VN Ren'Py Abandoned Isolated Pleasure [Ch. 1-4] [Zeus3DX]

[Forgotted]

Thanks to all who have expressed constructive criticism!

However, I am shocked at how unobjective, self-serving and insulting most of the comments here are.
In a forum where everything because of piracy s available for free and no one owes anyone anything.
Let's see if the shitstorm continues like this. Then we can wait together for the release of Icstor or Dr. Sin.

Well, sorry but so far you've come across as kind of a douche.

You've told us several times now about how great you are and "learnd" everything necessary about Daz and Renpy in such a short time.

You've told us how stunning and beautiful your model is.
You've done all this without bothering to fully learn the dominant language on this site.
Then you demanded money through patreon after you complained about releasing your game on a known pirate site.

I know I sound ugly, and I'm sorry, but don't you think it would have been better to let everyone know this is your first game, you're still learning, and ask for help and suggestions while being modest?

Since you've looked at other games on this site, you probably already realize the hazing will go away soon enough.
Best of Luck with your project.

Cheers

But then again.......what do I know? (not much) lol

 

[Greenarcherneedsfood]

There is a lot of people that dislike the lower body and are saying things like go study human anatomy. The ironic part is there are a lot of women that have some of the different features that the comments are likely finding disturbing. When I look at the female lead I see two major body features/types that stand out. Slim thick, and a thigh gapper. Go to google and type in "slim thick" into image search and you'll find women that have that wait, hip, ass, thigh combo that seems to balloon out of nowhere. Type in "thigh gap", and you'll find women with all sorts of variations of thigh gaps that at times also have some other pronounced lower body feature(s).

The problem is the combination of the two archetypes (?) are generally not found together. The slim girl will possibly still have a gap but it more like a smaller triangle or not so pronounced heart shape of sorts. People with large thigh gap tend to not be thick, because their thighs fills it in.

That said, I think it is interesting to see the combination of the two types together, and it was actually a point of interest for me to check out the game.

 

[House Of Black]

Thanks for your great respond. I really miss comments like yours, which are constructive. Comments like your helps me to understand everything better and see everything from a different perspective, instead of reading "bullshit, surgery, etc", only.

The thing is there’s dozens of fan art threads on this forum and they serve as a learning experience for those looking to perfect their crafts. So it’s hard to expect constructive criticism, when there’s already a place for that, I know if I was a Dev I wouldn’t even release a project until I know in my heart that my product is Top tier.

We can talk about beauty being subjective all day until the cows come home, but in this case I just find the model who is supposed to be the main milf and main attraction weird looking, but that’s just my opinion, some people might find this fappable and that’s fine too.

Good luck to you though.

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

The thing is there’s dozens of fan art threads on this forum and they serve as a learning experience for those looking to perfect their crafts. So it’s hard to expect constructive criticism, when there’s already a place for that, I know if I was a Dev I wouldn’t even release a project until I know in my heart that my product is Top tier.

We can talk about beauty being subjective all day until the cows come home, but in this case I just find the model who is supposed to be the main milf and main attraction weird looking, but that’s just my opinion, some people might find this fappable and that’s fine too.

Good luck to you though.

Bruh, you know damn well if you're drunker than shit, you'd bang the shit outta her. Sure, you'd probably regret it the next day, but, a piece is a piece. Ahahaha

 

[Deleted member 1394645]

Well, sorry but so far you've come across as kind of a douche.

You've told us several times now about how great you are and "learnd" everything necessary about Daz and Renpy in such a short time.

You've told us how stunning and beautiful your model is.
You've done all this without bothering to fully learn the dominant language on this site.
Then you demanded money through patreon after you complained about releasing your game on a known pirate site.

I know I sound ugly, and I'm sorry, but don't you think it would have been better to let everyone know this is your first game, you're still learning, and ask for help and suggestions while being modest?

Since you've looked at other games on this site, you probably already realize the hazing will go away soon enough.
Best of Luck with your project.

Cheers

But then again.......what do I know? (not much) lol

Thank you for the time you spend to write this. I think I should invest the same. I didn´t say anywhere that I know everything and can everything. Everybody can clearly see that it´s my first project. I offer only 1$ membership on patreon, to share also "nude" stuff. My opinions regarding the models are totally subjective, like the opposite opinions of others who don´t like them, and that´s ok. The only thing I´mu upsad about is the bashing in half of the comments. That´s it.

So, I think everybody alrady knows by checking my status here, or on patreon, that it´s my first game, I´m still learning, and if you check the forum you will find that I asked for help, yesterday, for example. Thanks, again!

 

[sensei02]

You know, the context of the game seems very good. This story can go places. But those assets can't. No sir. Thats a crime. This should be reported. Fix Masha and this game has potential.

