I've seen a lot of comments about the translation. You are completely right. My mother tongue is not English and I'm having a hard time translating. Yes, I admit that my English is not good because I learned English not from classes or courses, but from watching movies, series and playing games since I was a child. Therefore, it's hard for me to write a novel in English.
I have good news for those interested in my novel and those who will continue reading it.
From now on, the translations will be better because I was accepted to the GPT-3 beta. For those who don't know, GPT-3 is a very powerful algorithm. It's in the BETA version right now. I applied about 8-9 months ago and I was accepted about 2-3 days ago. Its main purpose is to talk to humans but also it's really good as a translation tool. I mean that from now on the sentences will be much more natural. If you want, I can even update the old chapters before I post the new ones.