MidnightKing From a review of this game. Dec 4, 2022
The beginning takes two overused plot devices and mashes them together. First, we awaken from cryosleep and have amnesia. A classic. Couldn't tell you why this would actually be relevant to the story. Second, we quickly find out that our MC is essentially the last fertile male in the universe due to some virus. Part of this is personal preference, but the reason I usually hate this is that it typically means the love interests are nonsensically easy. Unfortunately, that is holding true here. Lewd scenes come very fast to our sleazeball looking MC, and that makes them just not very satisfying for me.
The beginning takes two overused plot devices and mashes them together. First, we awaken from cryosleep and have amnesia. A classic.
Could you provide an alternative? Besides that, he wakes up without amnesia.
Couldn't tell you why this would actually be relevant to the story.
Possibility because you need to have dialogue in any story. Not every plot point is a means to an end.
Second, we quickly find out that our MC is essentially the last fertile male in the universe due to some virus. Part of this is personal preference. but the reason I usually hate this is that it typically means the love interests are nonsensically easy. Unfortunately, that is holding true here.
You could say that in this situation, the norms of courtship would be relaxed (almost without discussion)
Lewd scenes come very fast to our sleazeball
(from your point of view) looking MC, and that makes them just not very satisfying for me.
I'm not bashing this reviewer in particular. I'm pointing out that a review is not written based on your personal tastes. A review is meant to be neutral because the person reading the review may not have similar tastes in things. by saying (sleazeball), the reader is going to picture
their idea of a sleazeball. when in fact, the MC may look nothing like their version of one. Now they already have a bias against the game and may not play it now.
I saying be fair in your reviews. Don't make it about you. You took the time to write one. Just do it correctly.