VN Ren'Py Abandoned Invasion [v0.0.3] [MultiChoicesStudio]

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Overview:
At the beginning of the story, you are just a normal college student. At least you think that you are normal.
As a kid, you had strange dreams. You don't remember clearly, but there is something you know. The beings in your dreams were just as real as the people around you. Or you thought so when you were a kid. Because you've never had these strange dreams in years again.
You graduated from high school. You grew up and started college. You're happy because you'll get the chance to use the talent that you developed in high school. Now is the time!​

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Release Date: 2021-05-05
Developer: MultiChoicesStudio
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Version: 0.0.3
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English, Turkish
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hold on a bloody minute the screenshot's file names are in turkish what the fuck did I just find a turkish porn game

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yep this is too specific to be a coincidence, the scene where they run is literally called ''Koşma'' running. and ''Sahne'' translates to scene
 
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Honestly, I'm just sick of developers putting descriptions that are even less specific than horoscopes. It's like devs think "mystery" is what will draw people in, but when every single game has a "mysterious" synopsis, those bland and meaningless overviews just all sound the same. Please devs (not just of this game), write actual descriptions, give a couple sentences of plot synopsis, let people know why they should play your game in particular! There are dozens of v0.1's posted every week, give people a reason yours should stand out.

IMO, the translation of this description is "I haven't actually thought through a plot yet, so I'm just going to put some hot models in situations I can take screenshots of. Then I can get people to give me money on Patreon!"

And perhaps I'm wrong, but that synopsis were on a book cover... I'd put the book back.
 
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LokiSalmon said:
Honestly, I'm just sick of developers putting descriptions that are even less specific than horoscopes. It's like devs think "mystery" is what will draw people in, but when every single game has a "mysterious" synopsis, those bland and meaningless overviews just all sound the same. Please devs (not just of this game), write actual descriptions, give a couple sentences of plot synopsis, let people know why they should play your game in particular! There are dozens of v0.1's posted every week, give people a reason yours should stand out.

IMO, the translation of this description is "I haven't actually thought through a plot yet, so I'm just going to put some hot models in situations I can take screenshots of. Then I can get people to give me money on Patreon!"

And perhaps I'm wrong, but that synopsis were on a book cover... I'd put the book back.
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Calm down, mate :) Of course, I didn't write all the details of the story. I think this is impossible. But the general lines of my story are pretty clear. Still, I don't intend to share them on the overview. Because this would be spoilers.
 
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critism on our socity, nice:cool: imo a good start, even without sexual content but a little bit short. Was confused at first after seeing and "hearing" Hoch, because it was more like speaking with boys than with your female friend/homie ( I know she´s a homie but I have never spoken to my female "bros" like that) and was excepting a error and that the dialoge originaly belongs to a guy. Still thinking that I´m going to enjoy this:) (bad grammer = not first language)
 
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MultiChoicesStudio said:
Calm down, mate :) Of course, I didn't write all the details of the story. I think this is impossible. But the general lines of my story are pretty clear. Still, I don't intend to share them on the overview. Because this would be spoilers.
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Like I said, if that was a book synopsis, I wouldn't waste my time. You're trying to stand out among hundreds of other games, there has to be something to people to go on. Don't rely on people downloading your game to know what the "general lines of the story" are, because if they look at your description and never bother downloading, you've already lost that battle. People don't have unlimited time, they're not going to try out every single new game.

You don't have to tell the entire story, obviously, but you can "spoil" what the overarching plot is going to be. To use Maou-Sama for an example: "A Goddess tasks one of the last men in the world with repopulating all of time, and grants supernatural powers of seduction in order for him to accomplish that." That isn't telling the whole story, but it gives a rough idea of where the plot will go, and lets people know whether it will hit their kinks.
 
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