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Masha finally feels like a real woman again. A lot of time has passed since her last time. It feels a little painful for her, but also breathtaking at the same time. She feels every inch and gives herself to Alex. He can hardly believe what is happening, but he has long understood that she now belongs to him alone. And he clearly knows what he wants. Both look deep into each other's eyes and enjoy the most incredible and intimate moment of their entire lives...

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Jeez, dev dude. Just redesign the chick model, or buy another one. This game is literally having the opposite effect you were looking for. Shit, even those guys that are into fucking bestiality can't stomach your girl's design dude. Keep working at it...

No, really...
Hi Peter, you played chapter 1, but If you check all my previous posts before, you will understand that adjustments on her body were already made for chapter 2. If you won't like it either, I recommend you to do what Wolf wrote in his reply to your comment.
Thanks!
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Isolated Pleasure #1 - Chapter 2 (Update)

Masha likes candles! :) But, how do you like the lighting?

I am currently rendering the animations on the virtual machine. Along the way, I'm continuing to work on my notebook for the next scenes. The workflow is still great. I am convinced that you will like the animations very much. There will be some sex positions, from different angles, in different speeds. Which ones exactly I don't want to tell you yet. :)

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Isolated Pleasure #1 - Chapter 2 (Update)

A deal before the next step. Masha knows what she wants and what she desires, however, insecurity and uncertainty are not completely gone. She looks him in the eyes and waits for his reaction. She wonders what he thinks. It's up to him to take the next step. He can open a whole new chapter of his life, but he also has to accept the responsibility and consequences...

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Besides that Masha is ugly and I don't only mean her body her face is almost worse than her body, what really ruins her character for me is her backstory with her being a former escort and that is a shame because I like the setting of the game. The writing wasn't bad either until the talk about their sexual life and Masha's time before she met Victor started. After that talk, I stopped playing.
 

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Besides that Masha is ugly and I don't only mean her body her face is almost worse than her body, what really ruins her character for me is her backstory with her being a former escort and that is a shame because I like the setting of the game. The writing wasn't bad either until the talk about their sexual life and Masha's time before she met Victor started. After that talk, I stopped playing.
Probably my VN is just not for you and those who think like you. That's totally fine.

But maybe you can understand my thoughts and ideas about Masha. It could be that you give chapter 2 a chance after all.

I have like many here played several VNs. And the plot was always the same. There was a decent MILF, a normal world, law and order, a big house, possibly wealth and money, and a boy who tries to manipulate everyone in the household.

I find it boring. That's why I gave Masha a special past. And chose a special plot for it.

She has made crass decisions in life, she has let herself go, she was naive and reckless, moreover totally dirty and addicted to more and more sexual experiences, without any real ideas about her future and her self-realization. She was young and adventurous. Today, of course, she is more mature and wiser in some respects.

But the extreme change in her life, the worldwide catastrophe, traumatic experiences and the uncertain future, the disappearance of normal civil society - only all this drives her to despair, forbidden emotions and further crass decisions. The same applies to Alex, only that he first makes his own experiences. His future is just as screwed up and completely unclear. He is a man, has stronger urges and takes advantage of the situation. He doesn't have to manipulate much, since the circumstances play into his hands.

In addition, I skipped 7 months. During which, in particular, Masha shed many tears, depressed, lonely, unsatisfied. First innuendos and flirtations were exchanged, embarrassing situations may have occurred. And the desire would become stronger and stronger. At the same time, inhibitions were disappearing more and more, and perversion and unethical and contradictory thoughts and fantasies were developing more and more.

This was also the trigger why Masha started to talk freely about her tainted past. And this is what it is. This is not something to be proud of and it can turn some people off, but not Alex, who, like Victor, as a porn fan and popular student, sees such a past a little looser and gives people a chance to do better deeds in life.

I'm not a fan of magic. Not a fan of childish innuendo, or childish fantasies. I go for hardcore. Protagonists who have lived through crass things and are prone to crass actions and behaviors. And the appearance of Masha does not correspond to the standard ideas of the western world. That is also totally okay. But I have seen many women with such facial features in Eastern Europe. And with similar body proportions. That fascinated me.

