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Thanks for all your thoughts.

It's honestly my first actual long discussion about one of the games on this forum.

I like Nikki a lot, so I'll definitely try out the break-up scene with her. I love how she busts the MC's balls.

I agree that the throuple has to be suggested by the MC. But since Nyx loves the soap opera drama, I just thought that we'll probably have to choose between the two?. The point-of-no-return could happen between the MC and Elena (a kiss and feelings confessed?) during his Spring Break visit with Elena and her brothers or later on. Then similar but more intense to the Lexi path post Val photobooth kiss scene or I have to tell Layla about Lexi, both MC and Elena have to live awkwardly with the aftermath of their kiss and feelings confessed while interacting around Layla? (That Elena beach scene dialogue is straight out of a 1980s teen romance film (dramatic irony), but Nyx pulled it off well. "I like this guy but he's in a relationship ...")

I know Erynn doesn't get a lot of love on this forum, but I'm glad this latest episode advanced her character and our relationship with her further.

On Val phone call again: Aside from "You cared that much for me to call." There's also "Thanks for calling but aren't you going to say something more? ... look"

On Layla's parents: That's going well with Adriana. Since you love basketball, at least you can talk to Layla's dad about his former pro career. Btw, if you're on the Cara path, she actually has a crush on an ex-basketball player named Zo that might be Layla's and Lexi's dad.
But if you fuck up with Lexi and Layla, will Adriana treat you differently in future scenes?


In case you're interested - and are part of the let's murder Zach and Ethan gang on the forum - here are the links to my earlier posts of movie parody beatdowns and murders of Zach and Ethan.

Merry Christmas


The Fellowship of the Ring

https://f95zone.to/threads/intertwined-v0-10-2-nyx.53676/post-9590288


Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid

https://f95zone.to/threads/intertwined-v0-10-2-nyx.53676/post-9603868


Austin Powers: The Spy who Shagged Me

https://f95zone.to/threads/intertwined-v0-10-2-nyx.53676/post-9610660


Kill Bill

https://f95zone.to/threads/intertwined-v0-10-2-nyx.53676/post-9612223


Bloodsport

https://f95zone.to/threads/intertwined-v0-10-2-nyx.53676/post-9660606


Deathproof

https://f95zone.to/threads/intertwined-v0-10-2-nyx.53676/post-9675044

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Venoma

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Checking back in to this game for the first time in 2 years i think. Don't remember it being this good or as well written otherwise I wouldn't have skipped over playing this many updates.

Grade A and standup representation job of a more matured version of the "Americanized Harem Story", and giving us USA'ers the opportunity to push aside the typical sensitive snowflake catered meal stories for a bit in favor of getting to embrace our inner player (with potential consequence that only makes it that much more interesting to see play out while trying to juggle what you can for as long as you can lol. Some of those sweat getting caught moments are great)
 
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Checking back in to this game for the first time in 2 years i think. Don't remember it being this good or as well written otherwise I wouldn't have skipped over playing this many updates.

Grade A and standup representation job of a more matured version of the "Americanized Harem Story", and giving us USA'ers the opportunity to push aside the typical sensitive snowflake catered meal stories for a bit in favor of getting to embrace our inner player (with potential consequence that only makes it that much more interesting to see play out while trying to juggle what you can for as long as you can lol. Some of those sweat getting caught moments are great)
I think the point that you were trying to get to is VALERIA BEST GIRL.
 

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I think the point that you were trying to get to is VALERIA BEST GIRL.

Actually yeah, she is.

She was a great latter temptation add to the life-is-complicated mix. Especially for any non-game cheat playthrough given how much the writing makes you end up simultaneously liking and really feeling Layla as a legit girlfriend type.

Like i said, much more mature gaming presentation there imo then your typical 13 year eastern culture kid fantasy stuff. This genre needs more writers capable of this :)
 
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Lexi and Val: MC could break things off with Lexi or Lexi breaking things off with him as soon as she realizes what he's doing? Does Layla take Lexi's side? Lexi actively pursued the MC, but the MC mostly decided to pursue Val. Actually, both Monroe (and Morgan) sisters pursued the MC actively while he mostly chose to pursue Val. Valeria: The Monroe/Morgan Killer?

Erryn: She's only uncomfortable messing around with the MC when you're on the Lexi path. She tells Lexi if she sleeps in your bed. She does what she wants when you're on Layla path (Although the MC's dialogue with others whenever he mentions Layla on the Layla path (even after the jacuzzi scene) is that he never confirms that they're an official couple or she's just someone he's seeing. Poor Layla.) When Erynn knows that you got back together with Nikki/Cara, she will still pursue you when you help her meet John and she sleeps over. So, she seems to be okay being on the side so for now, but should she ever become your official relationship she's probably not going react well also if you screw around. If you screwed up with Erynn-Lexi (not saving Erynn from Ethan, or Lexi finding out you cheated on her with Erynn), how does that affect your relationship with Melissa?

Gabi: I wonder who would rat on the MC and Gabi's relationship? Zach (out of jealousy or stupidity slipping during a conversation)? Tori (out of jealousy)? Darryl? Layla out of propriety? Or the MC/Gabi freaking out when either one of them realizes that her husband is MC's father? Or no one finds out but one of them develops feelings of love that ends the affair? If it becomes public, for once the shit storm will be on the MC and not because he's involved in somebody else's problems (Erynn). How is Val related to Gabi? Is she her niece or the daughter of Gabi's bff? How will that play out if you're on the Gabi-Val path?

