have some actual fun with Melissa, and Lakeyn definitely has to show up again soon!

I'm thinking of giving a shot at Cara's path....I like her, but when I had to choose between her and Nikki, it was a no brainer!

And...why do I have the impression that Alexis is the girl at the plane at the end of the update? =P

 

[lokoper]

I'll react to those 3 for now.

- Easily forgiven? MC didn't forgive her for up to 5 years. He didn't visit, didn't want to speak to her on the phone... Why didn't want Andres for her to come visit? Was he hiding something? Telling MC stuff? Who knows...

- Unforgiving towards Andres? Here's an example: Andres didn't tell MC he was in relationship for about a year. MC forgave him the very next day. (that's a little shorter than 5 years, I can be wrong though)

- Did the "sperm donator" run away? Do you know that for certain? Do you already know everything that happened?

Andres in the start was a good father because that's what the story needed and now he's an arsehole because that's what the story needs. Because if Andres is good then it won't fit with the future plans of the story, so he must be sacrificed. Or maybe because people hated Emily and you didn't want that, so you decided to turn her to a victim. Or maybe Santi must come to the picture (i assume as the owner of the club that Erynn is working, so extra drama there) and there's no room for Andres scenes anymore so something had to be done to get rid of him. Like you say, assumptions...

And listen, this is normal. It's normal to not know where the story is headed and adding or erasing things constantly. I'm not accusing you or anything, but it's a safe bet that when you started the story, Andres wasn't supposed to be bad, but now as you figuring out how you want your story to progress, changes had to be made. Changes are a very normal thing when someone is creating a story.

 

[ItsNotMeToo]

Andres in the start was a good father because that's what the story needed and now he's an arsehole because that's what the story needs. Because if Andres is good then it won't fit with the future plans of the story, so he must be sacrificed. Or maybe because people hated Emily and you didn't want that, so you decided to turn her to a victim. Or maybe Santi must come to the picture (i assume as the owner of the club that Erynn is working, so extra drama there) and there's no room for Andres scenes anymore so something had to be done to get rid of him. Like you say, assumptions...

And listen, this is normal. It's normal to not know where the story is headed and adding or erasing things constantly. I'm not accusing you or anything, but it's a safe bet that when you started the story, Andres wasn't supposed to be bad, but now as you figuring out how you want your story to progress, changes had to be made. Changes are a very normal thing when someone is creating a story.

I disagree that just because what you've seen happen to a character in terms of 'changing' doesn't mean that wasn't the intent from the start. I made a lengthy post regarding Andres, and how we get our impression of him based on MC's recollection of things.

 

[Deleted member 2528490]

Andres in the start was a good father because that's what the story needed and now he's an arsehole because that's what the story needs. Because if Andres is good then it won't fit with the future plans of the story, so he must be sacrificed. Or maybe because people hated Emily and you didn't want that, so you decided to turn her to a victim. Or maybe Santi must come to the picture (i assume as the owner of the club that Erynn is working, so extra drama there) and there's no room for Andres scenes anymore so something had to be done to get rid of him. Like you say, assumptions...

And listen, this is normal. It's normal to not know where the story is headed and adding or erasing things constantly. I'm not accusing you or anything, but it's a safe bet that when you started the story, Andres wasn't supposed to be bad, but now as you figuring out how you want your story to progress, changes had to be made. Changes are a very normal thing when someone is creating a story.

Pretty ballsy of you to assume this hasn't been the original intent. I mean, shit, we had Andres punching and cheating way before now if we chose MC to not get with Nikki or Cara.

Patronizing a creator on the intent/creation process of her own work is not a good look, my dude.

 

[lokoper]

I disagree that just because what you've seen happen to a character in terms of 'changing' doesn't mean that wasn't the intent from the start. I made a lengthy post regarding Andres, and how we get our impression of him based on MC's recollection of things.

When we really saw anything about Andres besides MC and Emily claiming he's a good dad, before this last update? I read your post about Andres and everything you wrote is based on the last update. Do you see what i mean? And i'm sorry but i think i have better chances to be right than "Andres raised a kid for 18 years out of spite".

Pretty ballsy of you to assume this hasn't been the original intent. I mean, shit, we had Andres punching and cheating way before now if we chose MC to not get with Nikki or Cara.