Thank you!
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Probably my VN is just not for you and those who think like you. That's totally fine.

But maybe you can understand my thoughts and ideas about Masha. It could be that you give chapter 2 a chance after all.

I have like many here played several VNs. And the plot was always the same. There was a decent MILF, a normal world, law and order, a big house, possibly wealth and money, and a boy who tries to manipulate everyone in the household.

I find it boring. That's why I gave Masha a special past. And chose a special plot for it.

She has made crass decisions in life, she has let herself go, she was naive and reckless, moreover totally dirty and addicted to more and more sexual experiences, without any real ideas about her future and her self-realization. She was young and adventurous. Today, of course, she is more mature and wiser in some respects.

But the extreme change in her life, the worldwide catastrophe, traumatic experiences and the uncertain future, the disappearance of normal civil society - only all this drives her to despair, forbidden emotions and further crass decisions. The same applies to Alex, only that he first makes his own experiences. His future is just as screwed up and completely unclear. He is a man, has stronger urges and takes advantage of the situation. He doesn't have to manipulate much, since the circumstances play into his hands.

In addition, I skipped 7 months. During which, in particular, Masha shed many tears, depressed, lonely, unsatisfied. First innuendos and flirtations were exchanged, embarrassing situations may have occurred. And the desire would become stronger and stronger. At the same time, inhibitions were disappearing more and more, and perversion and unethical and contradictory thoughts and fantasies were developing more and more.

This was also the trigger why Masha started to talk freely about her tainted past. And this is what it is. This is not something to be proud of and it can turn some people off, but not Alex, who, like Victor, as a porn fan and popular student, sees such a past a little looser and gives people a chance to do better deeds in life.

I'm not a fan of magic. Not a fan of childish innuendo, or childish fantasies. I go for hardcore. Protagonists who have lived through crass things and are prone to crass actions and behaviors. And the appearance of Masha does not correspond to the standard ideas of the western world. That is also totally okay. But I have seen many women with such facial features in Eastern Europe. And with similar body proportions. That fascinated me.

Thank you!
Zeus
While you've "polished" her, as I understand it, you have not gone back through your first release and applied those changes. Your tastes are different from many here, who've expressed a deep dislike of Masha'a original form. Why in the world would you expect that group of people to play your first chapter to get to your second chapter?

Forgive my shouting but, IT DOESN"T WORK THAT WAY. No one who finds her unattractive or worse, is going to suffer your first chapter to get to the second.

I understand you've made changes based on the feedback you've received. If you have a desire for people who've shunned your game to give it a try, fixes in your new update are simply not sufficient. You have to apply them to the game from its beginning.

I apologize for the harshness of this comment. I know you're trying to create something here. Something unique, but if you want to share your story with others you have to provide a VN that draws them.
 
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While you've "polished" her, as I understand it, you have not gone back through your first release and applied those changes. Your tastes are different from many here, who've expressed a deep dislike of Masha'a original form. Why in the world would you expect that group of people to play your first chapter to get to your second chapter?

Forgive my shouting but, IT DOESN"T WORK THAT WAY. No one who finds her unattractive or worse, is going to suffer your first chapter to get to the second.

I understand you've made changes based on the feedback you've received. If you have a desire for people who've shunned your game to give it a try, fixes in your new update are simply not sufficient. You have to apply them to the game from its beginning.

I apologize for the harshness of this comment. I know you're trying to create something here. Something unique, but if you want to share your story with others you have to provide a VN that draws them.
In essence, I agree with you. Red Dust went back and fixed every render after he changed the MC. However, as you said, the harshness in your words comes out with venom. I thought I was bad at expressing myself. Hell, you've even called me on how I write things. I never once thought I'd be the one responding to you about this. Yes, you apologized and I can only hope Zeus3DX accepts it.

But, damn. Even I felt slapped by that. Especially since I've been defending this game and the choices he's made with it. If it was anyone else, I'd be laying into them with the same venom. If not worse.
 

