VN Ren'Py Intertwined [v0.14.1] [Nyx]

[Tremonia]

at least it isn't Tea VS Coffee I joked about that in another thread and the mods locked the thread for like 2 weeks

Epic fail of the mods back then.

 

[Ozymandias037]

Moist — a word that slinks onto the tongue like an unwelcome drip from a mildewed ceiling. Its very syllables seem to gurgle forth, damp with ambiguity and laden with a sensory sludge that clings unpleasantly to the imagination.

It begins with that initial m—a soft, humming murmur, like lips reluctantly parting after pressing against something too clammy, too intimate. It’s the sound of a mouth sealed shut against the encroachment of sogginess, only to betray itself with a sultry exhale. The m is the breath of a dank cave, fetid with earthy wetness, moss clinging like sweat to stone.

Then comes the oi—a diphthong that bubbles and squelches, rising like a blip of air through a puddle of viscous mud. It warbles with a slick, tremulous quality, as though your tongue were slipping sideways across a film of something tepid and unidentifiable. Imagine the bloated underside of a forgotten sponge, languishing in the corner of a sink, its belly full of lukewarm dishwater and microbial secrets. That is the sound this middle syllable conjures—a burble of bile, the slither of something unwholesome stirred.

And finally: -st. A hiss and a snap, like wet paper tearing, or a foot sucked abruptly from a swampy marsh, leaving behind a gaping, glistening imprint. It sticks the landing with a moist thud, the sound of a plop—half-solid, half-liquid, all discomfort. It's the aftertaste of a handshake that lingered too long, fingers slick and palms tacky with indecision.

The word moist is not content to remain inert—it seeps. It oozes. It is a word that arrives like condensation on a windowpane during a muggy summer night, slowly dribbling down the glass in rivulets that feel too intimate to watch, too organic to ignore. It is the squish in a sock that’s been betrayed by a hidden puddle, the cloying warmth of breath against the inside of a latex glove.

In every phoneme, moist conjures the unsettling intimacy of humidity trapped in fabric, the slow creep of syrup down a knuckle, the stickiness of skin meeting vinyl on a sun-drenched car seat. It is both sensual and repulsive, like overheard whispers in a steamy room—an auditory trickle that sends shivers and makes the flesh crawl.

And so, moist—a single syllable that drips with discontent, dribbles down the spine of decorum, and pools in the shadowed corners of language where mildew thrives.






I think that sums it up.

Beautiful. Poetry. Well done.

 

[Maestro91]

So... What's the general consensus on the Ethan situation? Terrible plotline, or...?

 

[TonyMurray]

So... What's the general consensus on the Ethan situation? Terrible plotline, or...?

I personally don't mind it. The general consensus is that it's been dragged out for far too long though. As someone who has come to the game more recently (September last year) I don't know if a lot of that is because of the "real" time it's been going on for, which is I guess something like five years.

For me, I don't see it as being too dragged out, because 1) I don't mind the storyline, and there's plenty of other stuff going on around it too, and 2) I've viewed it in quite a compressed fashion, rather than having it go on for years.

 

[Maestro91]

I personally don't mind it. The general consensus is that it's been dragged out for far too long though. As someone who has come to the game more recently (September last year) I don't know if a lot of that is because of the "real" time it's been going on for, which is I guess something like five years.

For me, I don't see it as being too dragged out, because 1) I don't mind the storyline, and there's plenty of other stuff going on around it too, and 2) I've viewed it in quite a compressed fashion, rather than having it go on for years.

I see most share my view then, that it has gone one far too long. Though the dev is building it up to the high point of no return for Erynn's storyline

 

[El_Magnifico]

So... What's the general consensus on the Ethan situation?

He's a cunt.

 

[Dessolos]

I personally don't mind it. The general consensus is that it's been dragged out for far too long though. As someone who has come to the game more recently (September last year) I don't know if a lot of that is because of the "real" time it's been going on for, which is I guess something like five years.

For me, I don't see it as being too dragged out, because 1) I don't mind the storyline, and there's plenty of other stuff going on around it too, and 2) I've viewed it in quite a compressed fashion, rather than having it go on for years.

I only recently started to see it being Dragged on too long. Basically ever since Erynn started to act more bold with the MC. Basically episode 12 and 13 is when i started to feel okay with how Erynn is acting more bold she felt like she is starting to get pass her trauma but still hesitant to actually say or do how she feels for the MC because of Ethan. But I very much liked what Ethan brought to the table when it comes to her character deveolopment even if it might not of been done that well.

 

[LSC82]

So... What's the general consensus on the Ethan situation? Terrible plotline, or...?

I personally don't mind it. The general consensus is that it's been dragged out for far too long though. As someone who has come to the game more recently (September last year) I don't know if a lot of that is because of the "real" time it's been going on for, which is I guess something like five years.

For me, I don't see it as being too dragged out, because 1) I don't mind the storyline, and there's plenty of other stuff going on around it too, and 2) I've viewed it in quite a compressed fashion, rather than having it go on for years.

He's a one note villain, not very deep or interesting, doesn't feel scary or threatening either.

I feel like this plot is not the strongest point of the game(relationship stuff is the strongest point), it has been dragging on too long(my opinion is shaped by the passage of years), and it holds back the things i actually want to play.

Erynn will not come out of her shell fully while Ethan is still hanging around, this is why he needs to go asap.
And because Erynn doesn't come out of her shell, a whole set of girl vs girl confrontations gets pushed back because we are waiting to deal with Ethan.
Girl vs Girl confrontations is the special something that keeps me coming back to this game despite it's flaws, reboots... not the shitty police blackmail storyline.