 

[DevilzPride]

I'm sorry but when the woman moves her looks deformed I would much prefer the woman in the game to have the figure of the female characters in dreams of desire, JOHN, or Anna's Exciting Affection

 

[SvenVlad]

The devil wears prada, or in this case, nothing.

 

[House Of Black]

Bruh, you know damn well if you're drunker than shit, you'd bang the shit outta her. Sure, you'd probably regret it the next day, but, a piece is a piece. Ahahaha

Lmao trust me I’ve had my share of grenades in my lifetime, alcohol tends to make any chick look hot if you drink enough. The problem here is this Milf looks like an extraterrestrial being so in real life/real time if I see a chick who looks like that I’m more likely to haul ass or kill it then fuck her.

 

[viclog1]

Still with this dumb landlady bullshit? How in the world can someone play with that setting?

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

Lmao trust me I’ve had my share of grenades in my lifetime, alcohol tends to make any chick look hot if you drink enough. The problem here is this Milf looks like an extraterrestrial being so in real life/real time if I see a chick who looks like that I’m more likely to haul ass or kill it then fuck her.

When I was younger, I was like Captain Kirk. A bit of strange is ALWAYS on the menu.

 

[Lans90]

Maybe I will consider this for the future. But, yes I know what objective beauty is. But I know also that beauty is very subjective. Thanks for you comment, really!

Well, I wish you the best of luck. And what is more important - in spite of criticism, do not lose your spirit.

 

[SilentRunning]

Thanks to all who have expressed constructive criticism!

However, I am shocked at how unobjective, self-serving and insulting most of the comments here are. In a forum where everything because of piracy s available for free and no one owes anyone anything.

If I were Icstor I would understand some bashing, but most comments really rob you of the motivation to develop. I use Daz 3d just 10 months, publish a part of my first project.

I wonder if those guys who bashed also explain to a street artist what art is and how he should paint the picture. I can not understand why in a forum where 3d porn is the focus, so meticulously and meticulously discuss aspects of reality.

Let's see if the shitstorm continues like this. Then we can wait together for the release of Icstor or Dr. Sin.

No matter what you do you will get lots of complaints. You have to just ignore it. A lot of the best games on this site have bad reviews.

Do what you want. If you agree with someone's comments or they lead you in a direction then so be it. But otherwise you have to just tune out the assholes.

It is your art. Your game. You don't owe anyone anything.

 

[Deleted member 1394645]

There is a lot of people that dislike the lower body and are saying things like go study human anatomy. The ironic part is there are a lot of women that have some of the different features that the comments are likely finding disturbing. When I look at the female lead I see two major body features/types that stand out. Slim thick, and a thigh gapper. Go to google and type in "slim thick" into image search and you'll find women that have that wait, hip, ass, thigh combo that seems to balloon out of nowhere. Type in "thigh gap", and you'll find women with all sorts of variations of thigh gaps that at times also have some other pronounced lower body feature(s).

The problem is the combination of the two archetypes (?) are generally not found together. The slim girl will possibly still have a gap but it more like a smaller triangle or not so pronounced heart shape of sorts. People with large thigh gap tend to not be thick, because their thighs fills it in.

That said, I think it is interesting to see the combination of the two types together, and it was actually a point of interest for me to check out the game.

Intersting analysis! Thanks!

 

[Deleted member 1394645]

Still with this dumb landlady bullshit? How in the world can someone play with that setting?

Hi Vic, because it´s necessary for other sites. Here we have an incest-patch instantly for every game. You can find it in the comments before.

 

[House Of Black]

When I was younger, I was like Captain Kirk. A bit of strange is ALWAYS on the menu.

Shagging 2’s and 3’s huh? We’re gonna have this talk sometime soon lol.

But as the game goes the art is an acquired taste, but nothing but the best for that guy.

 

[House Of Black]

Still with this dumb landlady bullshit? How in the world can someone play with that setting?

If you don’t know the routine already, just wait for a patch. I’m sure someone is cooking one up.

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

Shagging 2’s and 3’s huh? We’re gonna have this talk sometime soon lol.

But as the game goes the art is an acquired taste, but nothing but the best for that guy.

I'm sure you do want to know. lol As for the game, it does need some TLC with the writing. As for the renders, well, we've all dealt with worse looking chicks in a game. I could name a few, but, I might piss off some of these fellow pervs. Ahahaha

 

[Klanz]

The story looks delicious, it's a pity that I like girls with huge asses and not one with thick thighs....

 

[Greily]

The best approach with exaggerated physical features is to either go ham with them like Twisted World or not at all. The plot sounds interesting, the visuals besides those hips seem good. Not a fan of the face, but I've seen real ppl with facial features like that so...yeah that last one is just me. Does the term uncanny valley apply to this poor lady?