VN Ren'Py Abandoned Isolated Pleasure [Ch. 1-4] [Zeus3DX]

[Joshua Tree]

Thanks to all who have expressed constructive criticism!

However, I am shocked at how unobjective, self-serving and insulting most of the comments here are. In a forum where everything because of piracy s available for free and no one owes anyone anything.

If I were Icstor I would understand some bashing, but most comments really rob you of the motivation to develop. I use Daz 3d just 10 months, publish a part of my first project.

I wonder if those guys who bashed also explain to a street artist what art is and how he should paint the picture. I can not understand why in a forum where 3d porn is the focus, so meticulously and meticulously discuss aspects of reality.

Let's see if the shitstorm continues like this. Then we can wait together for the release of Icstor or Dr. Sin.

Uh, just because it's a piracy site/forum doesn't mean people should reserve themselves from being critical, or share their views though. Also, quite different things between critic a release such as this and critic a street artist. If you open your door and welcome us all into your studio, home or whatever place you create this, and we can start offer input real time, then you could start compare the two.

Also please; bring up Icstor is kinda silly. His models/renders is not what he get flak for. You being new to this as you said and still learning. You shouldn't take critic as a way to rob you of your motivation. You should take it as input to "do better". If "uncanny and weird" models is what you going for, just put it in the description of the game, and no one would knock you for it.

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

Jesus, somebody failed Anatomy 101.

Spoiler: At this point the dev should go all-in and make this guy the MC

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[visagedirect]

Jesus, somebody failed Anatomy 101.

Spoiler: At this point the dev should go all-in and make this guy the MC

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[Grimsoul0]

What happened to her hips. Does she have cancer or botched plastic surgery?

I've seen pictures of people looking like this. Granted it was pictures of Photoshop fails.

 

[Deleted member 1394645]

You have accentuated your female character's hip displacement to the point that she appears to suffer from some joint disease. I find that extremely jarring and am unwilling to spend time watching her. You're certainly well within your rights to create the game and characters you choose. However, nobody here is obligated not to express their opinion about your choice. Good luck with your game.

Ok Could you teel me please what you think about games like "Afterglow"? I would appriciate your opinon.

 

[visagedirect]

Dont be Rude ! thats John Waynes Granddaughter

 

[v1900]

When the strap snapped she knew she fucked up

 

[BarbarrossaNA]

Thanks to all who have expressed constructive criticism!

However, I am shocked at how unobjective, self-serving and insulting most of the comments here are. In a forum where everything because of piracy s available for free and no one owes anyone anything.

If I were Icstor I would understand some bashing, but most comments really rob you of the motivation to develop. I use Daz 3d just 10 months, publish a part of my first project.

I wonder if those guys who bashed also explain to a street artist what art is and how he should paint the picture. I can not understand why in a forum where 3d porn is the focus, so meticulously and meticulously discuss aspects of reality.

Let's see if the shitstorm continues like this. Then we can wait together for the release of Icstor or Dr. Sin.

I was tempted at first to jump on the bandwagon... til I read this.

So here goes.

I read some of the comments before playing and the game was actually better then most of the comments let on. The one fact I cannot get over.. or bypass is the unnatural butt/hips. With that being said not all the renders of the Mom are in the category of unnatural... but the ones that are really detract from the story imo. For a first try this one has a decent amount of content to it. Do not let the harsh comments run you out of the business Zeus3DX .. There are skills I see in you.. it's just that the hips/butt thing is an easy target for the masses.. and they responded.

 

[visagedirect]

View attachment 1426831 When the strap snapped she knew she fucked up View attachment 1426835

hahaha

 

[Joshua Tree]

Ok Could you teel me please what you think about games like "Afterglow"? I would appriciate your opinon.

So what you really saying is you don't like "thicc and curvy"... ?

 

[Deleted member 1394645]

Besides that Masha is ugly as fuck, with the setup of two groups in different places the game screams multiple protagonists and I'm not a fan of that.

Don´t you think it´s to early to decide that?

 

[indio68]

really can't understand and stand to some char render...this one have a werid ass and some VN have the worst MC ever..like Summer story where MCs are dwarfs and all seems out of proportion...why?