The Monroes: Yes. Some good relationship building scenes with the entire family would be good. To complicate things, Layla or Lexi still has feelings for the MC? If you fucked up with the sisters, will Layla, Lexi and Elena ever forgive you or are those paths permanently closed? (Nikki-Cara Morgan are the healthier relationship triangle compared to the Monroe sisters.)

The Ortizes: More quality time with Elena, her brothers and her mother. Maybe, for once, a parent doesn't approve of the MC being in a relationship with her child? Or the story's mirror relationship to Val and her mom, Elena's mom notices her feelings for the MC and points them out to Elena. She also talks to Elena about Layla if you're involved with Layla.

Layla's hoodie: Did Lucas or another pervert steal it? What the hell happened to Lucas? At least we know Emmanuel and his pals got payback from MC and Nathan, and Ethan got his partial receipt from you and Val/John.

Talk about plot devices: Nyx loves using things like photographs-videos, articles of clothing/nudity for conflict, plot devices, relationship development, creating relationship and sexual tension: Iris topless in Alvarado and Madison Springs parks to Layla flashing you at the beach changing room to putting suntan lotion on Nikki's boobs, Layla's hoodie, MC hoodie gift from Emily/Nikki, MC misplaced swim trunks naked in the jacuzzi with Adriana/Erynn-Lexi, Layla-Val underwear truth or dare, MC workout shirt that Nikki claims as her own, MC wearing John's old motorcycle jacket, Erryn's shirt gift that Nikki destroys because it's like her ex's, Val's orange cap, Val's ass in running pants, Emily, Elena and Layla's nipple/s poking out of their bikini tops, Erryn's ripped stockings and private lingerie fashion show for the MC, Elena and Nikki wearing similar white bikinis, MC and Val picking the same running shoes, Elena giving you a cheerleading shirt, Brooke changing in front of you, Gabi-Sha'Carri's track team uniforms revealing that they both went to Palm Springs and both were scouted by Navarro, shopping and dressing room shenanigans with Nikki/Cara, Layla, Lexi, Erynn; Erynn lingerie, Nikki-Cara bikini show for MC; Iris topless photo Intertwined similar patterns of behavior to Layla-Elena secret beach video of MC, and to Zach having you take a Gabi by the pool photo, Iris thirst trap photos, Lexi midnight photos-video, Layla tease photos, Val flirt and photobomb/prank photos, Erynn prank photos, Ethan blackmail video, Gabi photo that reveals she was at the same seaside place that Emily was at with Santiago, Melissa-Emily photos, Andres cheating photo, the Erynn-Lexi childhood photos and Erynn discovering Lexi photos on your phone that throws firebombs on your love triangle and their friendship

Val: We really need a scene where the MC returns Val's underwear. Perhaps during the first time they have sex?

The body in the alley: Is it Rachel? Is it a serial killer or the darker side of Ethan's illegal business?

Zach: Will the MC beat up Zach or just ignore him when they see each other after spring break? Is Zach redeemable? Most people here hate Zach with a passion. I just enjoy killing him and Ethan in movie parodies.

Nathan: Will Nathan ever visit?

Nikki/Cara: If either one you're involved with decides to move to Madison Springs to live with their dad, Coach Mike, for college, hoo boy ...

Iris: What happens when she realizes Erryn is her half-sister? Will both of them compete for the MC?

Sha'Carri: "..." or "Everything comes to he/she who waits."

Brooke: A minor character but there's nothing minor about her body.

Apart from the Monroe sisters confronting him or Nikki/Cara finding out if you fucked around with Julia (did I miss some others?), Nyx has allowed the MC to dodge a lot of consequences bullets (Erynn-Lexi walking past your Nikki Italian restaurant date), but I hope she'll really put us in the middle of an all-out drama or war when the ladies and others find out.

Thanks man. Sorry, it's a shit ton of writing.

Enjoy your Christmas with your loved ones.

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why the fuck there is 2 spoilers? dimmed text doesn't exactly reduce scrolling time need on page long post.
 

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Hey guys, I just played and finished the game on this version. I love the story and for now my love interest is Vall and Nikki. just want to ask, how many months does will take this game usually update? tq
 
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Progress Update - Gallery - Re-Coding


Back to business.

The gallery is finished and everything seems to work.
I've also finished all of the re-coding, and now I'm testing as many routes as possible.
There's one little oversight I couldn't change solely with coding. I will need to create extra scenes for that, but I'll do that once I do the re-rendering for that particular episode. So for now, it will stay the way it is.
It's when you are on the Alexis path, help Erynn, don't tell Erynn about Alexis and kiss her in her apartment. Then go training with Layla, meaning Erynn and Alexis won't meet the day after. And after training camp, you have the choice to stay with Erynn or go to Alexis, and so on. Meaning, those choices don't have consequences (except heavy point loss for Erynn) for now. They will though in the future, but that's for another time.

The re-rendering of episode 1 and partly episode 2 is almost done. Just a few renders left. But I'm thinking about re-rendering the whole first day as long as I'm testing all those routes. So depending on how long the testing takes, I might be able to finish the whole first day, else I'll keep it where I originally planned.

I'll probably release episode 10.5 at the end of next week, else the week after. After release, I start working on episode 11.
Just a reminder. The story does not continue in 10.5! Your saves won't work!

About something else.
What do you guys think about background/ambient sounds? For example chatter in a bar or in the hallway at school, street noise while walking in the city and so on? Let me know your thoughts about that.
 
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