ForlornFaun Ding Dong, the Grammar Nazi is here, Giving the 0.05a a shot:
Textbox and phone display show your name entry → redundant
right „yes“ button does not work.
Vaccent → vacant
area → seat?
flights → flight’s
hes → he’s
further → farther or far away
screwdriver?? letters have strange background, different alpha or different font?
has held up→ is holding up? She is still doing it
ofcourse → of course
you’re → You’re
She pats you the head → "She pats you on the head" or "She pats your head".
Untill → Until
It must of been populated here once.→ Once, it must have been populated.
Feelings of relief wash over
you
Pulling out the lighter you found,
you start a fire.
Ofcourse → Of course, an [...]
[…] your eyes grow heavy as
you lie your head down next to the fire.
directory → directly
[…] large statue and
the llama.
It’s filled with crystal clear water.
[...]rim of the cup,
you start feeling[…]
I need → you’ll need?
Untill → Until
[...]go forth an explore. → go forth and explore.
Message to tiny and hard to read with the alpha effect
Now some gameplay stuff
When leaving the „structure“, the exploration map is briefly shown.
capturing my first girl. 0 of what available? Cell slots? I just build the hut, shouldn’t I have the cage?
Catching a second girl. Aha, maybe missing initialization of available slots?
While having the thralls menu open, enter the hut.
The menu „follows“ you inside, opening the local thrall menu fucks things up:
In the blowjob and fuck pose, then exit button does not work. Only in the "tied to pole" pose.
Any reason why all girls stick their tounge out in this menu?
Stress 100 is no longer a blocker for training sessions? At least it does not abort the current action, I could keep going and bring all her stats to 100.
Maybe have some kind of endurance for the player (upgradeable with training. items, etc) so he can’t fuck non-stop all girls into oblivion
insense → incense
Ah right, your people.
[...]it use to. → [...]it used to.
[...]chosen of Goddess Dealla → [...]chosen of the/our goddess Dealla.
Air bar is shown without need at start of training.
After capturing a girl, there is a textbox „bringing her back to camp“. When you click on the travel menu
before clearing the message box, the travel menu is fucked, You can’t travel, you can’t close it, you can't enter the hut.
In the village, with the travel menu open, then enter the store. Overlap of options.
My wishes for christmas (or earlier
)
- Tooltips for the buttons in training mode. What do the buttons mean?
- Explaining the mind stats ingame. Maybe it happens later in the story, but starting I'm overwhelmed with data I can't use.
- more zones to touch/slap the girl: hips, inner/outer thighs, buttocks. Slap control on neck: choke her. More use for the air bar
Cheers for the progress you made, looking forward for more
PS: about the framerate issue: when limiting the frames with nvidia control center, the game behaves fine.
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PPS: I get the impression that Ezzy immediately saw through our divine disguise but decided to have fun with it
area → seat?