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In essence, I agree with you. Red Dust went back and fixed every render after he changed the MC. However, as you said, the harshness in your words comes out with venom. I thought I was bad at expressing myself. Hell, you've even called me on how I write things. I never once thought I'd be the one responding to you about this. Yes, you apologized and I can only hope Zeus3DX accepts it.

But, damn. Even I felt slapped by that. Especially since I've been defending this game and the choices he's made with it. If it was anyone else, I'd be laying into them with the same venom. If not worse.
Yeah. My bad. It's my frustration showing inappropriately. Apologies to all.
 

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While you've "polished" her, as I understand it, you have not gone back through your first release and applied those changes. Your tastes are different from many here, who've expressed a deep dislike of Masha'a original form. Why in the world would you expect that group of people to play your first chapter to get to your second chapter?

Forgive my shouting but, IT DOESN"T WORK THAT WAY. No one who finds her unattractive or worse, is going to suffer your first chapter to get to the second.

I understand you've made changes based on the feedback you've received. If you have a desire for people who've shunned your game to give it a try, fixes in your new update are simply not sufficient. You have to apply them to the game from its beginning.

I apologize for the harshness of this comment. I know you're trying to create something here. Something unique, but if you want to share your story with others you have to provide a VN that draws them.
You are totally right but I don't want to rerender Chapter 1 "right now". I simply don't have time and resources for that. It will be done, but later with better hardware I will rent.

But I think you misunderstand my motivation why I'm doing all this in general. I don't want to create something that draws "them" or you specifically. I'm just making what I love and "IF" a fan who likes what I'm doing INSPIRES me to change something a little, then I'll do this. But I don't make something to order. I don't have the need for that. I don't want to switch from a job I hate to another job I hate, too.

Perhaps other projects in the future will have characters who draws more audience and someone like you. If yes - great, if not - great, too. :)
 

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Also chiming in to say the new model is miles better, and I hope you can fix up Chapter 1 sometime but if not that's fine too.

For the record, I love the way you've written Masha as a complicated, realistic character with flaws. Keep making what you like, and remember that people complain a lot more easily than they give praise - for every one person whining that the game isn't for them, there's probably ten who enjoy it but don't say anything.

My only complaint is that the story moves a bit fast, and I would have liked to see some of that time the sexual tension was building up before they gave in to their desires!
 

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Also chiming in to say the new model is miles better, and I hope you can fix up Chapter 1 sometime but if not that's fine too.

For the record, I love the way you've written Masha as a complicated, realistic character with flaws. Keep making what you like, and remember that people complain a lot more easily than they give praise - for every one person whining that the game isn't for them, there's probably ten who enjoy it but don't say anything.

My only complaint is that the story moves a bit fast, and I would have liked to see some of that time the sexual tension was building up before they gave in to their desires!
He already explained that. 7 months went by and now it's coming to good parts. Those 7 months were probably Hell on both of them. Ahahaha
 

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"what really ruins her character for me is her backstory with her being a former escort" - HansDampf788
And I am like. :unsure:

"only all this drives her to despair, forbidden emotions and further crass decisions." - Zeus3DX
But then I am like. :PogChamp:

And then I remember:

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I get you now, you need a special kind of skank to pull off something like that. :KEK:

Ok I am down for it.
 

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My only complaint is that the story moves a bit fast, and I would have liked to see some of that time the sexual tension was building up before they gave in to their desires!
Most here play VNs to fap I think - so I focused on that.

I think my style is the total opposite of someone like Dr. Sin.
Perhaps you would like to have the middle between his and my tempo. I thought about some leaps into the past for some scenes later in the story. Like in many movies nowadays. But this won't be a deep dive within an extra chapter. Only specific scenes for telling more about the past, character and behaviour of all. This will be very important for the introduction of Michaela and Diana, too.

Plus, I don't want to have only one final vaginal/anal scene with the Milf or the roommates and then finish the project. There will be much more action, with different positions, different outfits, in different situations and much more. ;)
 
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