 

[Deleted member 1394645]

Are you even aware of the concept of objective beauty?
It is commendable that the author is looking for his own style and trying to do something a little different. But the model of a woman really looks very strange, rather resembling something extraterrestrial. There is an obvious "inflection", if it were a little smoother - it would look unusual but more organic. This is also striking not only in itself but also in comparison. The male character looks completely ordinary.
Please do not be offended, but I think that people on this site are with very specific goals and this is clear to everyone. And in this case, the visual side is one of the most important factors. Hence the criticism.

Maybe I will consider this for the future. But, yes I know what objective beauty is. But I know also that beauty is very subjective. Thanks for you comment, really!

 

[Wicked Garden]

Hopefully the renders are corrected, that's the bread and butter of any game. Having a Milf that looks like an Autobot action figure is not gonna sell. Godspeed.

 

[Deleted member 1394645]

The Dev claims the landlady has a stunning body. I might be inclined to agree. One of the definitions is:
"Causing or capable of causing emotional shock or loss of consciousness. "
According to American Heritage Dictionary.
Another is "Of a strikingly attractive appearance."
Please choose whichever you like.
Maybe this is what beautiful women look like in his opinion. Absolutely nothing wrong with that, however, I will be choosing the first definition.

After reading these posts you all reminded me of an old song, Hips 'N Lips by the Electric Boys. Used to love that cd.

Best of luck to the Dev and I hope he improves the grammar tremendously.

Cheers

Thanks for your comment, but I don´t claim anything. I just made something different and shared it with you guys to see if some of you will like it or not. I don´t want to make a profitable business with that.

 

[zerofreak]

Thanks to all who have expressed constructive criticism!

However, I am shocked at how unobjective, self-serving and insulting most of the comments here are. In a forum where everything because of piracy s available for free and no one owes anyone anything.

If I were Icstor I would understand some bashing, but most comments really rob you of the motivation to develop. I use Daz 3d just 10 months, publish a part of my first project.

I wonder if those guys who bashed also explain to a street artist what art is and how he should paint the picture. I can not understand why in a forum where 3d porn is the focus, so meticulously and meticulously discuss aspects of reality.

Let's see if the shitstorm continues like this. Then we can wait together for the release of Icstor or Dr. Sin.

Hi Zeus3DX , I'm fan of the artwork forum as you, I appreciate that your beauty perspective is not the standard one, bit you can't expect that everyone here share the same opinion.. There are a lot of pictures of woman with humongous tits, girls with penis and so on. And as well that people complaint about 75 centimeters penis, people can complaint about your unreal character. None of these art attracts me, but there are fandom for them.
Good luck with your game, but as most of users here, I can't be attracted to your character, as the other examples, I think that you will find great people to share your perversions (in not judging or using perversions as an insult)

 

[Deleted member 1394645]

I was tempted at first to jump on the bandwagon... til I read this.

So here goes.

I read some of the comments before playing and the game was actually better then most of the comments let on. The one fact I cannot get over.. or bypass is the unnatural butt/hips. With that being said not all the renders of the Mom are in the category of unnatural... but the ones that are really detract from the story imo. For a first try this one has a decent amount of content to it. Do not let the harsh comments run you out of the business Zeus3DX .. There are skills I see in you.. it's just that the hips/butt thing is an easy target for the masses.. and they responded.

Thanks for your great respond. I really miss comments like yours, which are constructive. Comments like your helps me to understand everything better and see everything from a different perspective, instead of reading "bullshit, surgery, etc", only.

 

[Deleted member 1394645]

Uh, just because it's a piracy site/forum doesn't mean people should reserve themselves from being critical, or share their views though. Also, quite different things between critic a release such as this and critic a street artist. If you open your door and welcome us all into your studio, home or whatever place you create this, and we can start offer input real time, then you could start compare the two.

Also please; bring up Icstor is kinda silly. His models/renders is not what he get flak for. You being new to this as you said and still learning. You shouldn't take critic as a way to rob you of your motivation. You should take it as input to "do better". If "uncanny and weird" models is what you going for, just put it in the description of the game, and no one would knock you for it.

It´s not about critisism, it´s about how it is written. Well formulated criticism is the basis for development.

 

[Deleted member 1394645]

So what you really saying is you don't like "thicc and curvy"... ?

I think you misunderstood me. I didn´t say anything, I just asked you something

 

[zeus04]