Patronizing a creator on the intent/creation process of her own work is not a good look, my dude.

"patronizing".... where do you people get this words, lol

Anyway again, when did you figure out that Andres was abusive and a cheater before this update? I'm qurious.

 

[Deleted member 2528490]

"patronizing".... where do you people get this words, lol

Dictionaries. They contain all sorts of words.

Anyway again, when did you figure out that Andres was abusive and a cheater before this update? I'm qurious.

When MC meets up with Erynn again in his bedroom. And he tells her what happened over in Riverside. You play through the flashback, only you don't sleep with Cara or Nikki. That third path leads to Haley and Andres breaking up, and MC half-accuses Andres of cheating, leading to Andres punching MC. And then Andres cuts off all contact with MC.

 

[lokoper]

Dictionaries. They contain all sorts of words.

Oh, the irony...

When MC meets up with Erynn again in his bedroom. And he tells her what happened over in Riverside. You play through the flashback, only you don't sleep with Cara or Nikki. That third path leads to Haley and Andres breaking up, and MC half-accuses Andres of cheating, leading to Andres punching MC. And then Andres cuts off all contact with MC.

Oh, you mean the route that no one took, lol. Again, since MC didn't want any of Cara/Nikki then the whole new family sidestory was irrelevant, so again, they turned him into an abusive cheater just because his character was not necessary anymore.

 

[Deleted member 2528490]

Its still set-up. And its a clear indication of where the plot was heading. Which directly contradicts your "making shit up as she goes along and altering the story accordingly" narrative.

 

[ShadowThrone]

From the flashback we see that Emily meet Dylan. How much better would things have turned out if Emily had married Dylan instead of Andres.
Dylan would have made a great dad with him teaching you his grilling techniques and you could inherit a bar where everyone knows you name.

 

[Deleted member 313508]

From the flashback we see that Emily meet Dylan. How much better would things have turned out if Emily had married Dylan instead of Andres.
Dylan would have made a great dad with him teaching you his grilling techniques and you could inherit a bar where everyone knows you name.

Yes but then we'd miss out on the humor of mistaken gay overtures... tough call...

 

[Dentynhometal]

someone ask me a question, my english is bad so i lose some things in the game writing.
is Erynn a prostitute?

 

[masterrdoomguy]

upload on mega is off only for me?

 

[OutOfAshes]

someone ask me a question, my english is bad so i lose some things in the game writing.
is Erynn a prostitute?

we don‘t know this

 

[Dentynhometal]

we don‘t know this

the scene that she calls Mc and is interrupted by a stranger, it seemed to me that she is

 

[Steinchen]

Remember guys? MC first met ERYN at club?? when mc was partying with layla and zach??
I think Eryn works in a club...and some how she is being blackmailed by that club for her nudes?? which may be captured by ethan?? What do you guy's theory? I cant wait to know what happens next...I hope she will share this matter with mc and mc will do something about it....and still now the most satisfactory issue for me that this game is not NTR game...so hopefully there will be nothing wrong and she will come out of this messy situation!

i think Erryn works in that Club as a Stripper in the VIP Area to affort the Apartment she has and don´t wants anyone to find out about this.
but somehow this ethan found out and blackmails her now to do modelling for him.

well she somehow told that the appartment is quite expensive and i doubt that she can affort that appartment with part time moddeling after school.

she thought (i wish i could) when Melissa told her she should focus on school and Modelling can come later.

and the scene after erryns phone call could play out in many ways.that scene after the call was too short to know what happend after the ass groping from that old guy.for all we know she could have slaped him in the face shortly after or yelled at the old fart or something.

and of course erryn would or could wear expensive dresses she is moddeling and sometimes models wear expensive dresses to show clothes to some old fart costumers

i think that whole beeing an hooker,prostitute,escort or an elite escort girl thing is nonsense it not fits in the game.
that does not mean that there could not be some Pervs or old farts groping modells or she must do some "Special" Stripping sessions in the VIP room mixed with some modell show or something as part of the blackmailing.

 

[OutOfAshes]

the scene that she calls Mc and is interrupted by a stranger, it seemed to me that she is

Interesting you see a woman doing something against her will ...
and she is immediately a prostitute ?

we don't know exactly what she's doing
only Nyx knows the real answer to that

everything else is conjecture