So it's more of a rewrite then an actual translation?
It is better to ask the translator. I think that yes, he rewrote some of the moments, but I did not check.
Ah, that's what you mean by 'rewrite'.
Yes, I rewrote a good amount of stuff; as a translator, my personal style is to be a bit more creative with the writing, since I find that, unless you're a purist, you'll have a better experience with text and ideas more culturally familiar to you. If I were to rewrite verbatim from Japanese, it'd either sound like an MTL, or you'd be bored af because some culture/language-based concepts get lost in a word-for-word translation.
However, as I said in the ReadMe, in this particular translation, I kept much of the text as close to the original meaning as possible because the dialogue/text was excellent, IMHO.
Man, Translators really love this particular circle huh? Artemis Pearl, Thanatos, now this, in such a short time...
I hope that, modifications or no, it's still possible to see the scenes as they were originally intended to be seen. Especially when it sounds like it's less of a case of NTR for most scenes, and more of a case of a bit of polygamy. After all, if the dude's allowed to fuck multiple girls, why shouldn't the girls get some extra dick now and then?
Heh, I was really excited for those other two games too (I was gonna translate them myself, but kudos to those translators as those games are quite lengthy). In fact, I wanted to take a break and play both of those games, but I'm back to another translation again ... :/
Ehhhh, mostly because it's the player's POV and I get the feeling most of us who aren't into NTR are a bit more selfish. After all, it's a harem game, so I'm assuming anyone playing this type of game wants multiple girls but doesn't want to share/let them enjoy other dick. Might not be the most altruistic attitude, but hey, that's why these are fantasy games.
As for the originals, as I've said in the ReadMe, you can either CHOOSE the NTR in game, or revert back to the original maps (which I've also translated) that force you into the NTR.
Very lazy game. Games like this remind me of why I pirate games. And it's ranked #1 on Dlsite? I mean... Okay...
That makes it okay ...? What do you mean by lazy, anyway ...? Is it the writing, or gameplay, or what?
so how barebones is the rpg bit?
It's fairly barebones in terms of building up characters and whatnot. After all, you're only raising one character's level/stats for combat, and even then, it's not hard or dense enough of a game to warrant you grinding.
If you want a deep RPG, you can go play FF or Pokemon, or whatever floats your boat, haha.