So yeah, i'm happy Nyx promised he's going down soon, it already feels like i've waited too damn much.
Specially over a one note bad villain.

 

[Maestro91]

Glad we're all on the same page (forum joke)
Any notes on Zack attack then?

imo the dumbass should go down with Ethan, though he is unaware of his crimes so I guess he won't, or do we think disappear from the roster completely as he brings literally nothing to the table as far as character motivations go?

 

[MiltonPowers]

Glad we're all on the same page (forum joke)
Any notes on Zack attack then?

imo the dumbass should go down with Ethan, though he is unaware of his crimes so I guess he won't, or do we think disappear from the roster completely as he brings literally nothing to the table as far as character motivations go?

Zac is just as bad if not worse than Ethan (in my book). Ethan has always been an asshole and what he did to Erynn deserves revenge, but Zac, claimed to be MC's friend and he turned traitor because he couldn't get pussy. He needs to feel pain and lots of it too. I have no intention of even being civil to him ever again, and If I get the chance I am going to give him a lot more than what he got in the hallway.

 

[LSC82]

Glad we're all on the same page (forum joke)
Any notes on Zack attack then?

imo the dumbass should go down with Ethan, though he is unaware of his crimes so I guess he won't, or do we think disappear from the roster completely as he brings literally nothing to the table as far as character motivations go?

I like the car lol.

I'm not looking forward to any kind of redemption from him where he finds out he chose the wrong side.
Not looking forward to his apology or having to guide him into becoming a less shitty human being, i just want to keep far away from him.

Him going down together with his BFF doesn't sound likely, ostracized from the group will have to suffice.

 

[Kaskaze]

Just to make it up to you...

Spoiler: Could be Erynn, could be Zach...

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There's no way I'm seeing that spoiler. After valbitterb sent Zach's ass, I don't trust you guys

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

Glad we're all on the same page (forum joke)
Any notes on Zack attack then?

imo the dumbass should go down with Ethan, though he is unaware of his crimes so I guess he won't, or do we think disappear from the roster completely as he brings literally nothing to the table as far as character motivations go?

I hope that Im wrong but I get the feeling that zach's redemption will come through his helping taking down ethan. Im hoping that Zach continues being a harmless dick so that when the MC is finally able to react without consequences, it will be good

 

[Dessolos]

Glad we're all on the same page (forum joke)
Any notes on Zack attack then?

imo the dumbass should go down with Ethan, though he is unaware of his crimes so I guess he won't, or do we think disappear from the roster completely as he brings literally nothing to the table as far as character motivations go?

tbh im 50 / 50 on Zack when it comes to forgiving him or not. What he did is unforgiveable and I would never be friends again with him. Yet if I put myself in the MC's shoe's im an introvert , I probably would forgive him and I sure as hell don't have it in me to harm in even if I think deservers it. Be friends again ? No especially when there is alot of lovely girls around that are actual friends with the MC. At most I would be friendly towards him but never want to do anything with him if it's my choice.

So you can guarantee on saves that isn't my Canon / Main save Zack is 100% getting an ass whopping and not being forgiven cause if I wasn't an introvert it's what I would like to do to him.

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

tbh im 50 / 50 on Zack when it comes to forgiving him or not. What he did is unforgiveable and I would never be friends again with him. Yet if I put myself in the MC's shoe's im an introvert , I probably would forgive him and I sure as hell don't have it in me to harm in even if I think deservers it. Be friends again ? No especially when there is alot of lovely girls around that are actual friends with the MC. At most I would be friendly towards him but never want to do anything with him if it's my choice.

So you can guarantee on saves that isn't my Canon / Main save Zack is 100% getting an ass whopping and not being forgiven cause if I wasn't an introvert it's what I would like to do to him.

Admit it you'll have at least one saving where you'll be participating in a devil's threeway between zach, val and yourself

 

[Dessolos]

Admit it you'll have at least one saving where you'll be participating in a devil's threeway between zach, val and yourself

I mean if that was an option id do it just because I view every scene that isn't with Tori. Would I want it ? No but if it's there im sure as hell gonna watch it at least one time.

Tho I think Justaphase might have something to say about that. He probably would put Zack in the Cuck chair

 

[Justaphase]

Tho I think Justaphase might have something to say about that. He probably would put Zack in the Cuck chair

In the electic chair more like...

 

[Dr.TSoni]

Easily solution at the pizzera order a pineapple pizza thus she no longer is interested in the MC

Good girl Layla always gives satisfaction XD

Why not simply write an upcoming scene where a fuckboy MC who has been dating both, gets found out and confronted?

Only if Lexi is leading the confrontation XD
I can see the scene of Lexi scolding the MC and Erryn and Layla behind sad and silent

I actually like pineapple every once in awhile. That and I do like myself a Hawaiian pizza every once in awhile just never frozen. Just not something id order all the time

Yay. Pineapple tends to work well with most meats, pizza or not. The juice help tenderize it.

Occasionally I like a pineapple and ham or pineapple and chicken pizza. Not an every day craving, though. Anchovies any day of the week.

 

[Dessolos]

In the electic chair more like...

Well I kind of figured some forum of a torture or death chair would be what you use for the cuck chair. First you make him watch them you end him with said chair

 

[MilesEdgeworth]

id do it just because I enjoy every scene that is with Tori.

I did not expect such a confession